MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

yo yo first to comment... :D
nice update sis cont soon we are waitng :)

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

sooo beautifulll...
m speechless...
per ek " Nupur Do you take Mayank as
your lawful wife...edit it hehe

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: crazymayurian
sooo beautifulll...
m speechless...
per ek " Nupur Do you take Mayank as
your lawful wife...edit it hehe

thansk aton dear edidted 😆

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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

beautiful updt fiza
finally mayur get married ..loved mayank vows
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Humayra

@Humayra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Beautiful update, Apu...

Mayank's mom had sent the tiara as a blessing, that means she's trying to accept nupur as a Sharma..

YaY!! MayUr are married now..

Next is SaJans' marrige..lol..

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Whatever..I would be depicting about this update would be nothing in comparison to the what this update has... infront of this ff..i felt..I am no one...to say how waz it...

Besutifull...

Mindblowing..

hearttouching..

exxtraordinary...

were all these small words to describe the feeling when i had read this part..

The whole ff is just complete pure...a heart...it seems you had poured the deepest thinking of your heart in this whole ff...

and this partidular part..is just beyond any limis of being beautifull..pure...pleaseant...

I really loved the line...when the feelings of Mayank come out for Nupur and specially for her...when he is around her

well it cums from deep down the soul, from the heart' from him to her it cums from the deepest cords of heart that he never knew he has'

Di...How do you manage to write such..heartfull updates...

I literallly had visualized each and everything even their deep emotions through your update..i could able to feel what Nupur is going thriugh..how Mayank is feeling...

Even i felt myself nervous..when Nupur was entering in the chapel..it's certainly a fairy tale..really for a girl like Nupur..it's beyound any fairy tale...she has turned into a respectable woman...her life has Mayank..her life has love...

Love is the strongest that any other power...and

Mayank' vows..they were just too much...I really wish could someone be there for me...to love me unconditionally...love me...and take into his world..his world of...love...

Bygod...!!!!...I am feeling jealous of Nupur..but...i can't see...Nupur being seperate from Mayank...

That's why..Mayank is best with Nupur..and vice-versa...

The update was just mindvlowing..

you left me speechless.specially when she was recalling Mayank's words while entering into the chapel...and also...when he took vos for her..

OMG..!!! Di...you made my heart flutter...

I am so happy..that Mayank's mother though physically wasn't present there but she gave her full blessings to her son's bride...

that was really very very touchy...

loved it...

thank you for poundering us with such beautifull update..

love you...

*hugs*

cont soon

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Aaww!!! Finally mn r married!!
It WS such an dreamy update!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

hayeee FIZA what an update yaar, dil puri ki puri khush ho gaya. it was full of with so much emotion,love and a bit fear of the starting of new life. nupur was passing through a turmoil of feelings, sensation...she and mayank was going to start of life, a blissful life which was the dream of this innocent. inspite of her profession the way mayank and gunjan give her so much love and respect- hats off to them . they r angel in her life who changed her life frm worst to best... she is indeed a lucky girl now... u know what thoufh mayur were centrasl character but gunjan also played very much imp role here. she was the mentor of mayank who showed him a right path... sam was getting much more soft with nupur and i think its really matter to her. somehow he was accepting Nupur frm his heart- apni bro k liye he sahi but nupur won his heart with her manners also. hmm mayank mom dint cme here to bless them. but she sent khandani gift to her- a really very sweet gesture of SA which made nupur damn happy...ahhh i loved this update very much. u again rocked it.. thanx dear... love ya

Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago