MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 71

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome foursome update!!!
So loved it!! 😃
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sweet updt fiza
loved mayank ,nupur,samrat and gunjan all are soo sweet
waiting for the wedding ..cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed


There are times in your life.. When reality is stranger and more beautiful than fiction..

Chapter: 24

She came out of the car and standing infront of the house in Seattle' their house ' how life has changed from one side to other' it was as usual pleasant and little cold here.. the clouds walking behind the house.. Playing hide n seek with sun.. it is serene here' she felt warm radiating through her' as he crawled his hand around her waist and placed his chin on her shoulder'.. he can see the moment they have step in the scity the calmness and the tranquility on her face' yet a strong silence as if she in herself is sumwhere else'

Mayank: wht.. he asked kissing her cheek

She took a pause, more for composing herself.. the kind of feelings tht belong to here' the difference of feeling from the last time till now.. it's a whole journey.. a journey of live time'

Nupur: first time I placed my feet here' I came here to make my self such tht im so disgust tht u will not even near me.. such tht I knew I even cant dare to dream about you' the house is so beautiful' its seems like a painting perfect picture ' the white house in front of these green beautiful mountains' with blue sky and touch of clouds' I was just standing here and looking and thn the drive asked me to cum in' and than I got to know wht for I have came here'. But I never knew ' each step I m talking away from you ..is the step im nearing u'

He looked at her he can see the un shed tears and the pain she feels every time she step in to any such thing'. But now its time..high time to move on 'to let it go'. This place or any other place should remind of the good times, the start of there relationship ..there love not the painful steps and fight they both face with there inner selfs'. he turned her to him ..

Mayank: u think a lot .. u know tht.. nupur it time u shut ur brain ur self.. elseee' I promise you sweetheart I will do the honors'he smirk' he leaned and kissed her telling her his ways of doing this'

Lets cum in' come on..

Nupur: hmm she smiled'. And tagged her hand with his arm to move in'

Gunjan: still u have doubts '.

Samrat: yes'

Gunjan: OMG' ladies and gentleman meet Samrat Sharma'.tube light'

Samrat: wht did u called me'.

Gunjan: tube light ..whose starter has expired..

Samrat: stop spending time with tht Punjabi Indian maid of urs.. ur jokes have gone'

Gunjan: its not a joke' im serious.. shall we my dear tube light'

Samrat: if wish I can carry you to'

Gunjan: u r off glass u will break'. No no I cant take the risk no way

Samrat: very funny..

Gunjan: any news about mom

Samrat: hmm' I have told her tht im going and just for bros sake if she can cum' she doesn't said anything' maybe she will '

Gunjan: hmm.. maybe' I wish she does' just once if she will meet nupur

Samrat: no miracle will happen.. u keep saying this for me to

Gunjan: ur ego is sucking the air' u know wht ' u knew frm u heart tht she isn't like tht t'thts y u showed here' but than u and ur big fat ego'.

They moved in when they heard a shout

Chrysanthemum ..she shouted

Samrat: whts tht

Gunjan: now I know tht why bhai was so in to having these flowers.. aww there so cute

Samrat: to much cheeky actually

Gunjan: sigh' wht will happen to me'

Samrat: aha' they seems to be busy in them' I will tell u wht will happen to you'

He dragged her to there room with a smirk

Nupur: omg I love these flowers'. She touched them and then placed them near herself.. all of these are so precious for her'.. Why ur making all of tht again

Mayank: why.. u donot like tht phase of ur life..

He said cuming near her and pecking her head..

Nupur: I love it mayank'

Mayank: have sum rest than we will go and see things gunjan has finalized

Nupur: im not sleepy'

He chukled at her all straight sitting on the bed'after placing the flowers securely beside bedside ' .

Mayank: oky princess' let me get the lappy.. thn we will get thing finalized'

He get in the room back closing the door behind and jumped on the bed'

Nupur: where it will happen' she said biting her lip'

He smirked'he knew exactly wht she is asking but than these days playing with her is the most pleasure .. he loves the fumble, blushes and the excitement she has in her' wedding was more for his happiness that turned to be their happiness..

Mayank: wht exactly u want to happen'.

Nupur: I mean' wedding'.

