TS: The List Jealousy (ArHi) - UPDATED (3/11)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

WOW..loved the part... beautifully written..loved that they talked and solved their problems... awesome

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

2nd part - beautiful...A realization that K was taking celebrities name was too funny; Aman is getting to see different ASR nowadays...

-Sona

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Amazing update. The first half of the 2nd part cracked me up. This TS had seriousness with a pinch of laughter. I loved it. Great job 👏

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awesome...good work..😊

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

loved arnav reeling with jealousy at the thought of khushi's rangeen past, his immense relief that she had been innocent and had just try to make him jealous, his desperate search for her and fear that she might have left him! the pain he felt on seeing her tears and the manner in which he reassured her of her importance in his life -- that she is the first relationship he had, in every sense of the word -- was very moving! the humor interspercing the pain was very well-done! the gentle kiss at the end was a beautiful symbol of their love... I've always felt such talks and simplicity to be the true essence of love rather that grand gestures of candlelights and roses! thank you for making my day!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Loved the secomd part. Was cute how Arnav wanted to get Aman to check on the list of names.Pleased they sorted out their insecurities.

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Omg loved the chapter, it was full of tingly butterflyy feelings, arrgghhh...
Loved the fluffiiness tooo...xxx
Keep it up.. 😉

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

awww i loved the 2nd part

it was too sweet

awesome ts, really enjoyed reading it

take care

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Why dont the CVs show something similar to this? The way he got jealous then the way he asked aman about those names and the relief and that grin his face held realizing that its all a prank of khushi everything was just Beautifully written!

And yes i really loved how he ignored Shit-all! Aww yeah! 😈 😈

And the terrace scene was just Amazing! I loved it Dammit!

I was all time Awwing only! 😳

This was the arshi we all fell in love with.But now they are lost in this shit-all track! :( Their characters are no more the ones we loved.

Lovely one Krani! I enjoyed it so much!