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Posted: 19 years ago

Next day…….

Aksh arrives in bhumi's home early morning……..arjun notices this……..

After nearly 1 hour aksh and bhumi along with chintu come out of the house laughing…………..chattering……….this irks arjun…he feels jealous……….and decides to follow bhumi……….

He follows them and reaches a beach…………

As: bhumi chale beach main……..

B: nahi aksh main yahi theek hoon tum aur chintu chaho to jao……..

As: to theek hain hum yahi baith the hain (pointing towards sand filled land)

B: theek hai

Bhumi warns chintu against going into beach……chintu,who was more than eager to go to the beach……….but on bhumi's instructions he falls silent………and makes a face a sits beside playing with sand……..

After a while bhumi and aksh both start listening to music in their walkman

Bhumi and aksh were sitting in a small shade and facing back to sea……..

Chintu took advantage of this and whisked away to enjoy the beach water……..

Arjun who had been following bhumi………..couldnt see bhumi and aksh properly since they were sitting in shade……

All he was able to se that they were both sitting inside a shade………and he could not bear the thought of what they could be doing there……he gritted his teeth……..

Suddenly he heard a voice of someone in the beach……some child was drowning……..bhumi and aksh did not hear this since they were listening music………

Arjun rushed ……dived and caught hold of the child, who was abt to drown, in right time…………..and bought him out……..

He recognized the child as the one who was with bhumi…..patted his face …but the child did not respond…..after a few times the child opened his eyes……….

Everyone around was relieved……….arjun saw bhumi still in the shade……….he was furious……he marched to the shade……..

Similar at that time……..

Bhumi called aksh and gave her earphone to him to make him hear the music……..aksh came near her to hear the music……..

Just then arjun arrived and was furious to see them like that and caught hold of bhumi's hand very tightly ……..

Bhumi was shocked and looked up and was stunned up to see that it was arjun…

B: tum…….(getting up)

But before she could complete ……….arjun drew her forcefully to the beach………..aksh following them…………..

B: (painfully) mujhe dard ho raha hai!!

Arjun angrily not looking at her……but looking straight and gritting his teeth……he took her to the spot where chintu lay and released her arm………

B: ahh (on seeing chintu……) CHINTU!!(kneeling down) she took the child's head to her lap……….😭

Aksh came near her and started patting chintu calling his name……….

Some other ppl who were standing…looked and commented

.....Abhi……..yaad aayi bachche ki……..agar thodi der ho jaati to bache ki jaan hi chali jaati………..kaise log hai..itne chote bache ko akela chod diya……..

Bhumi was looking at them as they narrated

.....Agar yeh bhala insaan nahin hota(pointing at arjun) to najane yeh bacha zinda bhi hota ya nahi……

Bhumi looked at where the lady pointed her finger to see arjun standing over there………….

she felt really happy and aksh got up and bought his hands forward to shake hands with arjun and thank him……….

But arjun ignored him and looked at bhumi……….his eyes were red with anger……bhumi saw this and was frightened …..

And more than that couldn't understand his behaviour………..

A: arrey inhe romance karne se fursat mile to bachche ke bare main sochenge naa….kyun madam………(looking at bhumi)

Bhumi was shocked to hear these words from arjun………She felt like crying………

B: aisi baat nahi hai…..

Interrupting her……

A: to phir kaisi baat hai……..AGAR BACHCHE KO SAMBHAL NAHI SAKTE TO PHIR ZIMMEDARI KYUN LETE HAIN……….hmmmmmm😡😡

Arjun was literally shouting……..and tears flowed down bhumi's cheeks………

A: NAJANEY KAUN BEWAKOOF THEY JISNE BACHCHE KO AAPKE HAATON MAIN DE DIYA…………..😡😡

Aksh interrupting

As: aap galat samaj rahein hai…main aur bhumi……..

Arjun looks towards him and interrupts

A: main aur bhumi kya……………kya huh (coming near to him)….us shade ke peeche baith kar romance kar rahe the…..

