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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

unres...


yeaaayyy

me 2nd widout pm...

even me devil...

hi - 5 chwetu...

~~update~~

itna chotu???

haila!!!

tussi kahan ho?

bahar aao pit dalungi...

itna chotu koi deta hein bhala?

newazzz...

i jus loved it...

bechara rey...

waapis ate hi heart attack mil gaya usko...

lol...

i jus loved d 'jhetji' waala scene...

n kriya nt eating thinking of his health...

hayeee...

me flat...

please update soon...

n haan.,...

IT BETTER BE BIG...!!!

warna apna devil pana dikha dungi...


haaww main dar gyi

chal dedungi
big update

tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi
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Posted: 12 years ago
sapna tu update ka kya karegi...cmnt toh karti nhi hai ;/
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kritz jaldi kar na update !
Meko res karke sone jaana hai !
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Posted: 12 years ago



At night...

In party...

Swayam and kria enters party as a perfect couple...kriaa is wearing black saree and swayam black suit...

and after some tym our hero enters wearing black harmini suit...he's looking damn hot...all girls go gaga over him...and kria get jealous but she did nt show her inner feeling on her face...like all staff goes to greet him wiith their family & wifes...swayam also goes to greet him...and intentionally he put his one arm around her bare waist...and after seeing this rey clenched his fist...and jaws tightened...he want to make swayam red and blue...he ignores swyam...who comes to greet him...and leaves from there...and goes to the bar...and gulp drinks...(no hard drink)...he's in anger beyond limts...

After some tym couple dance announced...then kriaa and swayam nods to each other...and then swayam goes towards the dj...and then the song played...AA zara kareeb se...from MURDER 2...

then they start dancing...only they are on the floor...they do some passionate moves...all look towards them in awe...put there's is one pair of eyes who looking towards them in anger...his eyes were shooting daggers...this whole world will burn with his one look...he gulp one more drink...and leaves from the party...

After party over...swayam and kria...leave the place...but swayam have to go to some urgent work...so kriaa alone goes to the mansion...she going towards her room...murmuingthe same song...and them some one pulled her in a room...she's going to scream but a manly palm...cover her mouth...batane ki zaroorat hai kon hai...off course rey...aisi harkatein aur kon kar sakta hai...ok back to the story...

he's looking at kria with anger filled eyes...his one hand covers her mouth...and one hand is n her waist...same place where swayam place his hand...he's rubbing his touch with his touch...and kriaa is trying to come out from his grip...he uncovers her mouth...and hold her waist...with his both hand...

K :rey ye kya kar rehe ho chodo mujhe...(but rey tightened his hold around her waist),...chodo...

R :kyo mazza nhi aa rha...ab wo swayam tumhe jyada maza karwata...

K :rey chodiye mujhe...

R :kyo...pehle toh meri baho main aane k bahane dhundhti thi...ab jab ho...toh dur kyo jaana chahti hon...bade maza se nach rhi thi us swayam k saath...pehle toh woh champu tha...ab kya hua...(now kria is also angry)

K :ha nach rhi thi uske sath...aapko kya...pati hai mere...aur aapse lakh gunna ache insaan hai...aur waise aapko kya farak padta hai...main kisi k saath main bhi rahu...oh jalan ho rhi mujhe swayam k saath dekh k...

(then he hold her hair in his fist...and pull her face near his face)

R :ha ho rhi thi jalan pata hai kyo...pyaar karne laga hoon tumse...I am in love with u kria...I love u...(tears started flowing from her eyes...and a small smile come on her lips)...(he loosened his grip and hold her face in his both palms)

...ha pyaar karne laga hoon tumse...bohot bohot pyaar...tumhare bina...ek pal bhi maut k barabar hai...plz kria mujhse kabhi dur mat jaana...ha main maanta hoon...bohot galtiyan ki hai maine...bohot hurt kiya tumhe us din...par ab main badal gya hoon kria...ye cassnova rey...ab bas kria ka rey hai...tumhare pyaar ne badal diya mujhe...I want to marry u kria...I want to love u...like never before...I want to be a father of aur child...

