FF|Arhi|Th#3 How IPK should've been[Ch18/Sc3 Pg117 - Page 82

Originally posted by: segad

in keeping with tradition, last things first. that was one hell of a RV. better than the last 10 we have seen in the actual show. You mentioned earlier that you sent a scene to LM FB account, can we know which one?

I really wish the CVs would read your story and make their lives easier by just following it. The entire cast would be happy as everyone would have an actual role and dialogues. Also your favorite 😉 Shit-al could be Nandini.

See that would really fit in with your story too. Nandini Rving with Hotwa!!!

The last scene was really intense. Written beautifully. Almost like your mind's eye is a camera lens and we can see the zoom shot and some long shots. But poorey pariwar ne RV interrupt kar diya? ek anjali hi to kafi thi lekin maybe since this RV was so strong, it needed the entire pariwar to break it.

I am willing to bet money that the red sari is on its way to Delhi with a certain someone. It was really nice to see a jealous Khushi. I may be in a minority on this but Arnav ki kisi ko kadar nahin hai. the usual suspects that is. Takes an outsider like Nandini to bring it to Khushi's attention. it is very easy to play hard to get if you are the only fish in the sea. But a little bit of a threat sensed from Nandini and Khushi gets possessive. jalaa de usko zara. not scorched earth mind you but a light toastiness is called for. would probably be better if nandini is interested in Arnav rather than him in her. the Man has a multitude of sins to his name already, this might be the straw that breaks the camel's back, if he professes interest.

NK has his work cut out for him. Not gonna be easy competing with ASR. But then the two of them were duelling for Khushi. ASR is not really interested in Nandini so that might make NK's job easier.

The entry of the Raizadas scene was really good. Though I am a little bit disappointed that there was no "trial run" in the entire shopping expedition.

Your description of Nandini surprised me. Not too many writers will describe one of the heroines as "lazy". You did.

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Kya yaar...my edited comment is much more prettier!!😆

LOL!! I didnt know that u wer soo badly waiting for my comment!! Itna accha hota hai kya??
Im soo glad i could make u FRIKKIN HAPPY!! :D

Well cause u made us FRIKKIN HAPPY too!! And mostly made us drool!! :P

Aaahh...yes! RV's should be like this make a person swoon and twirl which im doing btw!
I can totally imagine u while writing! How the hell did u do that!?
I was literally going Dhak Dhak im telling you...it was just...no proper words can even express it!

Yea, Nandini looks like a tough cookie to crack! But hopefully NK's charms work on her soon!

Thanks for such a long reply!! But those first 3 lines made me soo damn happy!! :D