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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Deeps 🤗

This was one romantic and dreamy OS. Loved the light feelings you had throughout. Its always a pleasure to read when Swayam gets naughty and Sharon gets blushing..you achieved just that. The poem was beautifully penned. The signature by Himani is really awesome as well.

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Wow it was nice one it was awesome. Sharon and her romantic line . Sharon dream it's treat to read Sharon pov . I loved it

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Tanya Babbar

@tan-ya

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

👏di...its breathtaking😳 im reading it again n again😃 its beautiful... the poem... everything👏

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Aaawww it was shhhooo cute... Sharon was missing Swayam that she thought he was a dream...

And height difference part was a cute thought...
The scorings were also too cute actually SwaRon are only the cutest...

Awesome idea deep ... Seriously loved it..

Loved how you have portrayed the whole scene beautifulky with your words that I could imagine this happening in front of me...

Awesome concept babe... Keep writing more..

And thanks for the pm ((:

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Aww deeps...it was damn adorable... 😊

Firstly, sharons beautiful poem, then the way swayam snatched her dear diary, the way Sharon blushed and got lost in his eyes and also the way u described their height difference...everything was so perfect and I cudnt find any flaws in it... 😳

Too good...do keep writing and u r just awesome...
😊

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

comment edited.. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69712156

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Ayee hayee;-) What a ROMANTIC and LOVELY update yaar;-):-) Uff Swayam is too Hot to Handle;-);-) Loved Swaron's sweet moments:-):-) Great work:-):-)

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Deep this is so beautiful and pure and romantic...loved it so much and i have no idea why am i still blushing 😛

Love the way you described Sharon lying on bed with her anklets making noise and her blushing thinking of Swayam..it was adorable. Swayam teasing her about losing bet, making her lose control. Love the fact that she corrected herself and addressed herself as Mrs. Sharon Swayam Shikhawat awww. The height difference thing Sharon jumping like a 5 year old in front of a mango tree 😆 waise to i can only see TanHa while reading this OS but this particular part made me remember them so much. The poem was wow...awesome work..loved it. Thnx for PM and keep them coming 😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

That was a beautiful OS !! I loved how lost Sharon was that she didn't even realise that Swayam was really there !! It was adorable how Swayam kept teasing her about the diary !! And when he started reading what she wrote, the poem was beautiful and I loved how she snuggled up to him and just sat in his embrace !! That was by far my fav part of the OS !!