FAN FIC - Page 15

nice sia pls. post the next part soon

nice part sia, i could imagine the scene. post the next part soon.

very very very good written sia 👏
this arjun na... hamesha gussa nakpe baitha ke rakhta hai.. aise kaise chalega... !!!!!!!!! 😡

Now suraj and mansvi are in Goa ……they are on a vacation……

They both go out for a stroll in a beach……..

Suraj is wearing a black t-shirt and a simple jeans……mansvi too is wearing a simple jeans and a white sleeveless kurti…….

They are walking hand in hand…….

Su: mansvi ab to khush ho naa……

Mv: haan suraj…….par main khushi ko akele chod kar nahi aana chahti thi….

Su: mansvi waha mama hai……baisaa hai…..tum kyon fikr karti ho!!

Mv: hmm…..(places her head on his arms)

Mv: wiase suraj……today the air is so romantic naa.....😳

Su: (not noticing her)hmm

Mv: wiase suraj……how am I looking today??

Su:hmm…..

Mansvi is a bit confused ……why is he not responding properly……

She looks up……only to find suraj……looking on the other side…..there are some foreign girls……..

He was looking at them …….infact he was glued to them……those girls were having fun in bikinis……this only aggravated mansavi's fury…….

One of the girls from them gave a flying kiss to suraj……he was stunned….but also smiled…….then slowly looked back at mansvi…….\

Mansvi who was looking at him with full anger…….suraj sees this and gets worried……

Su: mansvi!!

She shrugs off his arm😡

Mv: baat mat karo mujhse…….

She leaves from there……..suraj goes behind her…….

Su: arre mansvi meri baat to suno…..arre

Just then a sexy foreign girl comes and holds suraj from back……and suraj is stunned………

He looks back……..even mansvi sees them………..

Su: hey what are you doing??(to that girl)😕

Suraj turns back at mansvi and sees that mansvi is looking towards them….

Mansvi anger rises still further……and she storms out from there…….

Suraj still desperately trying to get out of the girl's clutches……..

Su: arre….leave me please……

The foreigner: hey you are so sexy!! I wont leave u ever……come to me naa(she starts kissing his back)😆😳

Suraj is shocked……he couldn't believe what the girl is doing…….

Su: WHAT THE HELLL!!!!PLS LEAVE……

Some how he manages to break free of her and goes back in to their room……

In the room…….mansvi is still burning with rage…….

Mv: Ye suraj samjhhta kya hai……isiliye mujhe yaha laya tha…….

She sits down on the bed………

Mv: mujhe nahi pata tha……mera pati aisa hai…….ek firangi larki ke saath…..chi chi……..

She starts sobbing…….

Mv: suraj…..nahi main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karoongi!!

Just then suraj enters and hears all these……..

Mansvi on seeing suraj gets even more annoyed and turns her back on him…..

Su: mansvi I am sorry…….who larki kaun hai main nahi jaanta(has a innocent look on his face)

Mv: haan haan mujhse to yehi kahoge……..

Su: belive me …….main tumse jhooth nahi bol raha hoon…..Aur mansvi tum to mujhe jaanti ho naa…..

Mv: main bbhi yahi samjhti thi…..par ……par……(crying) tumne mujhe galat sabit kar diya……

Suraj places his hand over her shoulders which she shrugs off……

Mv: haath mat lagao mujhe……

Su: tumhe nahi touch karoonga to kise karoonga(smiling)hmm……

Mv: hai naa who foreigner…….(saying she gets up)

Suraj sighs and falls silent for a moment…….after a while he goes to her…..

Su: agar kisi firangi se hi pyaar karma hota to apna dil aapko kabhi nahi dete…..

Mv: ye sab sirf kehne ki baatein hai……tumhe meri koi parwah nahi hai……

Suraj smiles and says………..

Khamosh raat ke pehlu me sitare nahi hote,
In rukhi aankho me rangin nazare na hote.
Hum bhi na karte parwah,
agar aap itne pyare na hote.

Mansvi smiles slightly on hearing this……

Su: hmm…..chaliye aap hasi to sahi…

Mv: bas bas ye sher-o-shayri karke mujhe manane ki koshish na Karen……is baar main nahi manoongi…….