He pretending disappointing

Mayank: sigh I was thinking ur were talking about more interesting things after wedding' '

She cant help to blush on his double meaning talks bt than even the thought also make her depress to'. She is ashmed of herself..she is even not sure she will even feel..shut up nupur pls..

Mayank can see the change of expression on her face and he can also read whts going on in her head.. but he doesn't want to talk abt it making it cum on surface.. he will make it disappear he is sure about tht'

Mayank: how about we decor tht back garden

Nupur: no.. I want it in church'. Pls I told u before

Mayank: oky oky ' as u wish lets find a good chapel..

Nupur: on this'

He said lying down on her lap placing his laptop on his stomach'.

Mayank: ya let see it here than in evening we will go out and looking' I think samrat n gunjan are busy..he said with a smirk.. bad manners to disturb' and if I go out for tht alone she will kill me'

How about this.. lakeside chapel

Nupur: its nice but the out look is good not the chapel'its interior are oky.. mayank see this'

Mayank: in a university we are gonna get married ur kidding me' he raised his head a bit to look at her.. with weird look..

She smacked his head'

Mayank: fine I m opening it'

Bastyr University Chapel ..it was a beautiful chapel having along corridor to make it a beautiful aisle to walk down'

Nupur: this is so beautiful' it can be beautifully decor'waoo

Mayank: don't u thing its giving a view of court room ' the jury sitting on the side' and wht I am the judge.. and ur accuse of making my heart go away'. Ha..sigh how dramatic

Nupur: wah' wht a thought' with Samrat ur lawyer and gunjan mine.. where ur sense of humor has gone'

Mayank: sum intelligent man has said love is the seventh sense tht block ur all six senses' wao'. He said with his hand in air dramatically

Nupur: she glare at him and he chukle' u donot have to worry about tht ' chairs will b 80% empty' it can be decor well look at it

Mayank: but the aisle is too long man.. you want to make me wait tht much

Nupur: I love long aisle' it gives all the time to sink the feeling

Mayank: he took a deep breath .. ya and making u more nervous

Nupur: mayank brides go nervous..

Mayank: where tht rule cums from' oky we will see both of these venue north lake and that studious chapel of urs...he chukled' now ur dress'

Nupur: why only my dress wht about u

Mayank: nothing so special about my dress' its usual' wht u want to wear'

He turned to her' can I choose tht for u'

She smiled

Nupur: yes ..i will love it..

Mayank: let see'. I want sumthing sleek on u..

She raised her eys brown'

Nupur: so u have been checking me out..

Mayank: ofcourse I have' u have the best figure I have ever seen' so sumthing touching it all will be perfect' it will look daam hot

She almost dropped her jaw' it isn't she hasn't heard such thing about her ' much more dirty thn tht' but cuming it from mayank is sumthing really special.. he never say anything like tht every.. and never she felt he has seen her like tht'

Mayank: are u planning to close ur mouth I do tht for u'.

She immediately did tht'

Nupur: I cant belive.. it

Mayank: wht .. do u think I m tht green I will not check my fianc in n out' he touch her waist and move his hand on her cursing her ' and move it above she gasp'he was telling her all tht he has checked out..and more he loves.. and moving close he lean to kiss her

Just than the knock on the door brought them back

Gunjan: get out of the room if ur planning to get married still' we have loads of thing to do.. part form ur loving sessions'

They both were startled as for sec it appears the door was open as her voice was so closed

Mayank: how mean of u' he moved and open the door abruptly taking gujan off guard' here we were giving u both time trying not to disturb ur loving session' and here ur excusing us' not good..

Gunjan: ya ya in ur bedroom..

Mayank: so wht we can to we cant take the sound effects in ..siting in the lounge u see.. so have to go in our room ' so u both done with all tht '

Nupur chuckled looking at gunjan's face' she doesn't knew mayank has turn more n more bad boy '

Gunjan: bhaiii' she winced and turned to other way' cum down we need to go and check sum venue'

Mayank: we have chosen two' we should go n check them and final it'and u go on with decorating it than'

Gunjan: before that have u guys chosen the date u want to get married'

Mayank and nupur looked at eachother and yes they haven't even thought about tht'

Samrat: wao.. we are planning a wedding without a probably date'.

Gunjna: I doubt sharmas mental abilities'

Mayank: oye' how about this weekend'

Gunjan: are u planning to kill me' thts three days from now..

