IPKKND OS: Shattered {Part Three - Page 48}

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I wish Khushi is like this...loved it!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow that was intense
and you are right its about time she shouted all her frustrations on him
if he can do it why cant she
after all she too is human right
she too needs a outlet to all that anger frustration and the fear of loosing him and this is what she should do

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

This is exactly what I want to see.
Not a real fight...but a direct conversation.
Communication can do wonders. Only if the CVs could understand that, pigs would fly.
Applause for a brilliantly written OS.
Waiting for the next part.
Thanks for the PM.

Manal <3

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I'm still hoping that she will vent out all her frustration and hurt soon.. in the drama.. to me its building up and for once it will release all the pain she endured.

Loved it.. hope you continue soon with it!!I want to see this.

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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Shay

@shay1990

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

You know what... this is exactly what I've been imagining in my head.

You've done Khushi's character justice with this OS. THIS is what she needs to be like. Everyone is just making a joke out of her, including herself. So i was extremely happy reading this lol

Brilliantly written 😊

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Can you send this to the CVs please?

This is exactly what we all want! This is what Khushi should be doing, enough of hiding the pain behind that smile! You just made my evening with this OS, thank you so much for writing this! Looking forward to the second part :)

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Nice one!

Well planned out and very nicely executed as well. What I loved was how you maintained Khushi's fimipan by adding the KKHH and Ra.One bits, but still made her viewpoint valid. Well done : )

A legitimate reaction from Khushi and I really like what you did here. You should send this to the CV's 😆

Good job!

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@Jhalak29

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Aliya, I m complete in synv, enuf of khushi acting brave n immature to hide fear, they need to execute it better n with more dignity

Loved ur work👏👍🏼keep it up

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

wow that was amazing
would love for khushi to just burst out in the show
continuee soon=]

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Truly spectacular OS. Your characterization of Khushi is just perfect. This is who we met over a year ago, her heart and mind we all know and love. I don't know who is on the screen of IPK. You did the same for ASR. He was clueless what was going on and hopefully now he will see truth about Sheetal.

I truly love this 'Shattered". So much better than what we are watching. I would love to send this to Gul but she don't care about IPK any longer. You did a remarkable job, I look forward to seeing your update. Thank you for pm.