MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 47

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice update

really feeling bad for mayank and nupur

hope his mother is fine

continue soon

thnk u so much...
i know both r suffering good
she will be fine.. just hope things will b fine

will cont soon

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

beautiful update

thanks alot

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

oh..!!!

My my...What a update..!!!

You had really made me speechless to comment ...

So much painfull update...

Mayank and Nupur both are in a painfull emotional state,...!!!

thanks alot dear
thnku so much
yes they are n both becuse of being with eachother

Finally..i knew it...i knew it ..it would happen...!!!

Why does..reality is so much painfull than dream..??

I knew it..the day ..the moment..their reality will struck...them...it will

sure shortly..

change everything..!!!

Will bind them..to unkown constraint..abiding them..to open up infront of each other...

reality is alwasy painful yet it is the person beside u who makes is less effective... yet with them there things around were n are n sumhwre will always be troublesum

I so so knew..that this would have to happen a day...but it would come in such a dreadfull way was certainly out of my expectations...

I hate Esha and Rahul...

So much Mayank has suffered..

Now his mother knew about it...

i am really very very worried...about it...

Is this the end of their story..?

this is the begining of there story... this were the reality starts... so yes this wakeup call will shock them yet will also let them know wht they are to eachother

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

omg... so she's leaving!
finally dey woke up frm dreamland.. into harsh reality of deir lyf!

yes they have woke up n now they will knew in reality wht are they for eachother

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

heart-touching update. maynk-nupur both are in pain. plz continue soon

thanks alot dear
will cont son
yes they are

Originally posted by: deepa5

ohhh

my my my

di its is superb update

u always make me speechless

i have no word to explain it

but its the reality both of them

and im also not imagine that is the fact nupur with rahul

my god

and is esha i want to kill her right there

thanks alot dear
gladu liked it so much
its hard nah ... u will have sum more harder things cuming up

Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

MN's reality check.. Nice update 😊

thanks alot

Originally posted by: Faria.

Fizuuu

very very complicated situation
i felt bad for them
dont know how will they resolve it
how they will ensure a single path for them-it was not easy...

pata nehi kya hoga.. just keep praying for them

thanka lot dear
yes it is
it will trust me in the best way it can


n u get well soon

Originally posted by: gopi06

amazing updt fiza
you expressed mayur's pain & helplessness very well..specially mayank's frustration on not opening up to nupur ..loving this matured gunjun
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanksa lot dear
gladu felt there pain n misery... u will like her more n more in upcuming ones
will cont soon

fiza ap update kab karo gi?

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

fiza ap update kab karo gi?

ha jee kab update karogi ap???

HI Guys

thanks for ur lovely comments on previous part...

have rplyd to u all...

Pardon Errors...

Past , despite its wrenching pain, cannot be unlived, but if faced with courage, need not be lived again.

Maya Angelou

Chapter: 17

She sat there not knowing wht it is all about…. He left without having the feeling to meet her he left, without saying good bye he left.. the reality hit him so hard that now he doesn't even want to see her face, her let her have a finaly goodbye…

She was just holding the paper and was sitting there numb to react… wht to react.. and why to react.. who she is to react.

This month, this beautiful days will end like this… she never thought… sumwhere she started to believe that this will never end.. yet she forgot it was meant to end…wht she believe or wht she not will not change the reality.. it has to end. And it did…wht now she doesn't know is to where to start picking up her pieces.. the fragments of her own self she has lost with him here in this castle of dreams…

He isn't cuming back not at all ..the way he has said to go or to stay ur choice.. he is gone.. forever.. the thought made her gulp a painful lump and her eyes droped a lone tear from them…

She has given everything to make her self deprived of feelings, and he took everything from her giving her all the feelings… she lye down hugging his pillow in an urge to diffuse his warmth in her… it might give her the strength she needed now… as now she has nothing left in her.. neither feelings, nor soul and above all no hopes …. No thought about any fairytales… no girl.. no human.. the only feeling that is left in her is that was disguised for herself… more than anytime now she is feeling so… he tried so hard still he wasn't able to take her in… she is such a filth that cant be touched by the angel… the feeling of ashamed n disgust has cum much more strongly this time… this time its burning her inside n out….