K :ye wish toh aapki poori hone wali hai...aap papa banne wale ho...I'm pregnant...

R ;kya...par kaise...hum toh...(then he remember the party night...when in anger he forget to use protection)...oh god...

K :aa...aap khush nhi ho...(then he saw kria who is in verge of crying)

R:no..no baby I'm happy...wo achanak aise tumhne bataya I dont know how to react...but baby main really khush hoon...

K :sachi

R :muchi...(then he kiss her forehead)...acha ab batao...ye swayam k saath kya chal rha tha...

K :wo wo aap ko jealous karne k liye...taaki aap apna pyaar confess kare...

R :kya...use humare bare main pata hai...?

K :ha...aur usene hi hume milane k liye plan banaya...

R :wow...maine nhi socha tha us bramhchari ka dimag in baaton main bhi chalta hai...

K :rey use aise mat boliye...usne humari help ki...ab humai baari hai...use uske pyaar se milawaye...

R :pyaar ?

K :ha..then she told him everything abt swayam)

R :hmmm ab humari baari hai...but ab toh swaron k beech sab theek ho gya hai na...ab bus subha use surprise milne wala hai...

K :surprise...?

R :hmmm bas dekhte jao...aur ab tum so jao...meri beti bhi bohot thak gyi hogi...

K :beti...?...oh hello Mr.singhania...beta hoga...

R :nhi beti...meri pyaari si cute si beti

K :beta

R :beti...

(and their cute si fight goes on after getting tired,,,both drifted to sleep in each other arms)

Morning...

Swayam enters the mansion...and found some change in air...he going to his room upstais...when a female hands cover his eyes from back...

sw touch hands...

s :sharon...

Sh :swayam har baar tum mujhe kaise pehchan jaate ho...

S :pyaar jo karta hoon tumse...par tum yahan kaise...agar rey bhai ne dekh liya toh saara plan chpat ho jayega...

_ :koi plan chopat nhi hoga...

He look towards rey whos coming with kria hand in hand...

R :ab tumne itna sab kiya...toh uska prize toh tumhe milna chaiye...toh ye rha tumhare prize...aur waise plans ache banate hon...(he looks down...)...ae neeche kya dekh rhe ho...sharon ki taraf dekho...kabse intezar kar rhi hai tumhari baho main aane k liye...

K :rey...aap chalo yahan se...kyo pareshan kar rhe ho...

R :are main toh...

K :rey samjha karo thodiprivacy chaiye inhe...humare samne hi thodi...

S :main main sharon ko room dikha deta hoon...

K :ha ha room dikhao...(both are going upstairs...when rey stops them and )

R :swayam aaj office jane ki koi zaroorat nhi hai...enjoy...and winks...then they finally goes upstairs)

R :ab um bhi chale soon to be mrs. Reyansh singhania ...and winks...

K :rey aapko uske ilawa kuch sujta nhi haina...

R :are main toh doctor k paas jaane ko kehrha tha...

K :doctor k paas...?

R :ha doctor k paas...appointment hai na aaj ki...oh waise tumne kya socha

K :nh..nhi kuch nhi...

R :batao na

K :kuch nhi...

R :are batao na...batao na kria plz...

K :uurrrggghhh shut up rey...

In car

R :kria

K :kya hai...

R :tumne mujhe I love u too..nhi bola...

K :main kyo bolu...main nhi bolti...

R :are ye kya baat hui...plz bolo na...

K :nhi bolungi nhi bolungi...nhi bolungi...

R :acha main bol deta hoon...I LOVE U

a blush crept on her face...he saw her face

and

R :Haye...(and she blush more...and finally hides her face in his chest)

finally ended...

so guyz hows the whole ss

I hope u like this last part...

Plz give ur likes and cmnts...

Long comments plz

silent readers...plz atleast comment now...

