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Posted: 12 years ago
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adorable swaron fight...kriyanch romance...loved it❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sharon fight mach. like alwaysss😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plzz update next part 😭😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey beeny...update dear...when r u going to update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: gunnu1

first, mujhe zorr se maro!!


m sooo sorry again!! ab kya krun mai iss school ka?!?!?! itneee saare pms...den saw urs...sabse pehle khola!! phir bhi 3 din late...


I'm really sorry...I hope aap gussa nhi hoge!!

Coming to d update,

I love ur ff to d core...

Itna unique isse padhke mujhe na darr lagta h ke mere waale ka to itna ghatiya aur purana idea h!!

yr aise koi nhi soch skta inko!!

Salute!! Hats off!!

Nd...I love their fites...

bilkul filmy nhi h nd thats wat I love abt it!!

D gang is like dey were in D3...simple yet adorable...

luv it totally!!

plsss update soon nd mere jaise faltu logon ke comment ka wait mat kra kro...meri tchrs bahut hee burri h!!

bahut roli aur rula bhi diya shayad :p!!
chalo tc gotta rush!!


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Congooo for becoming a Goldie!!



e Gunn u r so cute maar to nai skati me tuje
Thanx for aresate my ss & tera FF ka me wait kar rahi hu me apna update new year day pe kar rai hu means kal so wai for dat
& thank u so much & abhi aja yanha mere ghar pe sahi me party karenge
yeacher yaar itni bhi buri nai hoti koi teachers achachhi walibi hoti he..:D😃
to abb tu bhi new year me naya FF start karde
thanx for comment yaar😃😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nature2

WOW beeny...awesome part dear...loved it...the cute 😉



thank u soo much Niraj😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i'll update soon thanx for concrnt..:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyz i'm trying my best for d update bt though not getting much response bt hope u like d next update & thank u so much for d comment 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyz soo sorry for being soo late b'coz of some reason it's became soo bt hope k mene jyada der nai kar di & aap sab mere story ko bhul nai gaye honge & muje bhi here is d story & new update. Plz kindly ignore mistakes ..:D😃


Chapter 3


Recape

D story start from d swayam who does not belive in love & sharon who is a innocent tup of character jo ek dam alahd type he & jo life ke har rang ko jina chahti he & jiti bhi he uske college me chary function hota he jisme Mumbai se dance group dance k liye ta he & der she met swayam & dono k bich sirf abhi tak fight hi hui he & last me jab Sharon k papa ka kuch phone ata he & she is going outside & dat time wo swayam she takrati he & dey both in LLHH scene & d next part is here



Dey both lost in each others eyes & swayam has hold her tightly as if he were d only protector of her & dono me se koi bhi nai bol raha he Rey soch raha he abhi don start ho jayenge & bt abhi tak wo sirf ek dusre ko hi dekh rahe he jese kuch to he undono ke bich jo unhe bhi samaj nai aa raha bt because of some noise dey came in sence & this tym for everyone's amazamant don one fight nai kiya swaym ne use bade hi protective manner se use sahi se kada kiya & she just leave dat place for some unknowing reasne kya hua wo bhi nai samaj paa rai thi soo she just left d place

Rey : kya baat he swayam abhi lag raha he k tu thoda mature ho raha he tine usse fight nai kiya & (teaseing mode)wtz der in her eyes k tu wnha se apni ankhe hi nai hata paa raha tha haa ???

Swayam:tere paas or koi kaam nai he??? Mere pass he I hv to do reharsa for dance so plze ha ab bore mat kaar & wo to ladki he usse kya karna sooo'

Rey: wo bro wo to me bhi tuje sye he tabse samja aha hub t tab to tuje samaj nai aa raha tha bt abhi rescntly kya hua ki wo ladki he & all..???

Swayam: I don't kn & I just don't want to kn so plz abhi jis kaam k liye aye he uss par focus kare???


