MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139

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vinan2050

@vinan2050

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

heyy Fizaaa amazing update amazing lvd each and every bit of it

And sorry for not cmmntng i was not having net cnnctn :(
Thanxx for wndrfull updates

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rimshazeb

@rimshazeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

speechless update...

today i feel like saying it is so beautifull ,so pure love makng rather than passionate n romantic

u portrayed nupur emotions ,her feelngs , her fear perfectly👏

it is also hard for mayank too but he know no one touch her the way he want .Everyone just need her to fullfll thier desires but mayank want her to make himself complete. i just love this mayank❤️

i really like sajan they r soo cute specialy gunjan...

GREAT JOP API👍🏼

THANKU sooo much api for not ending this ff🤗

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Angel

@hasiniangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

superb update api... tooo gud... loving nupur and mayank here

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Irum.

@Irum.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

It ws verrryyy goood part.

U wrote it in very subtle manner.

or yeh sb zaroori bhi tha.

Janaba app is ka yahan ikhtetam krney k mutalq soch rahin thi jb k mujhe lgta hai k fairy tale tu ab shuru hoyi hai.'Abhi Nupur ki life as normal girl shuru hiney ja rahi hai.Abhi bhi kuch esi batein hain jo ose face krni hain.

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Fab update fiza!!!
I loved how u expressed nupur"s completeness in true sense!!
Even I don't want it 2 end it now!!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

GOSH it was so heavenly update
i just loveddd it

it was very much passionate and love filled update

the way mayank was showering his love on Nupur - hate off to him
i must say nupur was really very lucky that she got mayank in her life...

at first i thot nupur will b scared at her first night as i thot her bitter past will b haunted her and to give her a peaceful nigh. but mayank made me wrong. he made her easy and comfortable with hin and washed away all her fear and bitter memory from her life. he is indeed angel in her life

GOD bless them
kisi ka nazar na laag jaye
it was fantastic update fiza
u again proved ur talent
loved it so much
keep it up