Unconditional Love: SS:Delhi-Mumbai-Delhi END/pg15

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This part of the SS is dedicated to my loveliest Arshian sister Shraddha (Shraddhad).. She is also crazy as me 😆
Thanx Ranjana aka .Lovegood. for the banner. This part is also dedicated to her.
Love you Shrads and Ranju 🤗


SS: Delhi-Mumbai-Delhi


"Abe kiti run rahile?"(How many runs more?) "last ball 2 runs" "Houn jail. Houn jail! Jinklo aapan"(Thats easy! We have won the match already) He got ready to stroke the ball. The bowler rubbed the ball on his pant and stepped forward. He took his hand back, turned it and threw a yorker.

The batsman took his bat back and got ready to stroke it for a four. The ball came faster than anything. Of course he was the best bowler in their team. But the batsman wasn't less. He looked at ball and moved his bat to the earth to stroke for a four.

But...he felt someone tapping his right shoulder. He turned to look at the owner of the hand which was on his shoulder just a second ago. The ball passed through the gap between the bat and his left leg and... it was a Stump-out! "Hureeeyyy!!!" "Kay yaaarr!!! You made us loose the match" "Abe oye!" "What is he doing?" "Who is she?" And voices were coming from all the team-members.


She was a beauty! She was hot. She was a girl that everyone craves for. She was so innocent. She was... she was just perfect!


"Oye! Where are you lost?" Akash asked tapping his shoulder. "Oye! Wicket geli tujhi! Harlat tumhi!" (you've lost your wicket! You lost the match)

But he wasn't listening anyone. he was lost in her beauty.
"Abe wicket geli nahi! Wicket kadhli! She took his wicket"(He din't lost it! Someone has taken it. She took his wicket)


"What the!" Both of them spoke simultaneously and looked at each other shocked.

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This SS belongs to Unconditional Love
no proofreading..
sorry for typo mistakes

I know it's so ugly, but I have tried this type of story for the first time..
Please leave your valuable comments...
P.S. Me and Shraddha both are Marathi girls. Shrads wanted Arnav to speak Marathi.. So, I made him a guy from Mumbai 😆

Thank You for reading!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omggg shilpooo ths is just osummm post lovelyyy yaar waah kya surprise hai luv uuu loads... 👏👏❤️🤗🤗🤗

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Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 12 years ago
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Loved the update dear...it was amazin...truly
wow i wud say!! Plz pm me weneva u update..
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Seems interesting :D update soon xoxo
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Thank you for the comments... 😉
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Aree Wah..👏Khup khup maja aali...⭐️Mast ahe...!!!!😳Different...!!!😳
Superb yaar...Wat a start...!!!!!!👏
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Shilpa it nice one. Good to hear ur from mumbai. Me too from mumbai. And felt more good wen u said arnav is also from mumbai.
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Ohh it seems interesting! Can't wait to read more! thanks for the PM!!
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loved it
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