B: NAHIN……….NAHI YEH SACH NAHI HAI……..(looking tearfully at arjun and getting up)

B: aaksh chalo yahan se……….(wiping off her tears………..angriliy….looking at aksh)

Aksh and bhumi leave taking chintu……….arjun is left behind……..ppl in the beach disperse talking randomly abt the incident………

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Posted: 19 years ago
erm .....a bit long part.....pls read and respond
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Posted: 19 years ago
Had read it but forgotten to respond Sia.....going good... 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry i forgot to respond sia,gr8 going 👏 . i read the whole of ur ff in one go and i really loved it.continue soon, must say u r really fast at updating. u r doing a good job keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: parvatisrikant

Had read it but forgotten to respond Sia.....going good... 👏 👏

thanks a lot dear😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti_saarrthi

sorry i forgot to respond sia,gr8 going 👏 . i read the whole of ur ff in one go and i really loved it.continue soon, must say u r really fast at updating. u r doing a good job keep it up 👍🏼

thats so sweet of u dear......and really happy that u liked the fan fic😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

very good part sia dear !!!
Actually itna jyada coincidenc ho rha tha aksh n bhoomi ka ki arjun to gussa hoyega hi....
very nice part 👏
waiting to c how the issue is resolved
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Posted: 19 years ago
where is the update iam waiting to know whats further pppppplllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Its night………

Arjun slowly remembers the incident and bhumi's face……..face filled with tears come in front of him………..

He is very angry with what happned but also feels very sad and and sudden urge to see bhumi fills him…..

Thinking that whether will she talk to him……he finally musters up courage and goes to see bhumi….

He hesistantly enters her house and rings the door bell and he sees bhumi opening the door……..

Bhumi is shocked to find him……..and tears again flow down her cheeks……her eyes full red as if she had been crying the whole day……..

B: yahan kyun aaye hain…?😡

A: who main us bachche ko dekhne ke liye aaya tha……..wo ab kaisa hai.

B: chintu….bilkul theek hai……..aapko uski fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi……..(trying to balance her voice)

A: (his voice curt) agar aap uska utna hi khayal rakhti to aaj who is halat main nahi hota……..agar main wahan nahi hota to…

Bhumi suprisedly looks at him… …but doesn't say anything……..she is still crying

Arjun sighs and continues:

A: see bhavri……

B: nahin …….. mera naam bhumi hai……..

Arjun is a bit shocked……..

B: theek hai aapne use bachaya hai(wiping her tears) to jakar mil lijiye…par who so raha…….(gives him the way to move in)………she goes away and stands on the other side

Points him the room of chintu…..

He sees the child and while returning sees bhumi who is standing near a window and crying very much…………..

He goes near her and touches her arms….

A: bhavri……

B: (removes his hand) aapne chintu ko mil liye ………to jaa sakte hain……..(angry)😡

Arjun comes closer to bhumi and holds and turns her to face him……but she looks away………

A: bhavri……..main janta hoon tum mujse naaraz ho…..par socho agar us bache ko kuch ho jata………to log tumhe hi bura bhala kehte mujhe nahi………..

bhavri tumhe us bache ko akele chodkar nahi jana chahiye tha…..woh chota bachcha hai………use samaj nahi hai par tumhe to hai na……..hmm

Holding her arms tightly……

Bhumi sees point in his words and looks at him………

A: bahvri mujhe galat mat samajo………main to bas tumhari galti samjhana chahta tha tumhe………aur kuch nahi…..

B: sach aur kuch bhi nahi……..

Arjun looks a bit confusedly at her

B: to phir tumne yeh kyun kaha ki main aksh ke saath romance kar rahi hoon………😕

A: (gets a bit annoyed on hearing aksh's name) isiliye kyunki tum wohi kar rahi thi…..(removing his hands from her shoulders…….his voice stern)

Bhumi is shocked………

B: tum aise soch bhi kaise sakte ho ki main……aksh ke saath…..woh sirf mera ek achcha dost hai aur tum………mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki tum aisa soch sakte ho(disgustingly)

A: (looking at her sharply) soch sakta hoon bhavri…..bilkul soch sakta hoon….agar tum din raat usi ke saath rahogi……yeh tak bhul kar ki main kab aa raha hoon…..main aisa soch sakta hoon….😡

Continuing………

A: (curtly) tum janti ho main wahan tumhe pal pal miss kiya karta tha………..aur tum ho ki………tumne to mujhe yaad tak nahi kiya hoga……kyun yaad karogi…company dene ke liye tumhara dost jo tha yahaan par………

.tumne to ye bhi nahi socha ki arjun wapas aaya hoga ki nahi………frusta jo nahi thi……

Bhumi listenes all this quitely

B: sach kaha tumne……..main aksh se saath bahar gaayi kyunki chintu chahta tha….main nahi…..(almost screaming and looking in his eyes with anger)….lekin main jaha bhi thi……tumhe hi yaad karti thi…….raat ko tumhare wajah se so nahi paati thi….

