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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Friends...Here is a new OS ...I know I have many FF/SSs to update but this one is special...i am writing a light OS after long...all my FFs are sad ones...hope you will like this OS... plz bear me with the mistakes ...😊




P.S- Thanx Himani for this Awesome Siggy ..Luv u swthrt🤗



Moon was peeping through the window...he was trying hard to get the view inside...an angel was lying on her bed...resting on her stomach...her baby pink satin night dress ended just below her thighs...she was moving her legs in a carefree manner and as a result of which her anklets were adding a beautiful melody to the deep silence of the night...

She was wearing a confused yet serious expression on her beautiful face...as if she was trying hard to think something...holding her pen in between her lips...pressing it with her lips...she wrote something...and blushed a deep shade of red...biting her lower lip..

She kept writing with a sweet expression on her beautiful face...her each and every words were reminding her about HIM...his angelic face...sharp features...deep chocolaty crown eyes...perfect nose...beautifully carved lips...perfectly shaped cheek bones...he was just PERFECT..a perfect greek god...

The naughty glint in those chocolaty brown eyes...that angelic smile which enlightens her day...his silky smooth hair ...they look so unreal...how can someone's hair be so soft and silky..she always felt an uncontrollable desire of moving her finger in those hair...whenever she did so ..the pout on his handsome face...trying hard to give an angry expression but failing...he always looked oh-so-adorable that very moment..

She was lost in the thoughts of her prince charming..the love of her life.his mere thought always made her go weak on her knees...she felt his warm breath on her bare shoulder...it made her dizzy...her eyes were already closed...in the darkness...only his angelic face was shining.she felt his soft lips on her bare creamy skin...her breaths became heavier with each passing moment...

Ohh swayam...look...wat have you done to me...i can't even stay away from you for two days...i keep hallucinating about you...she muttered under her breath...breathing heavily ..someone smirked listening to her words...

His lips traveled all over the bare part of her back...and he pulled down the strip of her night dress...to get more access to her creamy silky sensuous skin...

She was completely out of her senses by that time...and kept on moaning his name...she was lost in her own dream land...where she was in his embrace...and nothing else mattered...she kept moaning his name and turned around...now she was lying on her back...her diary was lying a bit far from her...on the bed...unprotected...

She felt his wet lips on hers...she smiled against his lips...and gave in completely ...he bite her lower lip gently and sucked all the sweetness stored in it...she parted her lips slightly giving him access to enter her mouth...he smirked against her lips...


And she heard his voice...


You lost the bet wifey...

Score 1-0

He whispered in a seductive tone...near her ear...she felt his warm breath on her nape...shiver ran through her body...

Here it is...in my hands...i got ur Diary ...finally ...now I can read it.he said with a smirk on his oh-so-perfect face...

She jerked hearing his voice...and opened her eye...he was sitting in front her...on the bed...and in his hands ...she found her "Dear Diary"..


Swa...swayam...tum...tum sach me yahan...tum toh delhi me the...u lier...tum ne...tumne mujhe kaha ki tum tum kal aaoge...she was astonished ...to find him standing in front of her...he was still looking like a dream to her...or someone who just came out of her dreams...


You have to save your Diary Sharon...or else...she bite her lower lip...in anticipation...and a slight blush tip toed to her face..turning her cheeks into crimson red...she was still lost in her dream world...she shook her head wildly to shoo away his thoughts...


Give me my diary back...NOW...she shouted...it helped her to come out of his trance...

Sach me matlab...tumhe kya laga princess..me koi sapna hu...awww...my baby...was dreaming about me...haaa...kya dekha sapne me...tell na...

He was laughing his heart out...teasing her...


He standing in front her and moved the diary in front of her eyes...challenging her ...to catch it...


She tried to touch it...he kept his hand little higher ...and it was out of her reach...she was jumping like a 5 year old...jumping under a mango tree...trying to get the sweet taste of mango...she hated her height that very moment and cursed god for giving him great height ...


She always loved the height difference between them ...she reached till his heart. ...When ever they used to hug...she could hear his melodious heart beats...which chanted her name...passionately...


She finally patted her foot on the ground out of frustration and stood still...he again got the dairy to her level and teased her...


Tell me naa baby...kya dekha sapne me...my naughty siren ...he said again...with a naughty breath taking smile on his face...


How the hell do you know that I was dreaming about you...koi aur bhi toh ho sakta he...she tried to take revenge...not accepting her defeat...


Haha...its written on ur crimson red cheeks that you were dreaming about me sweet heart...and my dear...you were moaning my name...so seductively...he teased her...


Score 2 - 0

She counted in her mind...you cant loose it Sharon...Sharon Raiprakash...correction....Sharon Swayam Shekhawat ne harna nhi sikha...she told herself...


