Life is so unpredictable (SWARON)

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Hi beena! Sorry yaar tholi chi late ho gayi:-P
coming to the first chap, very light and yet very nice:)
i liked your concept of swaron being village boy and girl
and sharon in indian attire i just awesome dear.abhi maine first chap hi padha hai:) next chap padhke comment karti hoon:)

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Wooohhh beena,mindblowing update yaar...ekdum masttt...:)
aila swaron fight kya explain kiya tune yaar...and loved kriyansh romance..and chap end bhi kiya bohot acchi tarah se..readers questioning note pe...egarly waiting for the next part dear...hugs...continue kar ...bohot accha jaa rahi hai yaar...:)

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: d3riya
Yeah frst to cmment..Awiee so cute..dono ladte hi rhte hai n sharon ka siren baj gaya..:p n kriyaansh ka romance just luv it..great job..

thanx for response 😃

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: dips098
WOW beeny...awesome part dear...loved it...the cute and adorable swaron fight...kriyanch romance...loved it...30 mins me 2 baar fight...mast chemistry he ...must say😆😆😆...loved the way u described the rehersal part and sharon bonding with the gang...swaron talking through eyes...awww.. plz update soon dear

thank u deepika
dis tym i was soo confused k ahcha hua ya nahi bt thanx k achcha laga 😃

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: marauder
HAHAHA this update was just fabulous. Their fight was just amusing and their name calling each other just cute. I just loved the update. Really well penned and executed in even better manner. Loved the conversation you have written for SwaRon. It was really good. Nicely developed the chemistry of both in this update. Kriyaansh sequence was also good. Can't wait to read the next part. Update sooner please.

thank u so much for response
it means a lot so thanx for dis😃

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Hi beena! Sorry yaar tholi chi late ho gayi:-P
coming to the first chap, very light and yet very nice:)
i liked your concept of swaron being village boy and girl
and sharon in indian attire i just awesome dear.abhi maine first chap hi padha hai:) next chap padhke comment karti hoon:)

thank u Tanya😃
i badly need d support so thank u so much

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Wooohhh beena,mindblowing update yaar...ekdum masttt...:)
aila swaron fight kya explain kiya tune yaar...and loved kriyansh romance..and chap end bhi kiya bohot acchi tarah se..readers questioning note pe...egarly waiting for the next part dear...hugs...continue kar ...bohot accha jaa rahi hai yaar...:)

once agn thak u 😃
ha kal tak update kar dungi😊