FF|Arhi|Th4 How IPK should've been[ch22sc3 pg102 - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello :)

I could not comment on the last update, so will combine two here. Which means this is going to be longer than usual.😆

Akash's homecoming was very sweet. I LOVED Mamiji there. She was in her elements. I like the small details you put into the scenes which really benefits the characters and gives the story a realistic touch. Like Payal's disappointment with Arnav. I feel she does like him a lot, and knows he lives Khushi, but her loyalty should rightfully lie with her sister, and it is completely justified. Arnav has Anjali, even Akash to help him out, and this Payal is definitely the worrying older sister Khushi deserves. This is what siblings do-- look out for each other. Loved Akash and Payal's conversation in 20(2). Very married couplish, and very like the sensible people they are.

Oh, and the part where Garima is helping Shashi exercise before Arnav arrives, what a nice domestic touch.

I dig the Arnav -Buaji duo. Thankfully there is someone in his sasuraal Arnav is wary of. He wouldn't be an authentic damaad otherwise, no? Reminds me of Khushi's birthday and the relentless feeding of pooris. Sobti made some hilarious faces that day.😆

Shyam gives me the creeps. Bas. & i'm glad you explained that it is revenge which is driving him now. <Makes him all the more dangerous. I have no opinion on Anjali as of now, except that she has been a perfect sister to Arnav when it has concerned his relationship with Khushi . She and Khushi are the most difficult characters to get right, I think, and you have done a fantastic job with both of them so far.👏

& Nandini's back. I love her ability to dish out sarcasm without being overly offensive. & now that I'm pretty sure she won't hit on Arnav, she's definitely growing on me. I am looking forward to the verbal bricks Arnav will have to dodge when/if they meet.😛

Make her wear that saree soon. Please. That would be the best thank you for Arnav, I am sure. Karwaa Chauth, Mahaepisode... *hint, hint*

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... he had noticed back in the Lucknow market that she had liked this sari... but Khushi being Khushi did not buy anything for herself! Just loved this gesture by Arnav... even more than the roses! More than the sari... it is about the fact that he is taking care to notice what makes her happy...and then doing those things! Awww!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LoLo

Nice chapter. Hate that they are still apart and not communicating. On the Anjali thing, I don't necessarily agree. If a wife, worth her salt, finds out that her husband was intending to MARRY another woman while still married to her, and she forgives him she is stupid. Even adultery is easier to forgive if he walks away from the other woman and is repentant, for some people, not me. But marriage?!!! That he was willing to get into that bond with another means we are done. So here, I understand what you are portraying, but please don't say in most cases. Women today are walking away from cheating husbands more and more whether there are kids or not.


hey LoLo,

thanks for the critique. Yes I understand what you have written about women finding the courage to leave a sorry excuse of a man who wanted to marry another woman or committing adultery. Hence I said "a good number of women" not "most cases" 😊 Also, I do not claim to be an expert on matrimonial ending in divorces due to adultery, neither am I married myself, but going by the social trend of Indian women, a large number of married women would still excuse the husband and carry on with their (now strained) relationship.

my two cents.. thank you for sharing yours! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
mujhe lag hi raha tha ki anjali ne hi money transfer kiya hoga😡 i wonder how can ppl be so grtly dumb😡 [/QUOTE]

uhmm.. you might want to reread that part again.. Anjali has no clue about money being siphoned off from her account 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
U know I so wish the characters in ur story were real in the "reel"!! U should apply to be one of the CVs of 4 lions...I so wish ipk was like ur ff!! Even without a rabba ve its so worth reading! ive stopped watching d serial after d sheetal fiasco but i look forward to ur updates everyday!

By the way hoping to see some really intense rabba ves for arshi!!! looking forward to the ME!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it

Its way better then the show
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Posted: 12 years ago
haha nandni is just a comic relief... loved her suhagraat comment!

what did mr.evil switch the pills with?

why doesn't arnav just tell anjali about shyam... i thought she knew

maybe i'm mistaken but i thought he mentioned it to dadi that day the truth was revealed...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Payal worrying about Khushi was sweet and the conversation between her and Akash was lovely. These two helping Arnav and Khushi gives me distress. Nandini is someone I have mixed emotions over, I don't really like her yet. So Khushi has received Arnav's surprise. I hope she understand what Arnav is trying to say. Perhaps you could lock them in a bedroom for 2 days and see if they can talk then!!!! Thank you for update and pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear😊
luvd payal and akash convo...hope their efforts will bring arnav and khushi together
it would b gr8 if khushi wear this saree on karwachauth❤️
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its so good when i haven't read the story in ages and come back to several chapters!!! :D I'm in love this this story, its brilliant!! I just knew Arnav was going to get her that saree. Someone needs to sort shyam out or at least discover the cameras. Looking forward to the next part!! :)

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