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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

To make someone understand the depth of their faults, is to forgive them. This was an emotional roller coaster of a story written so well... I am going to re-read this and will miss your updates. So much can be learnt from Khushi, who suffered at the hands of a ruthless man but she also taught him so much through her simple actions and silence. She won over his family and won him over too.. . You ended it at a great point, a lot can be left upto the readers' imagination...

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Aww did it have to end so soon!
Congrats for the 6th thread, only 16 chapters but 6 threads clearly shows how much the story has been followed and liked.
Loved the last chapter, a very nice end with all the open knots neatly tied. I specially enjoyed what Aman had planned for Shyam's future😆
The last sentence was wonderfully put and thus the title: Khushi's "unconditional" love for Arnav!
Enjoyed reading all the chapters and looking forward to more such brilliant stories from you...thanx for the pm😊

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annab

@annab

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

It was a magical update my dear. i had a huge smile while reading the chapter ... Aman -anjali part was awesome.😃.they truly belong each other..i didnt find it awkward realising they even slept together during her marriage..

khushi is a beautiful soul.Only she can forgive someone like arnav..when u started 'destroyed' i was emotionally drained every time i finished reading the updates .And im soo happy tht 'unconditional 'end in a very happy note..

pls,if u dont mind write a Epilogue...I think this story is going to be remembered for a very long time...well done again for writing such a wonderful story...

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

AMAZING UPDATE!!!!

THE AMAN-ANJALI STORY WAS A REAL SHOCKER...

ACTUALLY I HAD MIXED FEELINGS FOR IT...ARNAV DID ALL THIS BCOZ HE THOUGHT SHYAM WAS CHEATING ON ANJALI...BUT SHE HERSELF WAS NO LESS!!!SHE CARRIED SOMEONE ELSE'S CHILD!!!

APART FROM THAT THE ARHI STORY WAS PERFECT!!!

THANKS FOR SAVING THE CHILD...AND I KNEW KHUSHI WAS NOT IN DENIAL ...

I WILL REALLY MISS THIS STORY...THE UNPREDICTABILITY OF THE STORY IS WHAT I LOVED THE MOST!!

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER...TAKE A BOW DEAR!!!

Edited by arnavbarun - 12 years ago

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

arshi n baby will b happy forever...

aman-anji-dev will be together...😳

nice ending...👏

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Beautiful! Its the only word with which i could describe this story!

The ending left a very unusual feeling in my heart! I dont know how to describe it whether its happiness or longing for more or what.

But i simply loved it Zehra! One of your Best works ever and will always be remembered! I expect an Epilogue! :) Hope you give us one.

Loved it Dammit! And will Miss it for sure! :(

PS: Khushi is a gem of a person who is very rare to find.Arnav is one Lucky dude!

Damn i still missed to be on the first page even after you posted the chapter for 6 pages. Look at my luck! Hmph!

Edited by GayuArnav - 12 years ago

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un.complicated

@un.complicated

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

That was an unexpected finish but a beautiful ending nonetheless! Thank you for writing this amazing story, it will remain as one of my favourites; and I think that you ended it perfectly. Left a lot to the imagination! :)

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binimoti

@binimoti

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Beautiful ending so happy happy

Arnav and Khushi no matter will be happy but you made Anjali and Aman a pair and made me shocked and gave them a happy ending as well

Truly an amazing writer

Marvellous piece feel very freatful that I had a chance to read it

And thankyou for your continuous pm

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

A beautiful ending which underlines the fact that everybody deserves a second chance and it is human to err and divine to forgive...The only unexpected thing for me was Dev being Aman's child...Thanks dear for such a classic story and timely PMs...