(in his mind : are yaar kyat ha uski ankho me dey were soo pure jist like d holy water & so deep like an Ocean & dey were soo innocent like like a sweet little child & dere was something jo samaj ni a raha ke kya tha jo mene uske sath iss tarah behave kiya bt '..as d music start he come in sence 'swayam focus wt d hell r u doing?? Kisi ladki ke ankho ke bareme soch raha tha kitna despo!!!! Fcuse on dance & he starts d rehearsal..)


Everyone's rehearsal completed

Rey: congrts guyz it was mind blowing sabka ache se ho raha he just hope sabka dance bhi achche seho jaye

Vickey: don't wrry rey acheche se ho hi jayega..:D

Neha : ha my babu is right don't worry Rey

Rey: ok guyz so chalo abhi function k liye prepare hote he so abhi jaldi se taiyar ho & stage pe milte he All D Best

All: ok so hurry & All D Best

Swayam: after rehrsal swayam got thursty & so he was finding water & agn swaon takarane hi wale the bt his tm esa nai hua & wo face to face ho gaye & & &

Swayam: Upps'soo s..r' ( & Sorry pura nai hua coz she was Sharon & sooo)

Swaym: tum mere hi samne knyu ati ho koi prob he kya ???

Sharon: are ye kya?? Firstly ye mera colge he & ye area janha sab students ko ana allow nai he to my turn tym yanha kya kar rahe ho???

Swayam: he realize dat wo apno mob world me lost collage k disscusn room k pass ja chukka tha & herquestion was also right

Sharon: tum yanha kya kar rahe ho???

Swayam : wo I wnt pani 7 so use find karte karte !!!

Sharon : oh..k par pani to yanha ni he bt wo tumnhe yanha se sidha jake right jaoge too watercooler wnhi he..

Swayam: oh k thanx'

Sharon: wel come bt abhi mob se thoda dyan upper bhi dena taki har baar ko tarah takra na jo & fight na ho

Swayam: just gave pale smile


( d tym come for d function jiske liye wo aye the & every one's dance start neha & Vishakha & Kriya do d dance of Jiya jale

Bharat ,Amar, & Nil danced on dil rubha (Ganesh Hegde) swayam & rey on Chudel wala & swayam & ananya danced on ek din tere ' Kriyansh on kesa ye Ishq & many other

D last dance was of our diva jo ek Bharat batayam base tha & it's for all shok she has done it soo beautifully

Swayam was so dumbstruct on sharon's such beautiful dance & his mouth was wideopen

Rey: muh to band kar sle warna makki chali jayegi..;)

Swaym : shut up Ray me to bas wow o'

Rey: ha wo kuch jyadahi shock he na tu iske dance pe manana padega sach me kya dance kiya he isne kya ladki he???

Swayam : ha achahha dance tha ..:

in his mind are yar ye ladki dance bhi karti he & wo bhi itna achcah sach me kafi takented he manana padega college ki GS & sare funsc ka itna achcah handling & abh ye muje to laga ye sirf ..bate karne me h mahir he bt'ye to''

Rey& Kriya: are congo Sharon miss GS u r mind blowing dacer yar sach me manana padega yu r so talented

AViha & Bharkha :sach me Sharon u r soo good ..:D

Nil & Simmi : sach me u were mind blowing sharon..:d

Amar: aleme kya bolu tumne to kut bolne jesa lakha hi nai..

Rinni: ha Saharon Amar is always right u r s good

When all d dance completed d function jiske liye hua tha unka moto hi complete ho gaya tha & funsn ka sara paisa k orfan age k liye beja gaya & d principal of d college has thanked to all d ppl (hamare Gang ko) & also all d student of d college jinhone iske liye achchae se mehnat kiata tha & spsly Sharon jiska mehnat se ye sab itna achchae se hua tha & uske dance k liye bhi

As a GS she also thanked all d ppl wo hv worked hard & jisne bhi apna best diya iss funsn k liye..:D


And with dat & after a dinner d funsn over & she got d call fromher papa..


Mr raiprakash: hey meri beti funsn ho gaya??

Shorn: ha papa ek dam ache se hua & aap kabhi aa rahe ho lene ko bas hamara kaam to adhae gante me pura ho jayega..

