Short OS : We Missed The Moment...Part 5 CONCLUDED

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mayad

@mayad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Hi Sarah, thanks for the note about your job. Depression is an illness and like all sickness needs to be medically treated!

I am finding it difficult to see Arnav being this insensitive so close after the wedding given all that he went thru for Khushi! (I refer to the current episode of the show).

Your OS is based on an insensitive Arnav and whilst I cannot relate to this side of him as either ASR or Arnav I can understand the need to pay him back in spades! I am just sorry that Khushi had to take such drastic measures to get his attention!

As always your stories are well written and based on well researched information!

Take care,

Maya

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Wonderful ss..

This z d intensity i.e missing in d show..

Thanks 4 d pm

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Do you metaphorically mean sleeping, or did she actually just go to sleep and woke up 10 hours later???
Hmm...
I don't know.
To the update.
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I could actually see everything happen in front of me, that's how we'll you wrote this...
Arnav's pain and khushis, just scared me.
Your write good ya know,
Real good.
Made me cry.
But I AM deppressed these days, so I must be delirious :P
Thanks for the pm :)

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pavi1

@pavi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

awesome...

very well written...

thanks for the pm

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

wow it was superb

feeling sad for khushi and arnav

thanks for pm

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

This was very emotional. a truly heart touching one.. Do continue soon and thnx for the PM.

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mandeep

@mandy15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

fabulous parts dear:)

loved them all...:)

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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

oh my god... good lord.. what a Heart wrenching story... though i was against the suicide attempt idea... your note helped to understand better.. has the OS ended? i request you to write more parts... waiting to read more. thank you...u did great job... in showing the pain

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Megha

@naughtymallu

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Wow..This is the first time me commenting on your work...Iam so happy..

Back to the update...It was a "desi-fied"update..I can actually see the scenes infront of me..NK is much understanding than Arnav...So glad he yelled at Sheetal..Awesome update..Do PM me please..

Megha