MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#2 link THREAD 3

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

wow great story pl\z update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm

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Mayamaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Awesome update

poem was hurt touching I loved it

Ab kis liye rooti ho tum
apnay daman ko askoon se bhagooti ho tum
tum ne he to kaha tha na mujh se aik din
"tumhein yeh ghalt fehmi hy k
tum meri zindagi ka hasil ho
tum meri zindagi mein shamil ho
tumhein ghalt fehmi hy k
mera dil sirf teray liye dhadkta hy
meri ragoon mein laho ban k tu behta hy
yeh tumhari ghalat fehmi hy"
theeik teri har baat theik
par jaana
tum he chahti thi na mein iss dunia ki bheer mein
kaheen kho jaoo
tujh se itna door chala jaoon
teri yaadon mein bhi na aaon
so mein ne tera hukam maan lia
judaai ko apna muqadar jaan lia
par jaana
tum kyun ab meray pichay bhagti hoo
kyun har chahray mein mera aks tlasti ho
tumhari aankon mein
aansoon ka mustaqil daira kyun hy
teray dehaan mein rehta har
har dam mera chehra kyun hy
batao na ab kis liye roti ho tum
tum ne he kaha tha na
k hammary darmayan bas nafrat ka rishta hy
so ab kis mohabbat ka wasta de k maana rahi ho mujhy
baatao na jaana kyun apni oor phir se bula rahi ho mujhy
ab kiss liye dukhi ho tum
ab kis liye roti ho tum

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

THE PAST SHOWS HOW MUCH GEET HURT MAAN FOR HER EGO

AND SHE DID NOT JUDGE HIS CALIBRE

BUT LOVED THE POEM

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

I can't blame Maan, coz he fears like before She ll again break his heart & will stamp on it.

And I really want geet to pay hard to get him back, as this will help them to bring their relationship more stronger.

But though I don't want Geet to win so easily, but for Maan its needed coz his happiness is his Mishty.

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fantesy

@fantesy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

superb update...smtimes i feel bad 4 geet bt d truth is she is d one who spoiled evrythn in first place,,,,,

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

superb, beautiful n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...