SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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Barisa

@shaferoz18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

After ur last SS His Smiling Girl, I was so eagerly waiting for ur next work... I almost cheked all ur updates every few hours and found this new ss today... this one is just awesome..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

wow didnt know you had started another ss
and this seems to be tad darker than the rest
and four updates in one day wow dear
why is he so determined to have her
this obsession will cost him dearly
so these children are her students
dude can you not frighten the poor girl please
what will be her answer
how can she go to him but she cant do anyhting else either can she

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Noni

@sweetnoni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Smitar just 2 gud...im loving this dark story of ures:D
Im so used 2 ure bfull n superb romantic stories that i cant w8 4 more updates 4 this story;)

Continue soon n keep it up!!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Hey!

An amazing SS! I've been hooked on it since reading the first chapter and I can't wait to read further!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

I wonder what happened to Khushi in the past ... did she have some sort of an accident or something ...

What is the deal with Arnav ... I mean he hasn't been linked with models etc, so why is he after Khushi ... Plus, if he is interested in her, why not ask her out on a date and slowly form a relationship with her of a girlfriend ...😕

Anyway, please PM me the next update.

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

I just caught up with the last 3 parts! Amazing and quite different to the other work you have done! I am waiting eagerly to see how this one developes!!

ASR and his 50 Shades of Grey ha??

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

just caught up wow so different from yours other works looks dark im excited cant wait to read more

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bikerider

@bikerider

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Thanks fr three updates. Hmm so ruthless asr. Love the different ackground

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Part 3

Loved the father daughter bonding ... so they both are singers.. awesome.. i think there is something in their past as well... and loved arnav...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Part 4

It seems that kushi is running some kind of orpanage there and from kushi thoughts it seems that she has some physical problems.. as she was talking about bad days... and arnav ..now he is getting villain type... looking forward to the next part... do continue super soon

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Smita,

First of all thanks for the PM make me aware that a new SS have started.You won't believe that Yesterday I was missing your SS so much that I reread His smiling girl once again.Coming to the new SS... Wow...Awesome Concept...I am sure the Rakshas would soon turn into Knight in Armour and he would solve all the distress of his own sweet damsel...Awaiting to see Arnav falling head over heels in love with his Khushi...Will be there to stalk the story everyday .Thanks once again