Su: phir to achcha hai naa

Mv: who kyon……

Suraj turns her to face him……..

Su: kyonki mansvi jee…..pyaar main yahi to maza hai……tum rooth the raho…..hum appko manate rahenge….hmm…….

Mansvi smiles……..They both hug…….

Mv: ab aagey se us larki ki taraf dekha naa.......(showing him finger).........

Su: array nahi nahi us larki ko dekhne ki saza who larki khud mujhe dekh chuki hai

Remembers how that girl had tried to force herself on him…….

Mv: huh??

Su: nahi …….kuch nahi…….

Next night…..

Mansvi and suraj are invited by their hotel manager to a party hosted by the hotel on the occasion of the hotel's 3^rd anniversary…….

So they go for the party………..Its night…….but its coulorful inside the party room…….baloons spread all over…..people are dancing with a mask on……..its a typical goan type environment…….with goan folk dances ….

Suraj and mansvi too take masks……and proceed toward the dancing floor……

Mansvi wears her mask and puts her arm around his neck and he puts his arm around her waist …….brings her closer and they start dancing….

Now some one is watching them from distance…..and the person smiles……

After two rounds of dancing…….

Mv: suraj I am tired can we go and rest a bit…..

Su: sure chalo……

They both go and find a quiet place …….

Su: mansvi tum yahi baitho main tumhare liye juice laata hoon……

Mv: (smiles) theek hai…….

The ballroom was quite crowded and the bar counter and juice was served on the opposite side of where mansvi was sitting……..

Suraj went there to order for a juice and a beer…..But he could no longer see mansvii as the crowd is too much…….

Now in the place where mansvi was sitting…….a girl with a mask….came ahead…….and intentionally dropped her glass of juice in front of mansvi……

Mansvi was stunned……….the girl pretended to be sorry

Girl: Oh I am really sorry mam….if you could please forgive me…..

Mv: No its okay……….(rubbing off stain in the dress)

Girl: mam the washroom is there…….(pointing at the washroom)

Mv: thanks(smiling)

Mansvi proceeds towards the washroom…..She goes inside and removes her mask and starts removing the stain…….

The girl too moves in behind her……..mansvi doesn't notice her…..the girl slowly whisks away taking mansvi's mask and slowly leaves the place…….

Suraj is waiting for the order……suddenly the lights go off and only slight lighs are on……..

The romantic soft violin sounds fill the air……..suddenly a hand falls on suraj's shulder…….

He looks back and finds a lady……since the light was not much……he was not able to see her properly…..

But he recognized the mask…….

Su: mansvi tum yaha??

The lady doesn't speak anything…….she just pulls her with him to the dance floor…..

Su: mansvi ye kya kar rahi ho……..humara drink order kiya hai……who to le le….

But she doesn't listen……just pulls him away to the dance floor and starts dancing with him……..

Suraj feels a bit confused…….

Su: mansvi what happened??tum iss tarah……

She doesn't say anything…….

Su: mansvi kuch kaho naa……..why you are not saying anything……

The girl still doesn't speak anything……suddenly the girl puts her finger on his mouth……

Then the girl ……tightens his hand on her waist…..she comes really close to him……..

Now this was so unlike mansvi…….There was some confusion……..

Mansvi on the other hand is searching for suraj……its dark and suraj is not there at the bar counter…….She is worried……

When the girl further tries to come near…….Suraj breaks free of her…….And removes her mask…….

Su: you are not my wife……

The girl: Yeah!! But I know I am more sexy then her……don't you think so……

Suraj recognizes her as the same girl who had forced herself on him on the beach……..on the other day………

Su: you how dare you!! Leave me…….

He breaks free of her……..and goes away from her and goes searching mansvi………

He finds her…….

Su: mansvi!!!

Mansvi heaves a ssigh of relief as she finds him…………they hug…..

Mv: kaha chale gaye the suraj………

Su: who main(narrates the whole story)

Mv: who larkki phir see……

Su: mansvi chalo yahan se…..

Mansvi laughs……….

Mv: aur dekho in firangi larkiyon ko hmm……..

