SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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craziefan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Beautiful and very interesting os ...loving it

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

totally different frm ur writing smita di...

it was really awesome...

nw arnav compelling...khuhi to come to him...

waiting fr next part...

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hira2050

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Wat arnav gonna do next???can't wait for next update:(

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

I thousht so he will be doing something like that!

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Hey plzz update the 5th part too today!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

a wonderful piece of writing, as usual... I thought I wanted to harm the asr in the show wheneverr he hurt khushi and almost destroyed a part of her soul... no words can express what I want to do to him for being so despicably manipulative just so as to make her his mistress... doesn't even have the balls to admit to himself that he fell in love with her at first sight... why so jealous of the males in her life? 'baba' is another name for father, right? can't he guess? or does he have somethinng against the [adoptive] father-daughter relationship, too? apart from sashi sharma, is khushi unwell, too?

all those salwar suits you've chosen for khushi are gorgeous!

you've always brought something extra to all the emotional pieces, and this is no exception... khushi's pain, despair, fear and confusion just leap out the page at one... dark but moving!

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hina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

loved it dear

it is really an amazing one from you

always a different thought

please update soon and do pm me

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laddoo598

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Smita, this is so different that your other stories. Arnav is a jerk of the highest order in this story, he is infuriating!

Poor Khushi, I am guessing she will give in to his demands.

Really looking forward to the next updates, thanks for the pm!

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SanzBarbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

dont know why m feeling khushi is suffering from some kind of illness here. One request Smita pls dont kill either khushi or arnav at the end of it. Arnav is behaving like a jerk here. Absolute diskled the part where he was being skeptical about Khushi n Sashi's relationship. Really feeling so bad for Khushi..eager to read the next update..