FF: You're not Alone(Part 12-Pg 34)

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~ You are not alone~


part 1


Her vision started to blur as she saw his dead body lying in hall. No. This could not have happened. he would not leave her. He had promised her. But everything around her was so quiet. they had placed his corpse in the hall wrapped in a white cloth. She didnt want to go near it. just then someone came and touched her shoulder. It was Anjali. Her sister-in-law. Not anymore. She was his Wife...not anymore...

"Khushi...woh hume chodke chala gaya. humein akela chodke...( khushi..he left us...left us all alone)"

"Nahi di...use kuch nahi hua..he is acting as if he is. He is sleeping. He loves to me. see,now I'll teach him a lesson"

Anjali couldnt take it anymore. She left Khushi and sat down beside her brother.Khushi saw everyone crying. She was confused.

"Why are u all crying...he is sleeping he'll get up. Wait."she said as she went and sat near him.

"aye hera...get up na...dont irritate me. Orelse i wont talk to u!! get up na!! see everyone thinks u r gone. Get up and tell them u are here!!" her action was heartwrenching. But someone had to stop her. Someone had to make her cry. Someone had to make her bringout the sorrow. And there was only person who could do that. Her best friend. He walked towrds her,caught hold of her fiercely,looked straight into her eyes and screamed

"KHUSHII!!! enough!! he is DEAD!! u get that?? HE.IS.DEAD!! He is not coming back!!"

She felt as if the world had cometumbling down on her. She couldn't respnd. Suddenly she burst out in a cry and fell to her knees

"tum mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakte...Akash...kuch toh bolo...kuch bhi"

and she fainted

PART 2- SCROLL DOWN
PART 3-PAGE 2
CHARACTER SKETCH-PAGE 3
IMPORTANT NOTE-PAGE 3
PART 4-PAGE 4
PART 5-PAGE 7
PART 6-PAGE 9
HINT FOR PART 7-PAGE 11
PART 7-PAGE 12
PART 8-PAGE 19
Part 9-page 22
PART 10-Page 26
Part 11- Page 30
Part 12 - Page 34
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic start!

Loved the little twist at the end

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Originally posted by: shay1990


Fantastic start!

Loved the little twist at the end



thank you so much...😳😳😳
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so guyss...m here😉 with the next part...hope u all like it..let me knw how it is!!!!not proof-read...so forgive me for the mistakes!!
😳😊

Part 2

It hurt him to see her like this. He couldn't see her in pain. He had always loved the bubbly and chirpy Khushi. But today, to see her as his cousin's widow, it tore him apart. They were the best of friends their college had ever known. Khushi, Arnav and Akash were the inseparables. The trio had rocked the campus. When Akash had told him about Khushi and himself, he was the happiest person on earth. He was happy for them but no one knew what it felt like to him. He had loved her. Always. But he had decided to keep his feelings to himself.

Arnav singh raizada had lost his best friend. He hated to see him lie there on the pyre….lifeless. As the pandit continued with the rituals,flares of the past ran in front of his eyes.

"Akash!!! U bloody!!...give me back my diary!! Now.. orelse I am gonna kill u Akash singh raizada!!" he said as akash ran across the whole room with arnav's diary in his hand.

" Arrey buddy…cool na… mere marne mein abhi waqt hai. I wont let go of u so easily" had come back the laughing gesture.

Tears rolled down his eyes as he came around the pyre with a pot on his shoulders. The rituals had to be completed. He set the fire to his pyre and watched his buddy turn to ashes. He had promised mamiji that he would take care of Akash. He had failed her today. He looked up to the sky and said

" I am sorry mami… I couldn't keep my promise… I am so sorry mami.". And continued to sob. Never in his dreams had he thought that Akash would leave him alone. And then another reverie from the past flashed before him.

"Bhai…."

"haan buddy..wassup? you look serious"

"bhai mujhe aapse …I wanted to talk to u.."

"yup…shoot!!"

"bhai….promise me.. if something happens to me u'll take full care of Khushi,you'll never let her cry. Promise me bhai"

Akash said as Arnav looked at him not knowing why was he blabbering all this.

"but Akash…where are u gonna go?? You are very much here. Don't u dare talk like this again!!"

"nahi bhai…promise me..please. I will be consoled that someone is there to lookafter Khushi after me"

"ok…promise!! Now come here". And he had hugged Akash with all his might.

He reached home. Anjali was waiting at the door for him. She looked all the more panicked. He sensed it through her body language. She came running towards him.

"Bhai…wo…wo"

"haan Anjali…boliye…kya hua?"

"Bhai…wo…Khushi bhabhi…please go and take care of her. She has made a mess of herself. Please calm her down Bhai…you are the only one to whom she listens…after.."

And stopped midway while talking as she realized what she was about to say. Arnav knew what Anjali was saying was true. He had to take care of her. He had promised him. He wont let it down. He looked at Anjali and said

" you are right Anjali…but let me tell u one thing..it hurts like hell when the person you love the most leaves u alone… Khushi loved buddy more than anything else in this world"

" and you love Khushi bhabhi more than anything in this world bhai,don't you?"

His sister asked him with a sound of concern in her voice. He didn't want to look in to her eyes. Without even making an eye contact Arnav said that he was gonna check on Khushi and strode past her.

