IPKKND OS: Shattered {Part Three - Page 48}

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panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

So well written and so so what is needed...
Tongue in cheek and angst - unbeatable combination
Would love to see Arnav do some serious grovelling
The Rahul vs Ra One comparison was to die for...

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varshini karthik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Wish Kushi was sensible enough to confront him like this rather than playing dumb charades!

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rima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

very nice ans sensitive writing

this is what we need of our sick CVs

pls continue

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SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

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Haw haye sad ending but still I liked it...It acted as an opening for my frustration towards the show...how I wish we get to see something as passionate as this is the show..but Arnav never takes her seriously and it ends up in comedy..blah !! hate you CVs ...

Edited by Sunshine Girl - 12 years ago

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VasantiLad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Loved thius alternative - he really nereds tro see that he is hurting her - today it was so obvious but he had no idea

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Jessica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Why don't I have a clue about this?

Liya you're posting OS's without telling me now?

I'm broozed! 😭

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Loved it, I think we have seen more than what we could handle of Khushi s comedy in such a serious time...we need for her to have more human and serious feelings of hurt, anger and betrayal. Even after knowing what his wife is thinking and how insecure she is feeling...so I loved your story, your version...superb!

Thanks for the pm, waiting eagerly for the next part!