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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#801

WOW. This update was a complete package. Just awesome. I somehow feel Arnav and Nandini joined hands to make Khushi jealous. I LOVED jealous Khushi. Poor Akash & NK can't get close to the love of their lives. Most important u gave us our intense Rabba Ve 👏 Well Arnav u better be quick next time as u know ur family has this habit of interrupting at the crucial moment. Khushi unknowingly sat at the front seat i.e. beside Arnav. Its ur lucky day Arnav.

Thanku for this fantastic update. It was long (thanks for that) and one of the best updates of this ff. Thanks for the PM too 😊

Edited by risat - 12 years ago

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Oh I can wait for more magical updates! If Sarun actually followed your script, I would have died watching the episode. Hmm, I sense more chemical reactions coming in the next update. hehe! Btw, the red saree that Khushi looked at in the shop, will Arnav buy it secretly for her?

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust
Oh I can wait for more magical updates! If Sarun actually followed your script, I would have died watching the episode. Hmm, I sense more chemical reactions coming in the next update. hehe! Btw, the red saree that Khushi looked at in the shop, will Arnav buy it secretly for her?

oh woman!! rushing rushin already heheheeh wait for the update.. that's all I'll say! 😛

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

Nandini falling for Arnav :O No NK get in there quickly dude

not like Arnav would go for her as Khushi is the only one on his mind

Khushi getting the jelous streaks love it

and the last bit too close, too close

wonder what would of happend had that touch on her waist not snap her out of her trance, or again if the raizada parivaar didnt come at the time they did

loved it

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

loved both the updates...18/3 is mind blowing...so arnav's mission khushi have started...he is making her crazy by coming near to her...by jealously...he will be using every weapon he can to win back his khushi...loved it...thanks for pms...😊

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: asr13

Smitzy !!!!

I have to say you said a hot one coming up, and knowing the mood you were in, moi was quite anxious😳, and then you said as you read the last part, read slowly ..slow..ly ...and it got worse !

And the Dhak-Dhak wonn't stop now for some time !!! 😃

Very interesting turn of events, with the maybe-NK-ki-Nandini trying to charm up our sexy,broodingly handsome hunk ...that was best thing your wicked mind could have thought !!! 🤣
I absotutely loooved that bit 👏!!! And Nandini offers to shake hands with the ASR ( dont blame her honestly 😛 !!! ) BUT goes for a Namaste to NK !!! Wah !!!
Her saying Ye Arnavji hain had me gaping like our Khushi ...awesome !!!👏 Ye koi nahin hain ...Epic !!!⭐️

Aaand he smirks !!!! Aaand my heart just stopped beating there ...awesome !🤗

LOVED the ex-KKGSR giving him dirty looks and nudging her away not once, but twice ...loved her sending Jeejaji to sit with Arnavji, all because NK and Nandini's lau story could kick start ...yeah right !!!! 🤣

Straight to the SUV scene now ...Haaai !!!
Loved the way she mutters to herself ki pehle toh darwaza band tha ...and then she freezes to that sexy familiar whisper close to her ear ...Too close !
Darkness around them...heartbeat racing ...mouth dry ...brown orbs ...mesmerised ...tantalising lips ...and the smirk again ...him inching closer ...her stuttering ...his challenging husky voice ...push me if you dont want ...and it gets hotter !!! Awww, I have to say I jumped at the electric shock, uska chodo, such was the impact ! 🤣
What chemistry man ...mindblowing !!! Yahan padh ke hi weak-knead ho jate hain !!!🤣

This is one of the Bestest Rabba Vey I have seen, which doesnt have mature content ...not that it needs any ?..just thought I'll clarify !

You are Brilliant, and the way your writing reaches out to us ...it no longer feels like we are reading it, but watching it ...Fab ! And yes, I have used "we" because I am very confident there are loads out there who feel the same.

I am loving Nandini not giving any bhav to Nanheji, ummm, nice! Kacha had me crack up, but I was very conscious of the other love-hate-whatever story sizzling alongside ! 😉 Her observations of the Raizadas were hilarious, esp Mami, but my heart skipped a beat when she described the last entrant!😳

PS - Apna Shri Shri Hotness has seen her eye the Red saree hai na ? Tell me he will buy that for her chupke se ...it will be a loop closed if he did that !

PPS - the next scene will have them sitting together in the front of the car ... Exciting !!!

Swetha - kacha ! Raw and something more ...You need hindi lessons as well dude 😆

haye re nandkishore!!! kya dhaasu comment mara hai aapne mera dil to dhinchak dance karne laga hai ab 😆

Smitaaa 🤗

hehehehe dikh gai Lucknow ki garmi? 😛 I was laughing when I read that line in your res I was like haan bete scene padhna phir batana kahan ki garmi thi hahahaha koi na kar lo dhak dhak koi baat nahin, I won't tell anyone 😉

interesting hua na? hahahahaa ab to bete aage aage dekho hota hai kya! I promised lots of fun and lots of fun I'll deliver too. for all those people crying foul ki Nandini Arnav ka kya chakkar shuru ho gaya, I just want to say, remember that I love surprising you.. and surprised you will be in the next update.

loop close karna hai tumko haan :P I'll see what I can do about that! hehehe

See there are better ways for KKG-SR (erstwhile) to get her knickers in fire.. and a jealous Khushi is oh so adorable isn't she? I wish she'd stay for some time, but then next update (is all I'll say)

SUV scene.. yaar I hardly if ever write mature content.. I'm not sure how will people react to it now that we have crossed 50 scenes already, the mature part will build up after they get married I think.. and that I'll be damn shy to write on.. so my RV scenes will be intense, intenser and intensest!! hehehe (ok I invented those words)

You are Brilliant, and the way your writing reaches out to us ...it no longer feels like we are reading it, but watching it ...Fab ! And yes, I have used "we" because I am very confident there are loads out there who feel the same.

