FF: You're not Alone(Part 12-Pg 34) - Page 7

Superb update.

YASH!!!!!!

I've been at work all day so i could only read this now! But i wish i read it earlier, because i wanted to be first to comment because you dedicated this chapter to me!!!!!!! 😲

I couldn't believe it when i saw it... You have literally made my day and i cannot thank you enough. Likewise, i have a friend in you as well, and i couldn't be happier about that fact 🤗

And also, i feel even happier because this was such a wonderful chapter (might i add) ... Not that the others aren't of course. You know i love all your updates 😉
So on to the actual update now lol..

It was honestly so perfectly illustrated. I literally feel like crying for both of them... They are both hurting and they are both equally as confused now. And the sad part is that they can't/won't even confide in each other 😔
And the romance between Khushi and Akash was needed, so don't you worry about that... It really helps us to understand just how heart-broken Khushi really is.
The way she realised, in typical Khushi style, that there are others around her that are upset as well. Once again putting everyone else's happiness before her own sadness... She's so unbelievably brave 😭

And ARNAV!... i really just want to jump in to your story and hug him forever. once again, his confusion VS his guilt and love; you've portrayed it even more so in this chapter... And his feelings are so evident that you just can't help but feel torn with him. How does someone even make that choice? Poor thing.
Also, I'm so glad that you have started to slowly add in tiny bits of Khushi's realisation - The way she felt oddly at peace in his arms. Haaaiii... little bursts of unknown love

Amazing. Beautiful. Wonderful update
You absolute beauty you ❤️

Shay X

The Akash and Khushi part was cute! It showed how much that they loved each other! I feel so bad for Arnav! Loved the update!

Originally posted by: shay1990

YASH!!!!!!

I've been at work all day so i could only read this now! But i wish i read it earlier, because i wanted to be first to comment because you dedicated this chapter to me!!!!!!! 😲

I couldn't believe it when i saw it... You have literally made my day and i cannot thank you enough. Likewise, i have a friend in you as well, and i couldn't be happier about that fact 🤗

And also, i feel even happier because this was such a wonderful chapter (might i add) ... Not that the others aren't of course. You know i love all your updates 😉
So on to the actual update now lol..

It was honestly so perfectly illustrated. I literally feel like crying for both of them... They are both hurting and they are both equally as confused now. And the sad part is that they can't/won't even confide in each other 😔
And the romance between Khushi and Akash was needed, so don't you worry about that... It really helps us to understand just how heart-broken Khushi really is.
The way she realised, in typical Khushi style, that there are others around her that are upset as well. Once again putting everyone else's happiness before her own sadness... She's so unbelievably brave 😭

And ARNAV!... i really just want to jump in to your story and hug him forever. once again, his confusion VS his guilt and love; you've portrayed it even more so in this chapter... And his feelings are so evident that you just can't help but feel torn with him. How does someone even make that choice? Poor thing.
Also, I'm so glad that you have started to slowly add in tiny bits of Khushi's realisation - The way she felt oddly at peace in his arms. Haaaiii... little bursts of unknown love

Amazing. Beautiful. Wonderful update
You absolute beauty you ❤️

Shay X

Originally posted by: nazibah

The Akash and Khushi part was cute! It showed how much that they loved each other! I feel so bad for Arnav! Loved the update!

Originally posted by: natzzz

love Akash of yr ff much more than in the serial 😉

do continue

Wow amazing...
Loved it...
Superb... Just awesome...

wonderful story dear...
just read all the parts../

nice story