IPKKND OS: Shattered {Part Three - Page 48} - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Nice Os... write more...and also waiting for your FF...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
awesome os dear:)

plzz do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
i think the writer's need to read this OS cause its fantastic👏

they have mocked kushi's character so badly that after watching today's episode i am 😡

Arnav deserves all the anger kushi throws at him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Amazingly written..!!

At least she's pointing out her feelings here..in the show she's keeping it all bottled up within her..

Arnav shouted at her instead of pacifying her n making her feel secure..grr

That sheetal took advantage of the situation n is now going to play her cards..sigh

Khushi leaving n Arnav din stop her also..ok her amma is ill..she really needs a break..n so she left..!!

Cont soon pls..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
I absolutely loved this!! I want this angst to cOme out sooo bad!!

I know I won't get to see this! But I am glad you wrote this! We can always imagine!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
I would like a kushi like the one in your OS for a change...
well written... But yeah... give it a closure...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Bang on OS!!👏
This is the Khushi I want to see dammit!!!

I don't know why she's keeping everything bottled up!! Its high time it comes out..if only to Arnav.

I seriously don't understand how in the world Arnav doesn't pick up on her distress and insecurity whenever Sheetal is around!! Is this the same guy who could recognize the sound of her payals or could feel her presence??

I know the CV's wont go this way for sure...but I wish...

Please do continue!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
OMG!!!!!

I loved it.

Khushi stood up for herself and to hell with everyone else

Arnav is such an A**, he doesn't think, GOD how can he be a Business Tycoon. He is so
dumb

He never takes Khushi feelings into consideration, he alone can be hurt

And Shital, die B*t*h die, God I hate her


I wish in IPKKND Khushi could stand up like this for herself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Totally loved it. Fell sad for both arnav and khushi. Would definitely love if something happens similarly in the show. But i highly doubt it though. Please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Update. :D
Loved the way u described each and every thing. :D
plz do continue in second part.
thnx for the pm. :D

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