She was busy giving the inspiring speech to herself and when she remembered his presence and the reason behind their tom and jerry chasing sequence...she recalled her Diary...her Dear Diary...


Mr Swayam Shekhawat ...u have to pay for this ...give me my diary back...she roared at him...

I am too fast for you...catch me if you can...Mrs Sharon Swayam Shekhawat ...he ran for his life ...holding her diary in his hand...

They were running across the room like maniacs ...finally swayam stopped for a moment and turned around ...sharon who was running behind him ...unable to control herself ...fell on him...she was lying on him... her head was on his chest ...his face was covered with her silky tangles ...their hearts were beating in unison ...swayam tried to get up...but she was on him... he gave a quick peck on her lips and his fingers traveled her creamy silky bare back...her full lips seemed so inviting to him...he was drowning in her green orbs...when he recalled the reason behind their bet...Her Dear Diary...

He quickly rolled over her and sat on the bed...she sat on the bed and kept looking at her diary...her beautiful greenish eyes were requesting him not to open it...

He smirked and opened the diary...the page where she kept the bookmark...

She went stiff...her face was pale...as if she got caught red handed while doing some crime...

He stared at her face once and a naughty smile crept on his perfectly carved lips...she was giving him death glares...not to read her dairy...

You...you cant read it...its my personal diary...she said...

What personal wifey...i am your husband...no personal thingy with me...he teased her...

You cant read it...she shouted..

I am reading it sweetheart..he mocked her...

He started reading in a dramatic tone...to tease her ..

Intezar ki wo pehli pehli raaten

sard raaton ki wo mulaqatein

He looked up...she blushed to a deep shade of red...and lowered her gaze...she hide her face with her hands and peeped through the gap of her fingers...looking at him...

wo uljhi saanse kuch baatein karti thi

jab meri julfen tujhse lipat ti thi

wo kampte hothon ka chuna

wo dil me kasak sa uthna

He read the line and stared at her...she looked up...and found him staring at her...with glint of naughtiness in his deep chocolaty brown eyes..

aapke naam ka jadoo sa chalta tha

sare gamon se dur hume le jata the

He smiled at the beautiful lines written by her...stretched his arms towards her and took her into his embrace...she quickly buried her head in his chest...

wo raatein ab akeli si lagti he

pehchane chahre ab paheli se lagte he

He caressed her hair and kissed them... She adjusted herself in his arms into a comfortable position...

aaj bhi intezar he dil ko

un haathon ka chune ka

un saason ka mehkna ka

dilon ke fir se chehkene ka

His fingers started moving on her bare creamy skin... she started unbuttoning his shirt and kissed his bare chest...

intezar ki wo pehli pehli raaten

Dilon me dabi huyi kuch ankahee battein...

He lifted her chin and made her look into his eyes...his deep brown eyes were full of love...love for her...

His deep dark brown orbs were fixed on her angelic face ...her beauty was beyond words to explain ...her glowing complexion was enhanced with the moonlight falling on her through the window ... Her face was glowing with the cool silver light on it ... his pure and perfect moon was giving tough competition to the one outside with many imperfections ...that moon was seriously jealous with this divine beauty in front of him...a small and heartfelt smile was painted on her pretty face.. giving his heart the reason to beat harder...and... harder ...

Her big beautiful hazel eyes...he was drowning in those ...they were his personal brand of alcohol...they made him loose his senses whenever he looked into them...her tiny perfect nose...her beautifully carved lips...her smudged lip-gloss due to the kiss they shared few minutes earlier...they were so inviting...

In no time he placed his lips on her soft lips ...he kissed her gently...the kiss went on to be passionate one...he bite her lower lip...she moaned his name...it excited him ...she moved her fingers in his hair ...he was holding her tiny waist ...his hands started moving on her bare back...she parted her lips slightly and he entered her mouth enjoying the sweetness...the sweetness of their love...


Score 2-2 ...it was a tie...finally...


After few minutes he broke the kiss as she was out of breath...he planted a trail of feather kisses on her shoulder...her neck...her jaw line...


So my princess missed me...hmmm...he said...stll kissing her jaw line...


She was completely in his trance...under the effect of the kiss they just shared...unable to find any words...she kept quite...


That was so beautiful baby...why were you hiding that poem from me...he inquired ...with a pout on his face...

She smiled at his adorableness...

I thought...

Ummm...

I thought ...you will make fun of me...i can't write like you...you write so beautifully...she answered with a cute expression on her beautiful face...

I won't...you poem was far better than the ones I write...love you princess..

Love you too baby...she placed her soft lips on his...next moment they were lost in their world of dreams..where no-one existed except the two of them...


Only moans kept ringing in the deep silence of the night creating beautiful melody along with the sweet music of the wind charm hanging in the window...