Mayank: so.. does shergils donot have tht to make it perfect in three days

Gunjan: don't u dare go there Mr sharam' u will see how perfect I can do in a day' huh' on ur feets all of u' sigh I will surely have panic attacks after this wedding..

Samrat: u guys carry on

Gunjan: shut up and drive..

Samrat: hello 'wht I am

Gunjan: our personal drive ' cum on darling

Nupur: gujaannn'

Gunjan: stop talking his side' he is not gonna back away from here' u got tht'

Mayank: so sorry brother u got a nagging wife'

Samrat: sigh brother' brutal too'she is not my wife' not atleast any time soon

Nupur n mayank laughed at his irritation on his wedding talks and gunjan pass a prayer to god to mercy on her..

Moving all around and looking at the venue the all agree on nupurs chose and she claps her hand in excitement .. it was a beautiful chapel.. and she can already visualize herself walking from on end and mayank standing there waiting for on the other end'

He can already see there in their dreaming wedding with such a big smile on her face seeing this empty chapel now'. Wht will happened whn she will see it with the kind of decore mayank n gunjan are planning' the only thing tht he can do is to kiss her grin tht was making him so so happy.. it isn't tht difficult he thought to make her happy and make her just forget her past ' these are the simple things ' those things tht he wants to do for her .. those thing tht make him so happy from inside.. and all of this in turn make him feel bliss'

The dress choose was a bit argument' where nupur and samrat sitting in the corner frowning and looking at two people fighting on them'

Nupur: another one'

Samrat who was looking it all this was alteast 20th she has tried ..spitted in chuckles..a and nupur pouted looking at him

Samrat: thts why I donot want to get married..

Nupur: I agree with u' if I would have knew tht ..would have never allowed him to select one' thts it I m not trying any more.. u guys first finalize'

She stampeded her feet and move towards Samrat and sat beside him' and he passed a glass of water to her..

Nupur: thnks I need it' she was really in sweat..

Gunjan wants a huge wale heavy gown.. while mayank want a sleek elegant one' making nupur trying atlest 20 gowns they both select one each and now they are fighting on wch to finalize.. as both of them have chosed one'

Gunjan chose

Mayank choose

Mayank: this not ur wedding u get tht'

Gunjan: so wht it's the wedding organized by me.. wht people will say wht kind a dress this is' noway'

Mayank: whts the promblem in it ' huh.. and nobody is asking u

Nupur: cant u do anything'

Sigh she looked at Samrat..

Samrat: u should tell them wch one u want,,tht can make things easy'

Nupur: if I will go with mayank gujan will feel really hurt she has planned so much' no way' sumwhere I think she know u might never agree on marrying .. so she is making it they she has wished for herself'

Samrat was talking a back with nupur's word' sumwhere whn in afternoon they were making out ' gujjna was discoing the wedding.. and her words have sliped from there wedding to our' tht time he thought its just the slip of tongue but right now..or mayb not

Samrat: she isn't dreamy stupid girl/.

Nupur smile

Nupur: but she is a girl.. and more over a girl in love' but right now u have to do sumthing or atleast we are not getting married

Samrat: ya seems to.. shut up both of u

Gunjan: wala' so Mr younger Sharma u have better idea

Samrat: ya honey I have' why not take both dresses..

Mayank: not way we are not having ur wedding same day tht so cheap..

Samrat: I m not getting married' now' he added when he saw gunjans face 'he has to add it,..' bridesmaid cant wear tht'

Gunjan looked at the dress wch she so loved tht she doesn't want to make it go' it was the most beautiful one for her' nupur smiled at Samrat mayb he isn't ready for marriage but still he is fulfilling her dream of letting her wear the gown..