Mr raiprakash: wo me abhi nikal hi raha hu & hamare yanha kuch mehamaan bhi aa rahe he to wanhi se muje unhe bhi lena he so me nikal hi raha hu to sab sath chale ayege ..

Sharon: ok papa me or tani hamara kaam bhi abi pura hone wala he so ham bhi apka wait karenge..

Mr raiprakash:bye beta

Sharn: bye papa

When funsn khatam hua everyone was doing deir packing & Sharon come to dem

Sharon: hello everyone

Kriya: hey Sharon wtz up & nice arrangements & dance ha!!

Rey: yeh & u were superb ha pehle knyu nai bola k tum bhi dance karne wali ho & itna achchha!!

Sharon thanx guyz wo app sab comfortable to the na ??

Bharat: are the hi & sach me tu ne bahot achchha taiyari kiya tha.

Rinni :sach me me to socha tha k chota shahr he & so bt u hv done a grt job sach me ..

Anannya: ohh leave it guyz . don't try to pretend soo best d arrangements were ok typs & yr stage was so small & ya d room is also very small & d make up room '.

Swayam : (cut her in middle) ohh shut up Anny tumhe to adapt si ho chuki he ye sab foults nikal ne ki.

To Sharon plz don't bother wo esi hi he so plz uska mat suno & ur arrangements were soo good & all fasalities were superb & also we plzs to meet u all guyz.

Rey : sahi keh raha he ye plz hame sach me bahot achcha laga

Vish & neha: ha neha is also very happy ,& ya man sach I just plzd to meet u ..:D

(Kriya & all girl started deir girlish tolk when rey talk to swayam)

Rey : he dude kya bat he ha !!! Miss GS ka side liya abhi itni jaldi sab dushmanava khatam haa!!!

Swayam: are yar tu fir see are esa kuch nai he sach me wo to bas Anny bahot hi rudly baatkar rahi ti so bura lag jata kisi ko itana achche se hame wel come kiya & sab..

Rey: bt tera to usse fight hua than a fir jab tum stage pe takraye tabhi se tuhara fight nai hua Knyu kya tha uski ankhome?? kya baat he kanhi ye Miss GS pasand o nai aa gai wese achchi he cute si wtz say??

Swayam: hawo to he bt tu soch raha he esa kuch nai he samje wo bechari sidi si he & don't think like dat ok

Rey: abhi se passesive ha.. ?? kya bat he😉

Swayam : koi baat nai he tu or tera ekhi topic tera kuch nai ho sakta chal abhi hame mere village k liye nikalna he & uncle ka abhi thodi der pehle hi phon aya tha k wo aa rahe he hame lene yanha to unke sath hi ham jayengge ..:d

Rey : oh k chal sabko bol dete he


(on other hand girls)

Sharon: sahi me aap sabhi se mulke muje baho hi achcha laga..:D

Simmi: hame bhi kash ham or kuch pal sath reh pate.

Kriya : ha Sharon sach me I kist hope ham sath re pate

Neha: par tum bhi to hamare shaher aa sakti ho na plz kabhi avo U r warmly wel comed

Vishakha: yaa dude will be fun der

Rinni : are haa Sharon & sach me bolu I wish k me yanha reh pati I just loved to meet u . U guyz r soo swee & lovely..:D

Sharon: to plz rey jao na achcha lagega plz mere sath mere ganv chalo iss bahane tum ek village bhi dekh loge..

Kriya : idea bura nai he par ham already ek village me hi ja rahe he swayam k ganv& uske uncle lene aa rahe he hame thodi der me

Sharon: kon se ganv me jaa rahe ho ??


(Koi ans de paye uusse pehle Shron ka phon atahe)


Sharon: ha papa aap aa gaye.?

Mr raiprakash: ha wo me aa gaya so aap or Tanni taiyar ho?

Sharon: ha wo bas ham abhi nikal hi rahe he & abhi bhahar ate he byee papa

Mr raiprakash: ok beta aa jao me wait kar raha hu.



