An IPK FF: Love, Lies and Two Weddings? *Thread 1* - Page 10

Originally posted by: prabba

Ressing until tonight , update tonight

Thanks for the PM

Very Riveting script. You just made every thing Arnav did very believable.

I loved that Khushi slapped him, he did deserve one at least.

I was also happy she was gone. Can't wait what happens next.

Can I post this on 4lions forum .

Originally posted by: kbtr

FAN . TAS . TIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG! OMG! YOU ARE THE BEST!

👏

OMG! if we had had this story, it is sooo much better than (as I said before) the crap we got!

I loved that the confessions and realization of loving each other are out. And I loved that she slapped him instead of cowering (like she did in reel life) and I loved that she disappeared!!! Hayi! I think I am a goner!!!

Your Kushi is like the old Kushi that I fell in love with at the beginning of the beautiful love story that was, in reel life. I am so glad you brought her back in your story. I cannot wait to find out what ASR (hopefully the reel one and not the shell we have right now, where everyone and their dog seems to be more street smart and more intelligent and more clever than him - wonder what happened to his shatir dimaag?!!) will do next. How will he find her, and find her he must! What will he do when he finds her? She is not exactly married to him. So how will he manaofy her? I cannot wait!

Hey, I stalked this out, but I'm sure you have PMed me. Thanks, waiting for the next update!😃

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal

whoa what a story !! Very gripping plot.. I specially loved the part u created with poolside sleeping.. In the show i hated Arnav most when he made Khushi sleep outside in cold.. How beautifully u just recreated the whole scene with an intriguing twist :-) I can very well relate to Khushi's frustration and anger here.. Awesome characterization of Khushi.. Feeling nice to read that she can actually react to reeling situations unlike the show's one who has got no proper characterization.. Really liked the part where she slapped Arnav, he so much deserved it after such a manipulative game.. I hope Khushi is fine wherever she goes, Arnav has a long way in persuading her in his life.. Also loved when Arnav flinched back when his Di was going to cup his face and retaliated that he aint some five year old :D I just wish they showed us less Arnav ~Anjali cuddling, touching scenes in the show, it is seriously repulsive to see... If the CVs had a few percentage of ur brains then IPK would not have to be a sinking ship with so much loopholes, discontinuity and mindless tracks.. Love u dear for writing such an unique and intriguing story with touch of actual grey matter :-)

Originally posted by: coronapsyche

Fantabulous,Di👏
Khushi actually Slapped Him! 😲
Run,Khushi,Run!
Run away from this mad house!!


Thnx for the PM😳
I am egarly waiting for the next update😃
Ohh! I have a question- Did Khushi actually faint or she acted like fainting?? I think she was acting!😊
Ok! See u tomorow ,Di