Nupur: wonderful idea' see I will wear the one maynk chosed and gunjan u wear this one.. it will look amzing'

Gunjan: hmm.. see samrat u should start living with me.. ur brain works better tht way

Nupru laughed

Samrat: huh' u will never learn to appreciate my intelligence

Gunjan: I will when u will learn to have it sweety '

aslamoalkum api😊i m biggg fan of yrs .
me apki stories 2 saal sa follow kar rhi ho n i just want to say u r mindblowg api👏👏👏👏
meina sirf apka liya if join kiya h 😃 n about this update it is BEAUTIFULL n i love mayank choice☺️ . update soon.bye
p.s plz rply me must ek bar he sahi plzzz
Edited by rimshazeb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

SIGH..!!!!!!!!!

wat a dreamy upd8..!!!!!!!!!!
d gowns u showed wer jst amazinggg..!!!
n d fyt of gunjan n mayank was jst sooo cuteee..!!!!!
do upd8 soon...i badly wanna read it further..!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hye...it ws heavenly beautiful.
It looks like a dream.
I like Mayank 's way of shutting Nupur's mind nd his naughtiness.
I hope future mein wo or naughty ho jaye.😉
Poor Gunjan, bechari Nupur ki shaddi mein hi apne armaan poorey krna chati hai.I hope Samrat ko jld aqal aa jaye.
Hmm...I liked Mayank chosen dress too.Nupur will definitely look beautiful nd hot.
I think Shilpa aunty will come.🤓
hope she would accept Nupur nd give hr motherly love.
Thnk God Samrat ne interfere kiya warna Nupur bichari tu dharm snkat mein thi dress ko le kr.



Mere nazdeek story os waqt drag hoti hai jb updates late hote hai.🤔
Thnx for update nd PM.
Edited by Irum. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update.
Don't have words to express my feelings.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was sooo Beautiful n Heavenly update
loved it sooo very much
loved it lodsss
Gosh!!!! i sooo can imagine that house...
it reminded me of that house..ek movie mein dekha tha named "Chori Chori" usmein bhi asa hi pretty wala hill ke upar clouds ke beech...hayeee
thanks alot dear glad u liked it
hay chori chori wala house was really nice but woh andar se acha nhi tha... kya yaad dila diya i love tht movie k music

Awesome!
its is actually like a Fairy tale...sigh!
i loved it so much
wow! 4love Birds in one house nice han 😉 😆
loved the wedding venue it was sooo Beautiful
i know ke Mayank's mom will come for sure
loved it
thnku its a fairy tale.. i told u so it need to look like a it tooo..
haan love birds n love birds all around😆..
acha ji apki yeah wish pori nhi hai hogi k mom will cum.. tht is to much like a hindi film .. n this ff is not in tht way a family one...
plus samrat hai nah kafi hai ... zayda non practical hojay ga...

n Gown selection was Awesome!
Bechari Nupur 😆
yeh Mayank n Gunjan na 😆
u know i toh loveee Gowns...hayeee
even when i browse it on net mujhe toh sab hi bhttt pasand atey hain so can't say which one was better...
bt Mayank's chosen one reminded me on Kate's wedding dress 😳 i sooo loved that
lol.. me tooo loveee gowns... i actually love christian wedding smiple short n to the point... no bikar k tamasha...
han yeah mayank aur gunjan dono ek jasay hai ... to loud...
yaar mjhy kate se zayda uski sister k dress acha laga tha...

bt what i loved the way Nupur seek Samrat's help...awww
it was really cute
wow! Two brides i mean white gowns u know 😉😆
Sigh!!! Awesome update
loved it too much
n its not dragged at all
i sooo wanna read the story further
loved it
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: do update the next part soon 😳



yup the brides maid have to wear sumthing like this na.. tu yeahi kerlo...
thnk u so much ... for liking n loving it..
i will update hopfully tonite..
i was writing wedding and its chapter need full attention ... it has so much th i want to write abt tu islayn it took time ..
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Posted: 12 years ago


thnku



thnks dear
glad u liked it




thnks alot dear



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

cute...

gunjan is sooo sweet...and samrat...uff blockhead!

and MayUr...sigh...i love them!



thnks partner
glad u liked it
lol..blockhead.. thts perfect for him

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

awww it was romantic.
my jaw was droppd when mayanj talkd to gunji dat boldly.
lovd d way sanur relation has been easd.
cute n lovd it.
n next update jaldi karna plzzz




thanks alot dear
lol.. wht do u expect frm a man frm NY... he is indian just fir name sake... asa tu hoga..
thnks.. sanur are geting better.. they will ...
sorry for being late again... this ff takes lot to write i love wrting it in best of my moods..
plus meri tabiyat.. and than upcuming wedding n all the romance... the initmacy is hard for me always i take loads of time to write it

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