She knew he tried hard, but than doesn't she knew nobody cant take this in real… but why now, when she was hoping for forever, why now when they same where were weaving a future together.. not they.. she… why not that happen than whn she was protecting him from this reality… why than when she has now start seeing herself from his eyes…

She never felt this disgusted of herself they way she is feeling today, he has sumwhere blurred her image of pros**** but today it came as horrifying as it was never…

The flower in the glass died today, and this beast was such horrifying that even the kiss of pure love was not able to transfer her into any thing beautiful.. anything expectable… she clutch the pillow more tightly … just to make her shivers' down, she wasn't sobbing nor making any noise just water fall was drenching his one of the many belongings here…

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Mayank rushed to the Newyork without thinking anything.. not his mom.. no please.. the only person in his life he has after his grany … he cant think of losing her… his mind was so numb to think any possibility of the disaster he has left ther back at Seattle… and she was so in pain that did thought about any possibility of the emergence he is really facing.. for once she didn't thought it was sumthing so big for him.. and he was not in potitons to react or say anything.. his mom was critical … pretty much … when he talked with doctors last night they said so.. making him more fragile…

He rushed directly to the hospital…and saw samrat talking to the doctor and the expression were not giving him any hope

Mayank: wht happen howz mom…

Samrat look at him with a blaze…

Samrat: how will be she when she got to know that his son is following his father foot step.. lving in with a Sl***….

Mayank was horrified ..how the hell his mom got to know that… no she didn't get to know this like this… she shouldn't be knowing this at all… how is that possible.. he turn to gunjan no u didn't did that..

Gunjan: I was just telling that to samrat and she listen over us…

Mayank: he closed his eyes n sigh… how is she..

Samrat: she has had a stroke.. but fortunately it didn't end up in paralysis… her BP is getting down now… she is cuming out of the critical condition but still she can go back…

He closed his eyes relived.. and sat down there.. it was a moment he want to breath… its oky.. she will b fine… she will be fine…

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Few days passed and nupur came back to her life… she was back to newyork in her house… it was horrifying to see everything here.. she can't help herself to related it to their dream in Seattle.. she left Seattle the very next day more she was staying there more she was getting drown in his memories.. it was injurious to her …

She has nothing left in her… she was tired very tired… and so placing her things there she went to drop herself on sofa.. and kept lying there for not knowing how long… looking in vaccum.. not knowing wht to do next…

Where she should start from, for herself that died 10 years back and from nowhere mayank came n revived it back and now again she has to kill herself… this time she will choosing wht to do… this is making things more worse for her.. she knew one thing she might nevr be able to go back to wht she was .. a pro****… cause she cant think of herself giving to anyone than mayank… she chukled… ur planning to give urself to him… he was right when he repeatedly said.. he wants nothing from u… he really didn't want anything from her… not even herself..

Mayank was told by doctor she is fine… just need peace n rest… he asked to meet her and went inside to look at her… kissing her forehead he saw her droping eyes opened and than got closed… he kept siting there for as long as he can.. he doesn't know wht anwers he will cum up to his mom… and wht he will have in him to answer.. but he knew when thing he has loads to face now.. the reality has just came as most dreadful truth… he sigh.. he is getting tired of his life.. all the twist and all the most amzing things God has written in his life.. so generously … if just he got have written slight peace too… he was feeling now he has the most peaceful life… and he woke up again like this…

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A week went away like this.. and mayank was complete into his mother nad taking care of things here, and nupur was nowhere was just trying to make her mind to start things again….but just couldn't make her self do.. she was trying to make herself busy but nothing was helping… evrytime she was looking around her this home too she was having mayank…

She was unpacking her things and hse had the dress she bought for the date in her hand… she looked herself in the mirror and its hard to recognize herself.. she doesn't appear the nupur who F*** she was appearing sumthing else.. she tried to remove the chain n locket he gave from her neck but she gotten just had that strengthen in herself…

Cleaning her closet she found the princess top n tracks… she wanted to scream on top of her lungs why … why cant she just shut evruthing .. why.. she slighted down n closed her eyes.. pls help…

Mayank was worried as his mother has not yet talk to him at all, he has tried but she has ignored.. maybe as Samrat gunjan or sumone else were always there.. and he donot want to bring topic himself… knowing mayb she will go back to her worsed state …

Mayank' mother: mayank

She called him and he rushed to her

Mayank: ji mom..

Mayank' mother: mayank I want to talk to u

Mayank: mom not now… I will tell u everything .. but right now u need to rest not to take stress… u just need to trust me

MM: I do trust u mayank… but I also know one thing that these days ur to much fragile…

Mayank: I m not mom.. so please stop thinking… just rest…

MM: mayank ur not going wrong way

Mayank: mom do u trust me… believe me this time I m not …

MM: be careful beta… be really careful….

