FF|Arhi|Th4 How IPK should've been[ch22sc3 pg102 - Page 15

Congrats on thread 4 & A Great update.

Hi Smitzy. :)

I discovered this FF just a couple of days back. So I just caught up with all the updates and have to say you are a splendid writer. To take up from a point in the show and write about just exactly what we've all been missing, it's amazing what you've done with this FF. That too updating on such a regular basis, without deviating from the characters, keeping it very realistic, and etching out a proper role for the side characters, which I think is one of the biggest flaws in IPK as a serial.

I realise that this is the fourth thread, and I've missed making an insane number of gushing posts which this wonderful FF deserves, and will just point out very few of the many many things I absolutely adored here. Otherwise this comment might just turn out into an SS by itself.😆

• The past- One of the BIGGEST disappointments in the show ever. This was what the entire Raizada clan was based on, and they just killed it. You, on the other hand, kept all the pain, the angst, the sensitivity intact. Both the families were very well portrayed. & Arnav and Khushi's love yet their inability to be with each other. It was beautiful. Take a bow, lady.👏
• The Rabba veys- I HAD to say this. The tingling, fluttery feeling in the stomach that the original RV gave us. It's gone on the telly, but hurrah, IT IS HERE. Very much alive. & here I was thinking I would never be free of ismailvegamze and nostalgia.
• The relationships- Arnav-Anjali, Khushi-Garima/Shashi, the rest of the sibling bonds. Wow. This is what you do when you have an amazing cast. Give them this and NOBODY would have even dreamed of leaving. Wonderfully detailed, and Lucknow was an added bonus. It was where the past needed to be buried, since the city has always loomed large in the show itself, & you did it. Beautifully.

I have refrained from commenting on Arnav and Khushi, as you can see. Your vision of those two is beyond words. So real, so flawed, and yet so lovable. If I start, this will never end. So from now I will just comment as you go on.

I am adding you for pm. Would just like to end by thanking you for writing this. For showing us what could have been. So beautifully.

hey when are you gonna update eagerly waiting pls make it soon

Hi Smitzy,

Originally posted by: asr13

Smitzy !

What a sweet update, I dunno why but I feel emotional after this 😳, the entire flight sequence, with him observing her, how he adjusted his shoulder so that she could rest her head comfortably, how he watches her sleep, how he notices the goosebumps, adjusts the vent and then covers her in blanket, how she wakes up and wonders if she's drooled over him, the look exchanged between the siblings ...just tugged at my heartstrings ...beautifully done ! *fuzzy warm feeling indeed *

Oh and that seat belt scene was so cute, yes it transported me back to her first ride in his car ...loved her monologues when taking off ...hamare upar haati sawar hai ...very cute !

And and and ...

Quote :

Trapped between the wall of the airplane on one side and Arnav Singh Raizada on the other wasn't the best of conditions to be in.

You don't really know how many of us would die to be in this situation !!!!! Haaai !!!!🤣

*swoons*

Tum theek ho ? Haaai !!!!

Whats with you and his smirk !!!!! Now all I can see is that ..and that's it !!!! 😉😆

Humne aapse baat karna band kahan kiya hai ? 👏 You go girl !!!! YAY !!!! Loved her for this, trust her to leave him speechless, standing alone and frustrated with this ...thereby, clearly wiping the sexy smirk off his face ...aaah loving it !!!!!👏

Can you believe I am looking forward to Arnav-Nandini showdown as much as Arnav-Khushi's 🤣...very excited !😃

PS - I missed you describing our sexy man here, apart from the s.m.i.r.k that is, I know you don't do it every time, and you probably did it for Nandini last time but I thought ...ummm ...maybe ......😃😛

PPS - Swetha : One month ! Don't you even go there ? 😕 I will gladly be happy with not being the first stalker, if you can not go in hibernation girl ...awww 🤗

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Smitzzyy...🤗

Hai re Nandakishore...

It had Arshi written all over...
The whole update was soo cute...loved the moments between them!

When is Nandini going to Dilli!?

Really like the smile that was shared between Akash-Payal...an understanding that finally things were falling in place.

And you had to expect that from Arnav bitwa! Not giving Khushi an option and ultimately make him sit with him!

He smirks *swoons...😳

And the seatbelt waala scene...definitely reminded me of the first time he did the same. Even after all this time...they get affected b each other soo much!

And Khushis innocence..its really cute! The questions she asked!😆

Haayee...she slept on his shoulders!<3

Loved the telepathy between bro-sis...really sweet.
And he watched her sleep all this while!!<3:) Sooo romantic!

And he smirks again! *Swoons again
Hes got to stop smirking!!😳

LOL...trust Khushi to leave him frustrated everytime!

Wondering whats gonna happen in the next update!

PS - Okay...please try not to end the next one in a cliffhanger! You knw why!

Hope u update on time today...really wanna be first today

Originally posted by: ridizzz

awesome update

loved it

this whole lucknow trip and what happen while they were there...remind me of this song😳

Kitne hi door door hon hum donon ke raaste
Mil jaate hain jo bane ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise dil hai dhadkan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise aankh hai darpan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise barkha saawan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Ek sajni ek saajan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Us rab ne jab dil diye
Dil ke do tukde kiye
Dono mein ek naam leikha
Ek radha ek shyam likha
Ab ye dil dhadakte hain
Milte aur bichhadte hain
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Hum donon ek jaan hain
Do dil ek armaan hain
Lekin ab is mod kar
Dekhein daaman chhod kar
Waqt ka hai ye faisla
Hum tum ho jaayein juda
Maangein khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Maangein khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Become a writer on the show, please!

This is what was needed on the show - intensity, Arnav relenting, romance, Khushi's anger, heartfelt talk and an endearing pagalpanti too with other characters getting their due as well! Amazing job!

And the last chapter, Khushi's questions...Lol! And then Arnsv's reaction to her sleeping on his shoulder and the telepathic moment between Arnav and Anjali...wow! Update soon and please add me to your PM List! :)

Originally posted by: segad

😃

loved the update. typical khushi nattering away all night.

babuwa is learning to play the game well. managed to get her next to him without fighting for an hour at least. nk and mami are actually a good jodi as they can both talk each other's head off.

wonder how nk plans to woo nandini given that now he has a black mark against him by virtue of her low opinion of arnav

I demand you update although I may not be able to read it (exam tomorrow :p) but I saw the episode and I am so irritated right now! I need the proper IPKKND, so please update! :/