Moon was still peeping through the window...may be he was trying to locate the central character of that night...


The Diary...


Which was getting crushed under the weight of two angels ...busy making love to each other...


❤️❤️❤️



hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment ... i will wait for your comments and feedback ...

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
res nish

unres

awesome os di... 😳
loveed it...
sharon writing her diary swayam's sudden entry..
Swaron romance...
swayam teasing sharon...
then the chase...
and then the soothing end...
The os was indeed a pleasure read...
😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
res himi

unres

Hello di...

WOW...u back with new os.. aww..its too romantic...so beautifully written...

i guess this time also i am the one who read it first...yippieee...its really feels great di...i hope aage bhi me hi first read karu..:)

the description of night...and the way sharon writing and blushing to herself was so adorable...anybody can fall for a girl like her... their kiss wow...hehehe..poor sharon , thought she was hallucinating him...and our majnu boy...in naughty avtar...great.. And the best part come...the war for diary...hehe...swayum in full on teasing mode...disnt allow sharon to get hold on her loving diary...loved the poem di..although i read that before also...but every time i feel something strange...dont knw why!!! it was a complete package...love..emotion...teasing...naughtiness...every thing present there...i just luvd it... i hope we get more n more awesome os's from you... love you di...


ur RockStar


Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
res nehal
unres
The Diary ,

Do i even need to mention how beautifully it has been penned down ...👏👏

well, it had to be after all my great friend and a superb writer has written it.🤗 coming to the OS It was POETIC ...not just the lines written in the middle but the whole OS...the whole flow of it took me to another world...

Sharon hallucinating Swayam After marriage also... well when i started reading i dint think Swaron would be married.😲

And Swayan teasing sharon knowing well enough she was missing him a lot...poor girl she has a SMART HUSBAND!

But i love the way you wrote those lines...every word shouted how much they loved each other!👏

Aww..the poor dairy... SWARON MUST BE HEAVY! 😆

the way the story...Ah!!! later i will go on and on complementing you...this would become an OS then!

Love you partner ❤️
Nehal
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deepu di 🤗
res
Sorry for the extreme late reply di , stuck with exams and studies 😳
unres


Super awesome os deepu di !!
beautifully written 👏
This was one romantic OS
Sharon missing swayam and thinking of him as dream was really cute .
all the feeling of swayam and sharon are well described .
its always fun to read abt a naughty swayam and sharon all blushing ..☺️
The height difference wala part and the score thingy was adorable .
The poem was fantastic di , app toh pure star ⭐️ ho , itni achi hindi mein poem and the way u linked the versus with the story was really nice .
in all fab concept , totally loved it 😃
keep coming with such wonderful os's..
thanks for the PM.

Love you
Tanuka

Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
res suku

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Deeps *sighs* I love you yaar, you have got some special charm in your pen i feel, a romantic pen is what i would say😳. Kya mast aur khoob likka hai yaar, I am so crazy for this OS🤪Pata nai kithni baar maine pada ye OS, i have lost count, jab be mai udas hu tab be, it is like personal happiness pill😉😛. Yaar deeps the ambience you have created around swaron is sooo romantic, the payal on sharons legs tinkling inviting swayam, their nok jhonk and end mai super cool romance☺️ hayeee how love my swaron. The shayari, and sharon cuddling in swayams side is so enchanting and so dreamy Swaron are meant to be forever, and deeps you are a born writer. Each time i read the OS i find my on different interpretations, ek din nahi pada acha nai lagta muje😎, that fantastic is your writing bringing so much tenderness in ones heart⭐️. LOve you plz write another OS deeps plzzz

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

*Edited*


First of all, I am really sorry for such a lateee reply considering how u always comment first on my updates. Very sorry😭

Ok coming to the OS..it was...AWESOME!!!😃 Super super super romantic and OMG u made it so sweet and well awesome! Since I am under 18😉 I cannot comment further about the sensuous kisses but all I can say is that they made me go all happy inside!😊

I loved the poem ..did U write it?

All in all it was just superb! As always! A pleasure to read! And to imagine the scene..Ooh!!😆❤️
I'm blushing now😳

Sorry again for the late reply

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res t
very long os dips
baaki kk kal😆😆
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful 👏
Loved ittt 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for Riya
unres
The diary was again a gem from your bag deep di ! Sharon's shyness and Swayum teasing her (dreamy mode). The lines that you put as Sharon's shayari were amazing.. It explained her undying love for Swayum and the way you made Swayum react to every single line, that touched me to no extent. Everytime I read Swaron's ff or ss or an os I am left totally mesmerised and if its your writing then I am speechless ! Keep writing and updating plz plz plz.. and plz ask nehal di to update soon ! thank you love you :-)

love,
Riya <3
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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