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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks much needed os.. really loved the factbthat sushi spoke up..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Great piece.
I really feel for Khushi in the show. Yes she sometimes does the most annoying and embarassing things but i really feel for her and i can understand the confusion and fear she has in her at the moment. I also feel that Arnav is being insensitive to her feelings.
The fact that Khushi still has a smile on her face and is trying to conceal her worries makes me feel really sad for her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its Awesme & I honestly, want something like this to happen in the show!
Enf is enf ! I cant stand Khushi's ' Bigger heart & comedy ' act anymore & also cant Understand Arnav's cold & cool behaviour towards Sheetal , anymore!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was bloody brilliant do.continue it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reading all these different OS's and ways to find the truth, it makes me wonder if the Cv's r stupid or purposely doing this crap. Why do they always turn a person stupid or smart at the worst times. First Arnav and now Khushi! Wht the hell is wrong with them?!?

Anyways this was good. Hope something like this happened in the show. Can't wait for the next part!! Plz update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really awesome OS!! would really like to see what happens next!!

Sheetal the opportunist!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!i wanted always this to be happened
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME!!! I want her physically smack him coz it s just freaking annoying now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My heart goes out to Khushi.. The girl hides her pain under that smile.. Atleast Arnav shud have known it but he ended up hurting her more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏 i dont have any words for appreciating as they will be less even if i type them down...wow...i really wish something like this happens in the show but i dont think anything like this will happen...this os is very sensible...
you have written it down so nicely...awsum os...i hope you write a second part to it...
am sorry i could not comment on your ffs...i had exams and now am having 2-3 days off...ill comment surely...
superb os...thanks for the pm...continue soon

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