TS: The List Jealousy (ArHi) - UPDATED (3/11)

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ipkknd_hazel

@ipkknd_hazel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

gosh...that was so beautiful...

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

For part 2:

Sorry for taking this long in commenting.

I don't know if I have told you before but your Arnavs and Khushis are always the closest to their on-screen (un-butchered) selves.

Their jealousy. His fear, anger, agitation. Her comfort eating and comfort zones. His heartfelt confession.

When things are going all hopeless in the show and heartless in the making this story was such a breath of not fresh but the old IPK air. Thanks :)

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Chandana

@chandana.s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Fabulous..

Lolz..Arnav is feeling so Jealouse hearing the name from Khsuhi

Both r trying to make other jealous by taking Bollywood & Hollywood stars name... 😆

Aww,Arnav is so caring & how lovengly made her realise that only she mattered for him & no one else 😳

Well written 👏

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Arshisarunfan

@Arshisarunfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Very well written. Enjoyed reading this TS.

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

loved both the parts! amazing job at writing as always :) love your work!

so cute how both of them tried to make the other jealous, i knew right away when Arnav started using those Hollywood actresses ;)

loved it! can't wait to read another one of your amazing works!

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Treasure

@Treasures

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Yet another awesome story by you! 👏

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

O my my
evn i can hac a huge list lik dis
amazn os

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

My head was actually spinning when i read their respective lists

but the second update was fabulous!!!!

Haha both of trying to make eachother jealouse and both of trying very hard not to image the other with someone else!!! its just fantastic!!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Wow this was an amazing and outstanding two shot,

Written exceptionally well and both parts were brilliant reads.

Awww what started of as a harmless prank turned into intense jealousy,

Bless Khushi she had wrote down film actors and Arnav had done the same when he ran out of names.

Loving Aman to the rescue and telling Arnav the truth regarding what Khushi had done.

Loved the terrace part, both Arnav and Khushi admitting the truth and Arnav's confession was so beautiful.

Loved the two shot xx

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dilectus

@dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Ye kahan tha ab tak?? mujhe q nai mila tha???

chalo ab to mila...

This was what I was expecting to be shown in Serial. Khushi generous thi, par itni bevkoof nai thi jitna last ke days mein usse dikha rae the. She gave back as good as she got, and i so wanted her to make ASR realize in her own way that "meant nothing" keh dene se kaam nai ho jata, realise karwana padta hai, insecurities door akrani padti hai.

Thank you for this K di!!!