Sharon : to all byee guyz sach me nice to meet u all & sorry agar koi probs hui ho to dil see & Mr Swayam sorry just bcz hamare bich fight kuch jyada hi ho gait hi so & aap hamare guest he soo sorry & nice to meet U

Swayam: sorry from me also knyu ki me bhi kuch jyada hi hyper ho jata hu soo & nice to meet u sach me & plz don't mind agar kuch jyada ho gaya ho to

Sharon: are nai plz don't b sorry it's ok

Swayam: once agn nice to meet u & once more thing u were amazing dancer hv u got training??

Sharon : wo muje dance pasand he & ek baar mouka mila tha sikhne ka acasn me camp me gait hi vanha & den practice se hi sikha jo sikha wo sab.

Swayam: r u serious tumne sirf ek hi baaar sikha & fir bhi u wer so perfect congo for dat & plz practice chalu rakhna shayad kabhi fir se dance sehi milana ho hamara 😃

Sharon : ya shayad ( to all) bye guyz hope k kabhi milna ho ..:)

All :bye Sharon we love to meet u & all d best to u ..:D

Sharon :thanx guyz & same to u too


Sharon reach to her father

Sharon: hii papa chale & aapne bola koi guest ko receive karna he knha se wo ayenge ??

Mr raiprakash: are beta wo bhi yanhihe & hame thodu der me milenge tum apna scooty lo me unhe call karta hu

Sharon: ok papa

Mr raiprakash: hello beta aap log knh ho me yanha aa gaya hu college me aap bahar a jao yanha me gate k paas wait kar raha hu.

Swayam: oh yaa Uncle ham bhi ready hi he & abhi aa rahe he

Mr raiprakash:ok aa jao

Swayam: (come to gate ) are aap hi Gautam Uncle ho??

Mr raiprakash: are han & tum swayam hena ?

Swayam : ha uncle & pair padta he & uncle chale ??

Mr raiprakash:are aap log gadi me betho wo me meri beti ka wait kar raha hu aapbetho tb tak wo bhi aa jaegi

Swayam: ok uncle & all sit in Car ( jab sab beth gaye swayam k siva tabhi Sharon come with her scooty & tanni)

Are tum yanha??abhi tak gai nai

Sharon: are nai baas ja hi rahi thi mere papa k sath kuch guest aa rahe he unko bhi receive karne jana he soo bas ja hi rahu hu & aap

Swayam: are ham basere gav ja rahe the & ye mere uncle he inke sath .

Sharon : ohh .inke sath u mean aap sab inke sath chal rahe ho.

Swayam : ha knyu??

Mr raiprakash: are aap jante ho calo achcha he. betta yehi to he hamare guest & tumhare Shekhawat uncle hena unka beta swayam . & swayam ye meri beti he Sharon thodi jiddi he & nadan bhi bt fir bhi bahot hi cute he..

Swayam: ha inki Jidd & nadani & telent ham dekh hi chuke he Hey guyz soo aap sb Miss GS ko bahot miss kar ne wale he na soo chalo me sabko uske sath uski k ghar le jata hu

All: wat sach me'

Swayam haa ..:D

Sharon: wt?? dats grt & soo chale papa to aap sab car me jao me to meri scooty me hi jaungi

Mr raiprakash: are beta..

Sharon: plz papa aap jante ho na hw I love my scooty so

Mr raiprakash: are tum or kisi ka sune wali to ho nai soo as ur wish

Sharon to me or tanni sath me chalet he & aap sab ..so chalo & papa don't worry me aapke sathi rahungi soo

Anny jise yanha nai jana tha wo apne flight pakad ke chali gai



Hope guys u like d update & agn sorry for being soo late

If u like plz hit like butten & give ur respective comments..:D


Edited by beeny - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res😊

unres...

WOW...that was such a beautiful part beeny...

gang dance...sharon's classical...dreamyy..

loved the LLHH scene of swaron...

and the new found feelings...loving d cupid rey...

Now SWARON will b under same roof...

woo cant wait to read further 😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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