MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#2 link THREAD 3

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

cont soon dear

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

london fr 2 yrs...nw wht will geet do...i knw wht geet done its justified wht maan is doing...but dis is tooo much...sab kuch ka ek haad hota hai...aur maan haad se bahar ja rahe hai...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

loved d poem

👏Ab kis liye rooti ho tum
apnay daman ko askoon se bhagooti ho tum
tum ne he to kaha tha na mujh se aik din
"tumhein yeh ghalt fehmi hy k
tum meri zindagi ka hasil ho
tum meri zindagi mein shamil ho
tumhein ghalt fehmi hy k
mera dil sirf teray liye dhadkta hy
meri ragoon mein laho ban k tu behta hy
yeh tumhari ghalat fehmi hy"
theeik teri har baat theik
par jaana
tum he chahti thi na mein iss dunia ki bheer mein
kaheen kho jaoo
tujh se itna door chala jaoon
teri yaadon mein bhi na aaon
so mein ne tera hukam maan lia
judaai ko apna muqadar jaan lia
par jaana
tum kyun ab meray pichay bhagti hoo
kyun har chahray mein mera aks tlasti ho
tumhari aankon mein
aansoon ka mustaqil daira kyun hy
teray dehaan mein rehta har
har dam mera chehra kyun hy
batao na ab kis liye roti ho tum
tum ne he kaha tha na
k hammary darmayan bas nafrat ka rishta hy
so ab kis mohabbat ka wasta de k maana rahi ho mujhy
baatao na jaana kyun apni oor phir se bula rahi ho mujhy
ab kiss liye dukhi ho tum
ab kis liye roti ho tum👏

Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

amazing update...

geet struggle more to win maans trust n heart...

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

wow
what an update!!
with an full on dhamaka at the end
now thats what i call acliffhanger!
she worked hard, toiled hard and endured all harshness that came her way only in expectation of a few words of praise from her beloved
but poor geet this maan is hard to handle
he had something else in store for her
a 2 year project in london😲
now what?????????!!!!!!!!
well, am sure geet will think off something to ward off tjis project and be by maan's side!
no way she is going to london
waiting for the next part
please continue soon
will be waiting