IPKKND OS: Shattered {Part Three - Page 48}

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IPKWA

@IPKWA

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

I absolutely loved it!

I loved how Khushi acted indifferent and stood up for herself!

Seriously I have no words for how well written this was!

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kalikijen

@kalikijen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Loved the part... Thank god you let khushi voice her thoughts and feelings... I think you had it down pat...

I for one have had enough of the aarav arnav simalirities being shown it is ridiculous...

Anyways do continue soon... Pls pm me when you update next...

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

That was bang on..do continue.. high time mr.raizada realized he is hurting her

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

woww that was awesome OS... loved it

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Mansi

@2189mansi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Nice one. Update soon. Evn i wish khushi lets out her feeling soon to arnav instead of using other antic methods.

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

i so agree with you liya in need of this scene all this leaving and all included may be then he would understand the importance of her

amazing OS

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Superb Os!! U just captured evetyn so perfectly! Cudnt have asked for more! Its irritating to see the main lead act as if shes worse than an illiterate! Her character is crazy not dumb! And it irks to see such portrayal and ya just because shes smiling n talkative doesn't mean she doesn't havr ny issues! Gosh u depicted the frustration so well! Do continue asap!
cheers for the pm :)

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Huny

@huny.thebest

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

brilliant OS dear...

for a change i liked khushi's behavior... nobody can be all smiles n cheery all the time with so much happening in their life... there is a limit to everything...

its time the cvs show something similar in the show too...

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Phewww searching fo words. . Uh. . Thats a MASTER PIECE . . Simply very well portrayd i jus wan ths to hapn n the epi . . Bt v knw it wont. . I loved that line realy 'What am i hearing Asr the man who never cared about anyone let sum1 win ? ' tats very gud. .n many lines of khushi. . I jus loved it. . Thanks fo d pm. .do continue. .