Suraj claps his both hands( as in namaste form) and says

Su: array baba sorry ab zindagi main galti se bhi ye galti nahi hogi……….

Mv: (laughs) achcha chalo

They both come to their rooms………..

Su: uff....badi chipkoo larki thi…….fevicol ki tarha……

Mansvi laughs…….

Suraj looks at her………and then says……

Su: waise uss larki ki ek baat to galat thi……

Mv: who kyat tha….

Su: uska kehna ki who meri biwi se zyaada sexy hai!!

Mv: what!!

Su: hmm(nodding his head) ab ye to galat hai……ab tum bhi swim suit main aaogi to use pata chalega ke meri patni usse bhi zyaada sexy hai…….

Mv: suraj!!!!!!

Su: what!! Sahi to keh raha hoon……ab (holding her) tumhara figure abhi bhi waisa hi hai jaise pehle tha(nuzzling her ear)…..hain naa….use kya pata

She keeps her finger on his lips

Mv: tum bahut shararati ho rahe ho haan iss vacation main aane ke baad……

Su: ab kya Karen…..aap jaisi haseena hai saamne to mann to shararat karega hi

They laugh and hug each other…….

Next morning they leave for Mumbai……

erm a bit long part pls read........

Originally posted by: meghaparti

nice sia pls. post the next part soon

thanx dear and just updated😊

Originally posted by: preeti_saarrthi

nice part sia, i could imagine the scene. post the next part soon.

thanx a lot

Originally posted by: tunna

very very very good written sia 👏
this arjun na... hamesha gussa nakpe baitha ke rakhta hai.. aise kaise chalega... !!!!!!!!! 😡

thanx dear.......

very cute one sia 😛 . update ur other ff too

In nainital

Next 5-10 days just pass ……arjun gets busy with his work and meets bhumi only in the night during dinner……As days progress both feel that there is more between them than just attraction…….

The next day…………….

Its quite a rainy day……and and its raining very heavily………arjun as usual finishes his work and returns to bhumi's home for dinner……….

It becomes really difficult for arjun to drive home sincee its raining like anything……..the roads are blocked and and arjun's car also breaks down and he somehow reaches bhumi's home………

Meanwhile bhumi is tensed since arjun has not yet shown up……..and its pouring heavily……..

Just then she hears the sound of a door bell….and she opens it

B: arre arjun itni der kyun hui………aur tum itne beegh kaise gaye??

Arjun gets annoyed at her question, since it was too obvious that it was raining so he was late, and looks up at her and smiles………

A: who bhavri……..main ghoomne chala gaya tha………😆

B: achcha?

A: (annoyed) kya achcha ……dekh nahi rahi ho bahar itni baarish ho rahi hai….ab baarish main insaan beegega nahi kya……..tum bhi naa bhavri..hadh karti ho…..

A: ab mujhe bahar hi rakh kar marne ka irada hai ya phir andar bulaogi……..

B: oh…I am sorry

A: Hmm….sorry!!

B: arrey itne gussa kyun ho rahe ho!!

A: ab gussa dilane wali baat karogi to gussa karoonga hi naa

B: achcha baba………tum sar paunch lo ……..(quicly gives him a towel)

He looks at her....suddenly his anger goes and has a smile on his face

He doesn't take the towel but rather sits down in the chair in front of her…..indicating her to dry his hair

Bhumi smiles at this and dries his hair………and asks him abt the car and he narrates the story……

Arjun suddenly notices something and becomes tensed…..he is not able to find his house keys and his cook is on leave……..

A: OMG!!

B: (drying his hairs) hmm…kya huwa

A: omg!! Bhavri mere ghar ke keys……mere paas nahi hai…..

B: phir kahan hai

A: I don't know I did not keep them……(suddenly stops)…….

B: what haapened……..

A: oh! No bhavri main apni ghar ke keys to office main hi bhool gaya ……

B: ab arjun…tum office jaakar keys le aao

A: paagal ho gayi ho kya….itni baarish ho rahi hai……….roads sab block ho chukka hai

B: to tum yahan reh lo

A: yahan????

B: haan……..rukho main tumhe bhaiiya ke kuch kapde deti hoon….tum unhe pehen lo

Goes to bring some clothes for him……..

