FAN FIC - Page 11

Guess I'm the first person to respond....wonderful episode... 👏

Originally posted by: sweet_mita

ya tuhina.ab main is forum ki bengali teacher hoon.aur dekho sia ne zaldi sikh hi liya.👏 👏

ab teacher itni achchi hai......to student to jaldi sekhega hi naa......😉😊

yaar koi to respond karo......pls read and respond................. 😭

sia... all i hav for that is...
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that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful......... n soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic...
i'm like total bowled over.........
always imagined suraj in that way... but never any1 put it into words soooooooo beautifully......
its looovely...lovelyyyyyyyyyyy.....
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its really too good yaar... too lovely...too lovely...
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Originally posted by: tunna

sia... all i hav for that is...
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that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful......... n soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic...
i'm like total bowled over.........
always imagined suraj in that way... but never any1 put it into words soooooooo beautifully......
its looovely...lovelyyyyyyyyyyy.....
👏

thanks dear for such sweet and beautiful compliments.......

Originally posted by: parvatisrikant

Guess I'm the first person to respond....wonderful episode... 👏

thanks a lot dear😊

exellent work sia.you are a genius.i think you should become the scriptwriter of SAARRTHI so we will always get good news and not disappointing ones as we are getting nowadays.continue you fan fiction soon.

Originally posted by: stgs

exellent work sia.you are a genius.i think you should become the scriptwriter of SAARRTHI so we will always get good news and not disappointing ones as we are getting nowadays.continue you fan fiction soon.

thanks a lot dear😊....par main aur script writer.......

thanks a lot..........😊

In nainital……………..

Arjun leaves for delhi and bhumi is left alone……even priya was going out of town for some days……..she felt really alone……..suddenly the door bell rang

B: arrey priya tum….tum to aaj bahar

Priya enters with a small child ……….bhumi looks at the child and says

B: arrey chintu kaiso ho??

C: theek hoon didi

B: priyaa……….

P:who main aaj bahar jaa rahi hoon for somedays aur bhaiyya bhabhi bhi nahi hain aur yeh (seeing chintu) bhi yahi

hai………..main ise akela kaise chhod doon………

to main soch rahi thi ki kyat um iska khayal rakh paoogi……….sirf kuch dino ke liye….plzzzzzz

B: (smiles and draws chintu towards herself) achcha theek hai theek hai baba…..

P: chintu………….didi ko pareshan mat karna………..main chalti hoon

Priya leaves and bhumi takes the child in and starts palying with it then chintu says:

C: didi aaj kyun na hum bahar chale kahi ghoomne………

B:(thinking) hmmm idea bura nahi hai(smiles)………main tayar ho jati hoon phir chalte hain……….theek hai

Chintu is delighted and shouts and bhumi goes in

They both go out………….in the way……when bhumi is standing with chintu saying something…… a man approaches and keeps his hand on bhumi's hand……..

Bhumi suprisedly looks back………and is delighted to see him

B: arrey aksh!!!!

{ now AKSH is bhumi's school friend………..he had gone abroad for sometime and has returned now……….he is a very good guy and bhumi and he are very good friends………}

Aksh(As): Hey bhumi……..tum yahan……..

B: haa who chintu ko bahar ghoomane layi thi……….

Aksh looks at chintu and smiles

Bhumi continues……

B: chintu priya ka bhatija hai……….woh filhal shehar se bahar hai……isiliye iski zimmedari mujhpar hai……..

As: oh…….. aur keshav bhaiyya kaise hai………

B: theek hai………filhal who bhi sheher se bahar hai………who business ke silsilay main gaye huye hai……..(smiles)

As: oh………yaani kit tum akeli ho………

B: hmmm……..yun hi smamj lo……….

As: achcha to bhumi………..kal outing ka plan banaye……to kaise rahega……..

Thinking to herself that if she goes on such outing probably she will be distracted from arjun's thoughts

B: bahut achcha rahega……….par tum London se wapas kab aaye……..

As: chalo…….. batata hoon

Bhumi spents the whole day with aksh ….they spend the day…………..laughing……. chattering on………

By the time bhumi comes to her room she becomes too tired so she falls asleep………..