Precap :epilogue

Love u all

kriti

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res ! :D

Unres :P
I know... Maine har jagah res karke rakha hai :P
and last ke 3-4 parts mein ek bhi jagah unres nahi kia hai...
So mein saare parts ke unres issime karing !

Ekdam fab update kritz !!
Pehele rey ka kriya ke saath itna bura behave karna...
Then kriya pregnant !
Swaron ki misunderstanding clear !
Then KriYam ka plan ! 😆
Kriya in saree, sindoor, bangles ! 🤣 🤣
Rofl !! Gawd isski tabiyat toh thik hai na :P
Rey shocked !!
And jeth ji meine toh apko dekha hi nahi 🤣 🤣
lolz.. Bechaara rey sochta hoga ki ye kya ho raha hai bechaare ke saath ! :D
itna bhadak gaya ki parathe chod kar hi bhag gaya 😆
then party mein swayam ke hands kriya ke waist pe...
Then unka dance with passionate moves !!
Lolzz.. Rey toh jal ke aag babula ho gaya !!
Awww... Finally rey confessed !
Kriyaansh mummy papa banne wale hai.. Aww !

And their cute "beti hogi.. Nahi beta hoga" fight ! Awwieee...
Rey swayam ko teasing 😆

R :ab um bhi chale soon to be mrs. Reyansh singhania ...and winks...
K :rey aapko uske ilawa kuch sujta nhi haina...
R :are main toh doctor k paas jaane ko kehrha tha...
K :doctor k paas...?
R :ha doctor k paas...appointment hai na aaj ki...oh waise tumne kya socha
K :nh..nhi kuch nhi...
R :batao na
K :kuch nhi...
R :are batao na...batao na kria plz...
K :uurrrggghhh shut up rey...


lolz i loved it... Rey teasing kriya :P

Uahhh... Ye FF khatam... 😭
i will miss it 😭

Epilogue jaldi post kariyo !

So here is your lamba comment on behalf of last 3-4 parts :D
Edited by hetalt29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res.
Unress. .
Yuppieee!!!. . . . .
Yuppieee!!!. . . . .
Yuppieee!!!. . . . .
Me second. . . .
Yaaa. . . .
*dhinchika dhinchika*
*disco diwaane*
ok,meri excitment khatam. . . .
Cuming to the update. . .
Update was super awsome. . . . .
Ha ha ha kriyum making rey jeolous. . . . .
Ha ha ha. . . . .
*Kriyum ka dance dekh ker rey. . . .woww. .
Rey itna jeolous ho gaya ki mere cell be hot ho gaya. . . . . .*
At last rey confsd his true feeling to kriya. . .
Woww. . . .
And kriyaansh ka beti-beta vala fight was super cute. . . . .
Rey ka swayum ke liye thankyou gift really suprisd me. . . .
Ha ha ha rey kria ko doc ke pass leke jaane ki baat kr raha tha aur kriya. . .wow kuch aur soch rahi thi . . .ha ha ha. . . . . . .
Perfct end diya di aapne. . . . . .
Vaise aapne epilogue dene ke baare mai toh socha hai na?????
If nahi socha hai,
toh jaldi soch lo. . . .
Bcoz mai aapko epilogue diye bina IF chodne nahi dungi. . . . . . . .
"Order" sumjho ya "requst" sumjho yaa "punishment" *5 months k liye IF chodd k jaa rahi ho iss liye*
its ur choice. . . .
abb itna bada comment diya hai,
abb epilogue bhi bada dena. . . .
Chalo bye epilogue jab aap dogi tab milenge. . .
Bye,
and thanks 4 d super awsome update. . .
And iss bhi mai bina pm k aayi . . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
madhu jaldi unres kar...I want to read ur cmnts
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Posted: 12 years ago
btw u r d 2nd one to cmnt...congrats
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha abhi unres kerti hu.
Phle padh lu. . .
Yaa i kn me second . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lo ker diya unres. . .
Abb padh k batao kaisa hai??

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