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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant part!!! Loving it. hope theres a part two!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

absolutely brilliant hell yeah its time khushi give it to ar he need to open up his blood eyes wondering if he is married to khushi or shit_all the way he is behaving is insensitive or in my language a f*****g a**hole hell he has more time for the id and his mom than his wife and seems to forgot he is married

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update... Please continues soon

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adithyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice shot...plz pm me the next part..

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

just want to hug u for this wish this happen in the show fabulous loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Can I tell u how much I love you for this OS?
This is something I would love to see in the current track,
first I thought it would be nice if Arnav and Khushi had each other but since Arnav is too busy with Sheetal a scene like this is needed
It seems like a separation track is coming up in the OS, probably not the show,
I feel so bad for Khushi especially here, I love how you made her express her feelings and let her emotions pour out
I almost got scared u were going to end the OS open and sad, but when I saw the note saying two or one more part coming up I started smiling 😆 😃
I can't wait, I hope Arnav redeems himself and that too before Sheetal takes his/Khushi's advantage

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Aysha

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Posted: 12 years ago

it would be great for khushi to blow up like she is doing here

it is long overdue

loving the OS anyways and sheetal has come to put her two cents in at the end, looking forward to the next parts

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..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

I want this to happen but Khushi does not have leave

And ugh sheetal

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Yazzy91

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Posted: 12 years ago

Really enjoyed reading this!!
Oh how i wish something like this actually happens in the shoq.
Fabulously written!! Xxx

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Mariam

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was awesome...loved it!!

I want this to happen in the show...Khushi cant be that brave to hide her feelings and insecurities every time...

Arnav need to understand her feelings...I hate when he goes all sweet with Shit-all..

Even though I don't like Khushi's OTT craziness but my heart cries for her..

Very well written...do continue soon..

thanks for the pm...

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