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Nupur after 10 days switch on her cell, not the no mayank has given her.. but the one hse use for work.. and it was flooded with text msgs… but with the opening of her previously life… with all the strength she can master in herself.. she switched off her that no. wch was given my mayank…

She knew if he didn't bothered to call her in 10 days… than it will never happen again.. so its better that she shut it down… she finally shut it down…

She wasn't attending any calls… she was hating herself she just cant put her self back to work again…. She cant give her body just now now… this isn't done mayank… that was exactly I was scared of..u came n left .. yet took everything away from me… even the strong shell I made around myself.. that hold my soul so much intact inside me.. u make his house horrifying for me… as I cant help yet to imagine my soaring body cuming back from the fight.. were the loser and the bruised is always me…

The sound of the bell make her came out of her thought… n breathlessly she kept looking at the door..untill another bell rung and she shivered abit.. wht if mayank is on the door… wht she is gonna say to him..is she gonna fight with him or she is just gona hug him…

With fearful steps she reached to the door.. n collecting sum strength she opened the door… and sigh.. she felt that pain again strike hard to her heart.. he isn't there… he isn't there….

It was a courier and she took it… opening it she chukled pitifully… but the debits shocked her nerves to hell…. Now another trouble how the hell she is gonna pay this all… she has nothing in her hand…

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Mayank's mom was back at home and she was pretty well… he was going to office to and was sting in his cabin when sumthing shocked his wits and make him go what he has left behind..

Samrat: bhai there is a party today…

Mayank: Samrat… why can u handle it ..

Samrat: as I am going to Europe now with dad… so u have to attend it…

Mayank: wht the hell..

Samrat: whteevr… here is the invite…

Mayank: fine..

May I cum in sir

Mayank: ya …

Sir wht to do with this…

Mayank: wht it is…

Sir this was the cheque u gave to that lady at Seatle..

Mayank: wht do u mean by that

Sir I am sorry I wasn't able to tell u than… within a week she return it back to me.. n I was out so when I came here I got it…

Mayank: go… just go away..

He looked at the it and he smile.. fully… this was one thing he was dying to hear from her .. and she has down it.. now nobody can be doubtful about her…he made his head rest back and looked back… the moments, his feelings, her confessions, her smiles her wits… after so long it all brought smile on his face.. but wht more made him feel amzing was the fact hse never took his money.. he was never was her client… she was with him for him… cause she too want this too as much as he do… he couldn't help but to grin widely.. he just cant believed just a thing made him realize so much about there relationship together…

Yes it was indeed a relationship and that so together he has no doubt about it…

She didn't gave him a call …have she reached back or still she has been there… mayb she stayed there that was exactly he want to … with so much happening at him home.. he wasn't able to call her or ask her how she is… though he tried sumtime but either his mom was not letting him go away or samrat was always there… he didn't want anything more to happen to his mom atleast… he knew how much he has missed her… she is his peace n he was so deprived of it when he realy want to….. he took his cell and dialed her number but it was switched off…

He tired again n again but it remain the same… wht happen to her.. why the cell is off… he panic abit but than maybe she was buys…. Busy in wht… he dint want to know that she is working… not at all … she cant she will not….

He will go to her house.. it has been 10 days and he hasn't bothered to know how she is… freak.. he even didn't realized that it was more tha 10 days.. but it was deliberate decision he was fearing if his mom get to know it again from sumone else that he has gone to her.. than wht will happen… and he donot want to give her a call n tell her… he knew isn't satisfactory … after today's party he is going at her home… for sure… he has so much to apologize and he knew knowing wht he went throw she will b oky.. she knew he didn't left her … he just want away to look after his mom… that's it…

Little he knew this thing was not at all in her mind.. as if she didn't read the part in the note…

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She is in debits a lot of… she was holding her head n looking at the mess.. after meeting mayank she stop taking new clients… she wasn't just able to make them have her.. suddenly she was making them feel she isn't interested and that actually made angry her one of client extremely…

But now wht she has not been working for more than a month… she return back mayank;s cheaque as it was making her feel filth.. the moment she want to live her all life where appearing worthless with the thought he was paying her…

She doesn't want to take money for him, she take money from those who are as flity as hse is.. but mayank isn't one of them….