"you cant hide the truth Bhai… I know you love her….very much and you cant run away from it for a long time"


alryt...now u can go ahead with the chappals and tomatoes!! but throw them in the comment box!!😆😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! I love the twist you gave it! This really awesome!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it..

do continue soon n pm me😊


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Nyc...plz pm me when u update
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so here it is guyss. I knw its total crap but couldn't stop myself from posting this... hope u all like it!!!!
All the quotes in purple are from GREY'S ANATOMY.
So here u go with the next part!!!



Part 3




"Pain comes in all forms. The small twinge, a bit of soreness, the random pain, the normal pains we live with every day. Then there's the kind ofpain you can't ignore. - A level of pain so great that it blocks out everything else. Makes the rest of the world fade away…Until all we can think about… is how much we hurt… We anesthetize, ride it out, embrace it, ignore it… and for some of us, the best way to manage pain is just to push through it."


He had left her. She couldn't take it. She had always thought that he would be there with her forever. But today she was all alone. She had lost the love of her life. Or perhaps she thought so. She entered the room. THEIR room. But the THEIR no longer existed. It was her room now that was filled with his memories. Reveries she could only think of. She made her way to the room. One month...ot had been just one month since their marriage. It flew away like the gush of the wind. But this moment without him beside her,it felt as if the time wouldn't move.

She went around her room as the memories from the past flashed across her mind. Her sight fell on a photo on the side-table of her bed. It was theirs.
THEIR ROOM:
The photo had Akash kneeling down and proposing Khushi while Khushi stood in front of him in utter shock. The pic had been clicked by Arnav. She remembered what exactly had happened that day as a lone tear escaped her left eye.

FLASHBACK

They were sitting in the cafeteria of their college waiting for Khushi to come. Akash was damn nervous as Arnav tried his best to chill him out.

"Bhai...mujhe dar lag raha hai...what if she tells no? I'll be screwed Bhai...no no...I cant do this. I am not gonna tell her." he said as he ran his hair through his hair.

"Oh come on Akash!!! Be a man!! When she comes just got to her look straight into her eyes and tell her that you freaking love her!!".Arnav said never letting Akash to find out the sting of the pain in his eyes."Hey look...aa gayi teri Khushi. Best of luck man!!".he patted his buddy's shoulder in encouragement.

She looked like an angel. She was wearing a Blue and black Anarkali suit that perfectly held on to her curves and went perfectly with her complexion. She was mesmerizing.Her hair was let out loose and a few strands of hair fell on her face. She looked like an angel.


Khushi's dress😊:


She waved her hand as she made her way to the table and sat down beside Arnav. She looked at Akash and gave him a warm smile. That one smile was enough to stir Akash's thoughts.

"Khushi...mujhe...I wanted to tell u something..."

"Haan Akash...bolo..."

"Woh main...woh main Khushi..."

"Kya main main kar rahe ho Akash?? And why the hell are u so nervous?? Main bhoot hoom kya?"

Akash got up from his spot and without wasting a single second knelt down in front of Khushi,embarassing her.

"Akash...yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?? everyone's watching!!". It seemed as if Khushi's eyes would pop out any minute.

"Khushi...I dont know how you'll react but I cant help it! Khushi I LOVE YOU more than anything else in this world and want to spend my life with you...will you please take the pleasure of being my life-partner?"

He said as Khushi stood up in utter shock. Yes,she loved him but she hadnt thought in the slightest of her dreams that Akash would propose her this way.

"Khushi?? will u please answer? My knees are hurting!!"

"Uh...Uh...yeah u Duffer!! get up!! I LOVE YOU TOO!! and you took so much time to tell this simple thing?"

She said as she pouted him on the chest. Akash hugged in an instant and could feel Khushi reciprocating to it...

FLASHBACK ENDS


Intimacy is a four syllable word for "Here is my heart and soul, please grind them into hamburger, and enjoy." It's both desired, and feared. Difficult to live with, and impossible to live without. Intimacy also comes attached to the three R's… relatives, romance, and roommates. There are some things you can't escape. And other things you just don't want to know.

She walked upto the photo and picked it up in her hand. She moved her thumb on the photo caressing Akash's figure with it. She smiled as one more tear escaped her eyes. Life was so easy then. But today everything was different. She was alone. She had lost her love.She couldnt even beleive that he had left her. He was her shining Knight in armour,who would save her from any distress...but today she was all alone. Her Knight had left her alone to fight in this funny world. She felt like killing herself for living without him was even a worser punishment.

"Kahan ho tum Akash? Apni pagli ko akele chodke chale gaye? What will i do without you Akash? I...I love you so much..."

She cried silently as she sat on the bed and placed te photo back on the table and opened the drawer of the table to have a pian-killer. She noticed an envelope in it. She didn't know who had kept it there.She picked it up and what she was an utter shock... The cover of the envelope had block letters that read

TO MY LOVE...KHUSHI AKASH SINGH RAIZADA...


PRECAP: Her hands shivered as she read the letter. tears ran down her eyes...

WAT HAD AKASH WRITTEN IN IT? WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!


SO guys...i hope u all liked it!! please leave ur likes and comments and for pm,send me a buddy request. I'll add u to my list!!
with love,
Yash❤️
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This is not total crap!!! It's amazing!!! I love this FF!!! The concept is fantastic!!! I'm desperate to know what's in the letter!!!
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Originally posted by: nazibah

This is not total crap!!! It's amazing!!! I love this FF!!! The concept is fantastic!!! I'm desperate to know what's in the letter!!!


THANKS A LOT!!!
I'll be updating it soon!!! watch out!!

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