Breaking down………

B: aur tum kehte ho ki maine tumhara intezaar nahi kiya……….pal pal yehi sochti ke tum kab wapas aaoge…..sirf darwaze par nazare tikaye baithi thi!!....aur tum…….😭😭

Crying she stops speakin…….

Arjun sees the sincerity in her eyes and feels sorry for what he did and instantly holds her in his arms tightly …and she goes on crying in his arms……..

After a while arjun releases his arms only to cup bhumi's face

He looks at her lovely and bhumi looks at him and arjun strokes a finger to wipe of the tear still rolling down her eyes………L

Looks lovely and smiles ……..bhumi's heart melts seeing his smile and she stares at him forgetting everything……..😳

Arjun comes near to kiss her forehead……he kisses her forehead ……….then he kisses her eyes…bhumi closes her eyes and then…..arjun looks at her again lovely and bhumi opens her eyes and gets lost in his eyes……..

A: bhavri main tumhe kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakta hoon!! Mujhe achcha nahi lagta….(possessively)

Bhumi is silent…….

A: bhavri I missed you a lot………(coming a bit closer to her)

They keep looking at each other……

After a moment arjun's gaze slowly shifts towards her lips….. his expression now changed from lovely to passionate ……he looks at her lips …bhumi notices this……….

He slowly proceeds to her lips……..bhumi shuts her eyes and is quiet as if allowing him……….he comes very close to her lips ……….and is about to kiss her……

When ………suddenly phone rings and they both are bought back to reality ………..

they are both shocked and look at each for a second and then arjun releases bhumi and bhumi goes to pick up the phone and arjun is a bit embaraased ……

bhumi is a bit shaken up and she goes to pick up the phone…..

Its keshav on the line………

K: arrey bhumi………kaisi hai

B: bhaiyya aap(nervous by the incident that happened just now)main……who

K: kya hua bhumi………itni pareshan kyun……….

B: nahi bahiyyaa(trying to conceal her nervousness)aisa kuch nahi……..aap kaise hai……..aur kaam kaise chal raha hai…..

K: main bilkul theek hoon……….tu to theek hai na……… (Concernedly)

B: haan

K: achcha……… maine bahut dino se phone nahi kiya …..isiliye……achcha chalo rakhta hoon main…..apna khayal rakna…..

B: hmm..

Bhumi keeps the phone down and feels embarrassed to go into other room where arjun was standing……

A: (standing near the window facing outside……..turns back on hearing her paayal's voice to face her) bhaiyya ka phone tha……..

B: hmm…

A: who……bhavri mujhe chalna chahiye …bahut raat ho gayi hai.tum apna khayal rakhna.Good night.(smiling)

Bhumi doesn't say anything and retires to her bed…..and remembers the incident just happened……..she starts blushing………when she thinks of how she felt in his arms and then how he was about to kiss her………..she blushes and digs her face in her pillow……….

Thinks to herself………

Kuch rishte anjane mein ho jate hai,
pehle dil phir zindagi se jud jate hain,
kehte hai uss daur ko PYAR,
jisme dil se dil na jaane kab mil jate hai

She again blushes;…………she falls asleep……

Arjun on the other hand…….also is not able to sleep properly……..he keeps tossing on the bed……….and is very happy……..

Thinking what happened between them……he was almost there to kiss her……he feels like going to her ……again….and again………

bahare rangin lagti hai
yaad kisi ki waqt bewaqt satati hai
Dil me ajeeb si tadap hai
aur ye kaisi bechaini hai
shayad yehi pyar ka asar hai

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Posted: 19 years ago
erm...... a bit long part pls read 😊

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