I OWN YOU IN EVERY WAY -2 -THE DARKER SIDE Thd 2

crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: highonshows

Mee too...i want to know this as well n also the fact what her mom told her...

I mean seriously, look after ur father n listen to him no matter what????

Its like. Mother herself left her in the hands of a pimp.

This is shear cruelty n torture.

di aab toh answer kar do,itne sare log pooch rhe he😳

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usha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

first one sounds better to me... plz dont change the story write it as u planned...continue sooon...

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indiavizion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

go with the flow, as it is u've already stated that its a dark chapter...so this one move will change both of their life's or not...if u've already drafted then u've clear cut idea of how the story is going to wind up and move forward...don't take any diversion...

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aeyshaalim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Poor khushi
Her dad sold her
And about ur question 1st one offcourse

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AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Hahahaha LOVED your PRECAP and I think you should go with the 1st one as I liked that one

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zonera1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

1st one is better!
Do update soon!

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Pragati Srivastava

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

1st one plz..
nd "dhinchakness"..knws no bounds fo ds one too..😆

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clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

iam dissapointed with u madhu

because u ignore 1000 likes, so many appreciation but cant u ignore 1 or 2 ppl who might hv problem with ur FF.????

we maximum ppl are loving ur FF's ..so u need not change for few people. I understand even i react like this..i may get 100 compliments but 1 criticism makes a person angry.

I am upset because i fear u might stop writing dark stories.Sometimes we derive pleasure reading dark stories. Appy indy is doing fantastic, and i want u to do it more gracefully and in entertaining way. Make it CRUEL, BARBARIC, then only the real effect will come out. soft romances have been done a lot of times.

iam upset because i fear u might stop expressing naturally the bold concepts . few days back in wrethched knots u had written a very bold khushi who takes in arnav very seducingly..we all loved that desirous and sensous avatar of khushi. We want to see more of such acts from Khushi's side in other stories too . its Hot and sizzling. I fear due to so much interfernce u might stop writing such diffrent presentations.

JUST ONE REQUEST LOOK AT YOUR LOYAL FANBASE AND THEN DECIDE , WHO IS MORE IMPORTANT- FEW CRITICISMS OR A MOUNTAIN OF TM'S SUPPORTING YOUR WORK.

Love u madhu for all your work but u hv to decide that u wanna ignore or go with some remarks .

Edited by MrsSanayaBSobti - 12 years ago

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