A: lekin bhavri main kaise……..

B: uffo……baatein baad main……khana thanda ho jaayega.....i am really hungry

A: (smiles) accha chalo....main change karke aata hoon.....

They both proceed towards dining

Arjun changes in to white kurta….and comes to eat food

A:hmm(smelling the food) baarish main garam garam khana(rubbing his palms........ sits down)

B: (laughing) baitho aur khana khao

A: (looking at her ) waise bhavri tum roz mere isiliye isi tarah khana banati rahogi ???

B: hmm(surprised looks up)

A: maine poocha……(suddenly due to heavy winds windows start to open and the winds come in blowing the curtains) arre......ye......

Bhumi goes to close the window……..but the winds are really blowing fast so arjun goes to help her close the windows….

He goes behind her and tries to close the windows ….but due to the winds bhumi's hair comes on arjun's face and chest.

But she doesn't notice it……arjun looks at her….struggling to

close the window….

He spreads the arms and tries to closes the window and in the process he completely encloses bhumi in his arms unknowingly…..his attention just on closing the window……..but bhumi feels shy 😳😳and looks up….aarjun too looks down after closing the window😳

A: bhavri u have very beautiful hairs……

B: thanks……(feeling shy)😳

A: leave them always open naa……

B: do u want me to do so

A: (touching her hairs) yes!

Both look at each other and then arjun looks at the food and then at her

A: (whispers) who..khana thandha ho jaayega……

Arjun goes from there to the table leaving a blushing bhumi behind………….

Both sit down in the table and bhumi serves the food….while eating food

Bhumi suddenly asks him

B: Arjun tumhe kaisi patni chahiye

A: (smiles)tum kyun pooch rahi ho😉hmm (teasing)

B: yunhi……….batao naa

A: (smiles ) hmm theek hai……..suno

Wife….wife….wife……

5'6" jiski height ho,

Jeans jiski tight ho

Chehra jiska bright ho,

Umar 22-27 ho

Aisi apni wife ho

Sadak par sab kahe kya cute ho

Bheed main sab kahe side ho,side ho

Bambai,delhi ya gujrat ki paidaish ho,

Saas ki seva jiski khawish ho

Aisi apni wife ho

Parosi jab baat kare to haath main knife ho

Dinner key time candle light light ho

Hum me tu me kabhi na koi fight ho

Milane ke baad dil delight ho

Aisii apni wife ho

Kaaash yeh concept .0001 percent bhi right ho

Agar aisi apni wife hoo..

To kya hasin life ho

Har kisi ki yahi farmaish ho

Kkudrat ki bhi yahi aazmaish ho

Khudha ke software main bhi bug ki gunjaayish ho

Ay kaash, kahin to ek aisi paidaish ho

Aisi apni wife ho

B: (laughing) achcha !! tumhe aisi patni chahiye……….

Arjun looks at bhumi and smiles seeing her laughing

And they finish dinner……..

After the dinner……

A: main bahut thak gaya hoon bhavri……mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai……

B: arjun tum bhaiiya ke kamre main so jaao…..main tumhare liye chaddar laati hoon…bahar bahut thand hai naa

She takes him to keshav's room…..on reaching the room arjun sees keshav's photo……

B: main tu….

Interrupting bhumi

A: ye tumhare bhaiyya hain (standing near keshav's photo then looking at bhumi)

B: (looks at the photo) hmm!!

She leaves to bring him chaddar and he lays down on the bed thinking abt how bhumi had blushed in his arms just now……….the thought brings a smile on his face and he falls asleep……

Bhumi returns to find that arjun's already asleep….

B: arjun..woh (she stops seeing him asleep)…..(slowly) so gaya……..(bends and puts the chaddar on him)

Then slowly gets up and sits in the couch beside…….and keeps looking at him……

Thinking to herself that how handsome he looks even in sleep……..and then blushing….

Slowly looking at him and remembering that night when arjun was abt to kiss her….

She gets up…..goes close to arjun and ruffles his hair on forehead and

B: (slowly)Good night!!

And leaves………

Bhumi too falls asleep………………………..