Short OS : We Missed The Moment...Part 5 CONCLUDED - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
IF only khushi of serial had this thing in her back ,, if only..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome very heartbreaking and intense loved how he spoke to shitall should have done that in the first place poor khushi she feeling alone and heartbroken loved what she told him he had to understand for him to learn awesome thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all the parts that was really sad & poignant - I & others are always looking that they are together forever no matter what *& you ahve placed a different spin on this - that makes one step back & ask what if...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg sweety, your such a brilliant writer, especially the emotional stuff.
that was so heartbreaking, it made me ache inside.
in our society depression is so desperately overlooked, missunderstood and in most cases not recognised, diagnosed or accepted and people who suffer are just left to suffer on their own, its so heartbreaking.
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was sooo emotional 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
So good .awesome:)i hope you ll become good screen writer in future
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome one sarah..
way emotional to handle though..
im glad that khushi made him realize what he is missing..
taught him right for taking her for granted...
you know sarah..its hardly possible to remain a loyal fan of this shit track..
even the rabbaveys on the maha epi left nothing but a bad taste in my mouth..
nothing is solved..khushi is hurting..and they give us a rabbavey out of nowhere..
thats ridiculous...i watch the serial once in a while..
i haven't skipped an episode ever before..
but alas..i can't just sit back and watch whatever crap they dish out at us..not anymore..
i want khushi to stand up..to take charge..to lash out in pain..
but some OTT comedy and a super crappy track is all we get from the cvs..
you writers make a better arnav and a khushi than the cvs,,
so i guess im gonna stick to your stories until this track is done..

Edited by claireDD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the parts together.
Nice OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update as usual...
felt sorry for arnav but he deserved it...
plzzz continue soon nd thnx sosoos much for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing OS

Very heart=wrenching

Arnav deserved this, he only thinks about how he can't live without her.

But what about Khushi, he always make her feel insignificant, small and not as important
as the rest of his family

He absolutely deserve being left alone, with his heart broken in a million pieces.

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