FF|Arhi|Th#3 How IPK should've been[Ch18/Sc3 Pg117 - Page 84

Originally posted by: asr13

You are Brilliant, and the way your writing reaches out to us ...it no longer feels like we are reading it, but watching it ...Fab ! And yes, I have used "we" because I am very confident there are loads out there who feel the same.

Originally posted by: asr13

Reading this made me FRIKKIN HAPPY too !!!

Awesome comment Swetha, almost all of us are expecting him to get that saree for her ...lets see what smitzy has planned !!

What awesome Rabba Vey naaa ?

Did you sleep allright then ? 😆 Ya phir Sapne mein bhi Rabba Ve ?

Dont blame you !!!! 🤣

Whats with him in white and the close shave and the Hi ...*swoons and thud *

* turning the clock back to PayAsh Mehndi to feel the sexy Hi ...and staying there For God Sake *

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Thanks yaar!:D

Yes, we are definitely expecting the sari to be in Arnavs hands! And i bet it is! :)

Rabba Ve!
Hahahaaa...yea i did...but did have some RV's! Though i didnt mind at all!😉

Why do you do that!?
Haayyeee...*swoons and twirls, ...thud!
And I start to day dream...sigh!

Originally posted by: segad

in keeping with tradition, last things first. that was one hell of a RV. better than the last 10 we have seen in the actual show. You mentioned earlier that you sent a scene to LM FB account, can we know which one?

I really wish the CVs would read your story and make their lives easier by just following it. The entire cast would be happy as everyone would have an actual role and dialogues. Also your favorite 😉 Shit-al could be Nandini.

See that would really fit in with your story too. Nandini Rving with Hotwa!!!

The last scene was really intense. Written beautifully. Almost like your mind's eye is a camera lens and we can see the zoom shot and some long shots. But poorey pariwar ne RV interrupt kar diya? ek anjali hi to kafi thi lekin maybe since this RV was so strong, it needed the entire pariwar to break it.

I am willing to bet money that the red sari is on its way to Delhi with a certain someone. It was really nice to see a jealous Khushi. I may be in a minority on this but Arnav ki kisi ko kadar nahin hai. the usual suspects that is. Takes an outsider like Nandini to bring it to Khushi's attention. it is very easy to play hard to get if you are the only fish in the sea. But a little bit of a threat sensed from Nandini and Khushi gets possessive. jalaa de usko zara. not scorched earth mind you but a light toastiness is called for. would probably be better if nandini is interested in Arnav rather than him in her. the Man has a multitude of sins to his name already, this might be the straw that breaks the camel's back, if he professes interest.

NK has his work cut out for him. Not gonna be easy competing with ASR. But then the two of them were duelling for Khushi. ASR is not really interested in Nandini so that might make NK's job easier.

The entry of the Raizadas scene was really good. Though I am a little bit disappointed that there was no "trial run" in the entire shopping expedition.

Your description of Nandini surprised me. Not too many writers will describe one of the heroines as "lazy". You did.

Originally posted by: smitzy

haye Seema thank you for the lovely comment dear! 😊

ya I sent the Ring returning scene of chapter 8 sc 3 to LM's FB page. It was just an on-the-spur kinda thing... now that I think about it, I could have probably sent another one where the whole family is together.. hmmph.. I'll put a poll later and resend something else.. btw there hasn't been any reply on that one (as expected 😆)

hahahaha Shital my fav? hahahaha ya she could've been Nandini.. they could pair up her with NK.. that would have been fun to watch..

RV hua to achhe se.. oh you're talking about the rebound of ASR? that was gussa my dear.. he wasn't expecting Khushi to actually push him away so when she did despite her eyes showing something else, he got angry (*swoons*)

aha! so certain you are about the saree eh? 😆 well I don't want to give it away too soon, but ya it is going to Delhi for sure. With whom, how, when, where I'm not telling 😛 " it is very easy to play hard to get if you are the only fish in the sea. But a little bit of a threat sensed from Nandini and Khushi gets possessive. " Excellent observation! Couldn't agree more! But then we have always known Khushi to be the self sacrifying types na.. so if she thinks Nandini and ASR can be together you think she'll come in between? hmm dekhne ka padi

oh dear NK has bigger things to worry about than competing with ASR.. If there's one thing I don't like it is the idea of love triangles.. they are slightly cliched and not exactly in sync with "nayee soch" being propounded by SP.. nahh, I've a better plan 😉

stay tuned!! Next update is going to be a 180 twist! hehehee

Originally posted by: asr13

180 deg twist !!!! 😲

Cannot wait now !!!!😆

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Pakka jhagda hoga!
I think Khushis gonna get pissed! And then ASR will get pissed too!

Yup cant wait! :)