FAN FIC - Page 12

that was a good foundtaion for a misunderstanding later.. hmmmmmmmmm.. nice going in head..n story..abt to take twists n turns..ig uess 😉
oh..n nice part as ussual👏

Next day in nainital………..

Bhumi keeps on remembering arjun……she is nnot able to do anything…….her thoughts keeps distracting to arjun's thoughts……..she looks at his house…….

She says…….

har sham se tera izhaar kiya karti hu,
har khwab mein tera didar kiya karti hu,
mohtaj hi to hu mein teri,
jo har waqt tere milne ka intzaar kiya karti hu.

Meanwhile there in delhi……..

Arjun is a bit tensed......

A: WHAT!! Aap kehna chahte hain ke aapne ab tak kaam nahi finish nahi kiya!! What the hell!!😡

He hungs the phone………sighs

A: (to himself) iska matlab mujhe aur ek din lag jaayega…….ye kya ho raha hai……main to bhavri ke bina ek pal bhi nahi reh paa raha hoon……I feel so lonely w/o her……

Running a hand through his hairs......

A: Gosh!! I cant behave like this.... I will go mad like this......Bhavri is affecting me so much......why?

Suddenly a thought comes in to his mind and he smiles

Jab se tumhe dekha tumhara deewana bangaya,
Tumhari muskurahat ne hame madhosh kardiya,
Tumko bhi pata na chala, kaise humne tumhara dil churaliya...

A: bhavri ab raha nahi jaata……main humare is rishte ko aage le jaana chahta hoon……..😳😃

Meanwhile in nainital……..

Next morning bhumi gets up and thinks

B:arrey aaj to arjun wapas aa jayega……(smiles and then blushes)😃

Bhumi quickly goes down and gets ready and awakes chintu……….just then she hears the door bell ringing…………

She rushes to the door to open it thinking it would be arjun…..she opens it with a smile …………..but soon her smile fades……….

As: hi bhumi!!!!!

B: aksh tum

As: (entering the house)arrey bhai mujhe dekhkar to tumhare chehre ki hasi aise udi jaise tumne mujhe nahi………….kisi bhoot ko dekha ho………..

B: nahin who………

Just then chintu arrives:

C: hey bhaiyya aap and goes to play with aksh

Bhumi looks towards her gate disappointedly………….

Throughout the whole day bhumi looks lost and keeps looking at the door

Is kadar intezaar karna padega aapka,
pata na tha
Is kadar bekarar hona padega,
pata na tha
Is kadar yaad aayegi aapki,
pata na tha
kyon guzarata hai sara din aapki yaad mey
pata hai aapko ?
kyon bekrar ho jaati hun mai bin tumhare
pata hai aapko ?
Kyon yaad aati hai aapki har pal
pata hai aapko ?
Ye dooriya ab sahi jaati nahi
chale aao, chale aao
chale aao, chale aao

………aksh notices this ……………………..

As: arrey bhumi…………..wahan kya dekh rahi ho bar bar……waiting for someone

B: (startled) nahin……….nahin to(gets up and goes away from them)

As: (thinks to himself something and says) achcha to chalo bahar chalte hai

B: abhi!!!!!!!!

C: (delightedly) yeeee

As: haan isi waqt!!!!!(holds her arms and draws her towards them) ………………chalo…..

B: arrey par is waqt kaise main( again looking towards door and thinking that arjun might show up any time)

C: plz didi chaliye………..mujhe yahan bahut bor ho raha hai

Bhumi looks at the child's face (whose making a expression as if he would not be able to live if he doesn't go out)…..smiles and agrees to their plan……….

Just when bhumi and aksh are leaving and sitting in the car……….Arjun comes hoping that bhumi would have missed him the same way as he had…………….

He was really excited at the thought that finally after 2 days he will meet her again

For him the 2 days were never so longer......He even finished the work earlier to get to her....... soon as soon as possible

But he is stunned to see bhumi happily enjoying herself with a child and a man……a MAN………….

He feels very irritated seeing bhumi so close to that man……….

Bhumi doesn't notice arjun and goes away laughing with aksh…………….

Arjun is left behind……………….he feels very angry and storms in to in his house………

Arjun feels very irritated and is not able to relax:

A: (to himself) who kaun hai jisse bhavri..itne pyaar se baatein kar rahi thi…….😡

Thinks for a while

A: ofo……..tu bhi naaa arjun……… aise bhi to ho sakta hai ki who sirf bhavri ka koi dost ho….par bhavri ko pata tha na ki main aaj aane wala hoon…..to use us aadmi ke saath jaane ki kya zaroorat thi……….

who mera intezaar nahi kar kar sakti thi( a possessive tone showing up)

Still irritated

A: who mujhe yaad nahi karti thi……maine in do dino mein kitna miss kiya use aur aaj aate hi usi ke saath poora din bitana chahta tha……….

par who hai ki us aadmi ke saath bahar chali gayi………….aisa kyun kiya bhavri tumne

Meanwhile, Bhumi was not at all enjoying the trip with aksh……….

Her attention went on shifting on arjun…..thinking that would he have come by now……..had he come…… will he search her??..........

She wanted to desperately run back to home to see whether arjun has arrived…………but was helpless as she could not go alone leaving aksh and chintu….

It was night…bhumi did not return and arjun started worrying……he did not eat his food hoping that he would eat it with bhumi……

Then he suddenly saw a car coming and he was relieved to see bhumi……..but next moment when he saw aksh his expression changed to cold…..

As: bhumi……..it was a nice trip

C yeh……..didi…

B: (smiling ) haan aksh……aur itna khana khane ke baad to mera stomach itna full ho gaya hai ki agar main paani bhi piyungi to mera stomach fath jayega(laughing)😃

Arjun hears this and feels sad……that bhumi had the dinner w/o him whereas he was still waiting for her to return………

He couldnt see her like this ........she was so unconcerned about him and enjoyed with that man

He goes in with anger in his eyes and switches off the light……and goes to bed……😡

Bhumi sees off aksh and looks towards arjun's house and sees the lights are off and assumes that arjun has not arrived yet………

She goes off ………changes and falls asleep………

erm.....a bit long part pls read

Originally posted by: stgs

good work continue soon.

thanks dear....😊

Originally posted by: tunna

that was a good foundtaion for a misunderstanding later.. hmmmmmmmmm.. nice going in head..n story..abt to take twists n turns..ig uess 😉
oh..n nice part as ussual👏

yep!! you are rite.....

very very good part yaar!!!👏

arjun na... kabhi nahi sudherega!! hamesha mr.shaki no1

nice one sia 👏 .but ye arjun.............. 😡

Originally posted by: tunna

very very good part yaar!!!👏

arjun na... kabhi nahi sudherega!! hamesha mr.shaki no1

yep!! he wont!!😆

Originally posted by: parvatisrikant

Nice work Sia..... 👏

thanks a lot dear😊

Originally posted by: sweet_mita

nice one sia 👏 .but ye arjun.............. 😡

thanks dear😊