SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal
dont know why m feeling khushi is suffering from some kind of illness here. One request Smita pls dont kill either khushi or arnav at the end of it. Arnav is behaving like a jerk here. Absolute diskled the part where he was being skeptical about Khushi n Sashi's relationship. Really feeling so bad for Khushi..eager to read the next update..

Won't kill anyone, sweetheart. I promise.😆

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Y is he doing this if it hurts so much...poor khushi:(

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

amazing update...he is a total ASR...he aint understanding what she is going through...thanks for update :)

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

He is hurting as much as she is...

I love the concept, however much hard and rakshas he seems now, he is gonna melt to a puddle. (i am keeping my fingers crossed!!!)

As they say, "the mighty take the hardest fall", so i am going to patiently wait for ASR to turn into Arnav , someone who will love Khushi with his life, but i have an inkling that he is almost halfway there as her pain has started to become his pain.

Thanks for the double updates, maintain the speed of the updates and we all will be singing like canaries to u...😆😉

Edited by swati-89 - 12 years ago

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Smita,😊,

You have really taken my breath away!😲

Just cant imagine you writing this piece!🤔

What versatality! 😲

I'm stumped!!😕

You are full of surprises!!! and I'm floored!!! 😉

Ha ha ha!!!!!!!!😆

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Smita firstly thanks for your generosity over a lousy weekend for not only coming up with a new SS with 4 parts in one day to replace Smiling Girl which, I incidentally still feel you ended prematurely, please take that forward as well, I want to see Arnav take care of Khushi during her pregnancy & he& Khushi hold their first born in their hands...

I just knew it Arnav would play dirty & hit her where it hurts most. Khushi I think will make the ultimate sacrifice for her Baba & the children staying with them. Do they run an orphanage or something?? Who are these kids?? And what is her relationship to Baba?? This is an amazing story...

Looking forward to your next update tomorrow...

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akvmji

@akvmji

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

this is quite different from your similar writing...hope u make the best ...waiting for the next part..

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jshreya16

@jshreya16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Wow!!!

New SS smita!!!! Can't wait to read more... 😛

Is this the same smita who used to write all lovey dovey n peaceful stories!! 😆 😆 😆

Do continue soon... 😛

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

D transition from short sweet os's n ss's to such an intense ss...it jst highlyts ur versatility smita...keep it up gal...dis is freakin awsum...plzzz continue n pm me wen u do...

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Ohmygod Smitar, first of all, thank you so much for the PM! Second of all, PLEASE PM ME AGAIN ALL THE CHAPTERS :O Because this is an interesting and amazing story! As usual you have written it so beautifully :) Keep em coming!