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Posted: 12 years ago
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So I was going to post it y'day when I read about akshay and just cudn't reply...



A new day... So I am here...

I knew it was ending... I scrapped u also asking u the same...
Knew somehow that u were planning an unusual and beautiful end and I was so right... :)

I loved both the stories destroyed and unconditional and they really touched my heart... It was as if I cud actually see khushi going thru all this and feel her pain... I cud feel arnav's remorse and cudn't help myself forgiving him in the end... all those beautiful moments just left me spellbound... After each update I was left in a trance and had multiple emotions running thru me... I felt horrified, tearful, angry, disgusted, numbed, pitiful, peaceful, humbled, joyous, calm satisfied, happy and I dunno what not... I cud empathise with all the characters... Especially khushi...

It was a very intense and emotional journey and I loved every bit of it...
Thank you for writing it so beautifully... :)



Just a small wish... A small scene where khushi embraces him, accepting him, loving him and he cries in her arms with tears of happiness and kisses her promising a beautiful life ahead... :)


Thanks...




Love u... :)



Edited by kooltoad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have removed my works from IF. I had made a blog for my works but as per the new IF rules I cannot post my blog link here and I hadn't anticipated that so many of you would want my blog link. But at the moment I neither have the time nor the energy to send out so many PMs.


So unless something is not done about the plagiarism issue here, my works will not be put up again. So at the moment all my finished works will rest with me on my word documents.


Thank you and sorry to those who were expecting the blog link. I hope you all understand.

Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UnRes Well m first somewhere on yr posts 😆 !!
Great story !!!
Amazing ending !!!!
I have totally fallen in love with yr Destroyed n Unconditional !!
With the end of this story u also bring an end to my long waits for yr Pm for the next update !!
Plz start a new story soon, m pretty sure its gonna be as amazing as these stories !!!!
Congratulations for making it to 8 threads n just 24 chapters !! 👏
LOve ya !!
Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So both mother and baby are saved? Great ending!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wait.. WHATTT!!

Its over?!? You just sprung this on us! I loved this story damn it!

Well you ended on a good note.. with all the loose ends being tied up.. With Aman being the good guy.. and finally getting anjali.. to Arnav having the family he has always wanted!

lovely story! I am going to miss it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😲 u ended it? no dont say that. i cant believe it really i cant believe. u cant do this to us 😔 but the update was so so sooo beautiful. OMG i am greatly affected by this story am very emotional i will cry now. Lazyleaves ... no... Zehra right? Zehra u r such an amazing writer. I enjoy reading ur stories most of them are light and make us to laugh but this one is really heart touching and very emotional and... sorry no words to explain. All i could say is amazing... and in this last chapter u have given Anjali's chotey love story that was so sweet really really didnt expect but that was so beautiful.
Arnav's character i thought I hated him to the core but later i dont know wat really happened and how it happened i began to... like/soft corner or watever... ... the way u narrated the changes in him; his guilty; repentance; his love ... everything everything was beautiful. i am gonna miss this character.
Khushi... wow poor soul. u didnt write much about what made her to forgive him but v understood . Its like God dwells in her soul 😊Beautiful. We gonna miss these characters. really really gonna miss this story.

But u didnt mention this as 'END' . so can v expect more dear?????


Actually wen i reserved in first page i was sooo happy but after reading it i totally forgot that.
Edited by shalinii173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats looking forward to the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yaar...its something different to c anji and amans romance...u no wat v need epilogue and v also need arnav and kushi's romance...cos till date u dint gave their romance means not intimate frm both the sides and situation and the stry line also dint support but nw in epilogue u can do tat so v r waiting eagerly...thanks for giving us such a wonderful story and all the best for the other stories u r gonna wri8...thanks for pm...
Edited by priyalovely - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No.. its ended but fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have removed my works from IF. I had made a blog for my works but as per the new IF rules I cannot post my blog link here and I hadn't anticipated that so many of you would want my blog link. But at the moment I neither have the time nor the energy to send out so many PMs.


So unless something is not done about the plagiarism issue here, my works will not be put up again. So at the moment all my finished works will rest with me on my word documents.


Thank you and sorry to those who were expecting the blog link. I hope you all understand.

Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago

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