But now wht.. just than her phone rung and looking at the id she shuddered…

Rahul: hello s**ty…

Nupur: whts up Rahul….

Rahul: I wont be calling u to know about the whether or ur health.. im least interested in tht… I want u tonite.. in an party and than the nite.. hard n happening..

She cant go with him no way.. he is sumone mayank;s hate to core she cant let him have her… nupur mayank is gone and u just cant let her have u eaten up… it can be ur last if u donot want to go more in it… but right now with no job in hand u will have to go to him… u need money … there is just a day left to pay all the debit.. u donot have anyother choice… this just the night u want… it's the last time u know tht… n u have just night to pay all this.. rent, other debits n all… else morning u will not evn have this home with u.. how has always given u peace n shelter…

Rahul: s**ty wht are u thinking.. or imagining sumthing haan….

Nupur: ok..

Rahul: okay…. So I am sending u a dress as u b*** what will wear I just cant rely on u … with ur choice of man these day like mayank….lol… whn u start to pleasure g**…

Nupur: areu interested in ur pleasure.. and I think I never disscue anything abt me with u

Rahul: woo hoo… fine… see u at 8 … cum at hotel .. donot even thing I m honoring u to pick n drop u….

Nupur: I not even asking u… bye…

Err she hate him so much so much so so so much… and she hate herself more than anyone for letting Rahul have her.. she hates the situtation in wch she get stucked and than there is no way out to it.. other than givin herself to them .. he pay a lot…. Almost double the amount she takes and today even he agreed and that was exactly she wanted… from past weeks so many calls were cuming and now when she needs one nobody did called and the person who called was Rahul… she wasn't even sure wht she will do with him…

Dressing after so long .. she didn't even looked herself in mirror… she was hating herself.. she just… took her clutch and took a cap and went to the hotel… dialed rahul's no and told him that she is there… she knew he wil not even bother to cum down or anything … she went tin party and he pulled her in to his grip.. resting his hand on her waist… she never felt this digust of herself than evr … now she knew it was bad idea .. she cant take his hand caressing her waist.. how she will let him have her… she was feeling stif.. and was feeling she cant breath… she cant breath now…

Rahul: wht happened s**ty…

Nupur: nothing..

Rahul: really u seems to be so uncomfortable.. seems like its ur first time.. relax.. I m not touching first time… I have done it at sum great ways to..

He leaned to her and she moved side way.. he grined evilly… she gulp down her saliva…

She chukled inside herself.. yes she was exactly feeling so .. it seems to be frst time she is going in this… mayank Sharma u revamp me totally n lleft me to face all this … fight with myself… and again get crashed … and this time it will be huge.. last time she didn't chose to be Por** this time she did… she has made herself drees up n walk to him.. n now to get crashed within him….

Nupur: why ur so bothered..

Rahul: I m not … but im loving this.. I love fragile girls.. breaking them ..ahh is pleasure… and doing this with u has always been amzing… but u see I hate no… so…

He slided his hand up on down on her arms.. Seductively and moved to kiss her when she in a impulse turned away and he kissed her cheek..

This made him a bit angry and he grip her face pressing her cheeks between his thumb n index fingering… she was giving him so many attitude…

Rahul: s**ty.. u know one thing very well… this attitude im not gona take.. donot make me go more harder on u… ur being paid … so behave as a mistress not as girlfrnd..got it…

He left her with force..she moved bit…

But the person watching all this crushed the glass in his hand.. as he wasn't able to see her turning her face away… he moved his eyes away and when looked back his blood boiled more.. as he saw him assaulting her.. the person he treated like a feather was being treated like this

So Ms nupur u didn't picked up my calls as u were busy pleasing Rahul… wao.. mayank cant believe his eyes.. the person who was all the time in these days he was missing, who he was craving to go back.. didn't went back as his mom was critical.. cant belive in just 10 days will be back on her track..completley forgetting about him

The person with whom he was planning next moment.. the person whos warmth he was missing at nights… cant believe was busy seducing others … atleat not Rahul..when knowing how much mayank hates him.. she did this to him… she did this to him… he means nothing to her…. Nothing at all… he was burning… he was just feeling dizzy with his burst of his heart… ur nothing else than Esha…. U to did this to me….

He touch her… he is gonna killed her…

He saw nupur going towards ladies room…. And he rushed too to move toward her.. he has questions to ask… why the hell she did to him..why..dam it…

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