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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Gosh!!!

How do you manage it , dear!!!

Each time i read any of your update i found myself sitting at the edge of my seat and really i found myself entirely in a different world.

The Music selection, You actually give your best to each chapter. Whether , it is about the words , the emotions or the background music. It gave me that intense feeling. I actually don't know how to say what i felt. I m not that good at words. I would just say that whatever you wrote , i actually visualized it , everything. And , this is the reason i have such an intense effect .

You said that you don't update regularly these days , so may be you thought that we have had made ourselves busy and engaged for some other writer's. But, see this is my favorite writer , for whom i can wait and wait , because i know when she return it will be like bang on target. Worth waiting !!!

Loved the Update!!!

Continue soon!!!

~Dee~

(I changed my username , hope you recognize me😉)

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Shinja

@Rainbow_petals

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

Awesome chapter..
The mist, air , fog was making the house more mysterious..
Must have been so hard for Kashi to leave her house but good thing is they both are together..
What's with that lady..
Nor pallavi or lakshmi then maybe Devaki????
Its too interesting..

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Welcome back dear🤗superb update!they both left but hope these mysteries of past dont follow them.sad for kashi, noone their for farewell & she has to leave her beloved ancestral place..

she was deviki wasnt she? i hope deviki will help arshi in getting a bright future which that poor woman didnt get!

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

First of, thanks for updating in the midst of all that's going on with you. Thank you.

I am sucked into the mystery and spell of Kalarikkal House again.

Seems like Kashi is stepping into a fog herself. Some place of which she has no clear vision herself is now her destination. The new type of clothes ... a new approach to life for her. The silent unsure unseeing demeanor... the tentative steps to her new future.

How would her father and sister be able to have seen her go? Their not being there while sad also made sense to me. This was not a willing voyage, it was a condemnation of sorts, a tearing away from the roots and the pain was palpable to me.

Arnav will be getting the house but what will he lose in the coming days? On the edge of my seat to know.

Haven't said how much I love you and your writing in days, so here I do.

Again, thanks for updating.

🤗

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

so kashi's father made d decision for her in d end...

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Gosh i felt sadness n fear!! Both equally!! So Kashi went with Arnav without any protest?? N the woman in the window!! What was her feeling?? Was she happy or sad?? Where was Pallavi?? Intense chapter!! awesome!!

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

i just start reading ur ff yesterday
their were small update but yet with big impact
oke i have too manny questions???
1) devaki and laksmi ??are not they arnav bcz (His long hair that curled haphazardly swung wildly with his movements. His pace had been slow when he started but now...) in dream 1 he dreamd about it
but she also
2) WHO WAS THE CHILD OF DEVKI WAS IT SOMEBODY of kashi familie
3) why are their so many people died is that bcz they kill devki in the house and stole her child
4)why the man left devki after 2 years
5)why kashi father send unmarried daughter with a stranger (but he know some how that it shd be done)
6)is she not going to marry him bcz she is manglik???
plz plz someone plz ans my questions i dont understand
much 😕

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

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I had goosebumps broke all over my body when i finished reading the chapter...your way of writing always makes me feel like I am a character there..I felt like it was me who was leaving the KH. Finally they left...now what?? .btw, the stare from the window was bit spooky...

Edited by dreamymaya - 12 years ago