😳 😊 🤗

Thank you so much my darling! It's lovely friends and readers like you that keep me going really. and there couldn't be a bigger compliment than to say that you can imagine it happening.. because that is what I wrote in the introduction post of Chapter 1, so part of my job is done!

thank you again for the lovely comment!

muaaah :)

PS- Shwetha got confused between kacha and kachha.. hota hai hota hai 😆

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VasantiLad

@VasantiLad

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

What a traet to watch today's epi & straight after to read your chapter - great detail - just loved it-the jealousy track plays well here as well

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minnuma

@minnuma

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Love it..khushi jealous and flustered...wished he had kissed her though- having said that it probably wasnt an appropriate place!!

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asr13

@asr13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: smitzy

haye re nandkishore!!! kya dhaasu comment mara hai aapne mera dil to dhinchak dance karne laga hai ab 😆

Smitaaa 🤗

hehehehe dikh gai Lucknow ki garmi? 😛 I was laughing when I read that line in your res I was like haan bete scene padhna phir batana kahan ki garmi thi hahahaha koi na kar lo dhak dhak koi baat nahin, I won't tell anyone 😉

interesting hua na? hahahahaa ab to bete aage aage dekho hota hai kya! I promised lots of fun and lots of fun I'll deliver too. for all those people crying foul ki Nandini Arnav ka kya chakkar shuru ho gaya, I just want to say, remember that I love surprising you.. and surprised you will be in the next update.

loop close karna hai tumko haan :P I'll see what I can do about that! hehehe

See there are better ways for KKG-SR (erstwhile) to get her knickers in fire.. and a jealous Khushi is oh so adorable isn't she? I wish she'd stay for some time, but then next update (is all I'll say)

SUV scene.. yaar I hardly if ever write mature content.. I'm not sure how will people react to it now that we have crossed 50 scenes already, the mature part will build up after they get married I think.. and that I'll be damn shy to write on.. so my RV scenes will be intense, intenser and intensest!! hehehe (ok I invented those words)

You are Brilliant, and the way your writing reaches out to us ...it no longer feels like we are reading it, but watching it ...Fab ! And yes, I have used "we" because I am very confident there are loads out there who feel the same.

😳 😊 🤗
Thank you so much my darling! It's lovely friends and readers like you that keep me going really. and there couldn't be a bigger compliment than to say that you can imagine it happening.. because that is what I wrote in the introduction post of Chapter 1, so part of my job is done!

thank you again for the lovely comment!

muaaah :)

PS- Shwetha got confused between kacha and kachha.. hota hai hota hai 😆

By God, dikh gayee lucknow ki garmi !!! You love to have me eat my words na ...and i love you for doing that !!! 😆

Awww it was awesome, one of these days I am gojng to read ALL of this again ... Abe yaar Nandini Ko line maarne do, as long as its fuelling the sparks between our hot jodi ...sab chalega ...sab kuch !!!😉

I am loving the jealous Khushi, i have to admit, much much more than the comical one on screen !

And Shri Shri Hotness is being soooper confident about his effect on her, why do I feel she is going to lash out at him KKG ishtyle sometime soon...even though she just goes weak-knead like us, heartbeat racing, mouth dry too !!! Haaai

PS - not really asking for mature content here, your writing has enough and more intensity and passion to keep us hooked ...and how ? 😛 ...we will all agree on this that we DID NOT miss the Rabba Veys at all during their misunderstanding phase here, such has been the magic of your writing !!

🤗 Mwaaah xxx

Edited by asr13 - 12 years ago

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#810

in keeping with tradition, last things first. that was one hell of a RV. better than the last 10 we have seen in the actual show. You mentioned earlier that you sent a scene to LM FB account, can we know which one?

I really wish the CVs would read your story and make their lives easier by just following it. The entire cast would be happy as everyone would have an actual role and dialogues. Also your favorite 😉 Shit-al could be Nandini.

See that would really fit in with your story too. Nandini Rving with Hotwa!!!

The last scene was really intense. Written beautifully. Almost like your mind's eye is a camera lens and we can see the zoom shot and some long shots. But poorey pariwar ne RV interrupt kar diya? ek anjali hi to kafi thi lekin maybe since this RV was so strong, it needed the entire pariwar to break it.

I am willing to bet money that the red sari is on its way to Delhi with a certain someone. It was really nice to see a jealous Khushi. I may be in a minority on this but Arnav ki kisi ko kadar nahin hai. the usual suspects that is. Takes an outsider like Nandini to bring it to Khushi's attention. it is very easy to play hard to get if you are the only fish in the sea. But a little bit of a threat sensed from Nandini and Khushi gets possessive. jalaa de usko zara. not scorched earth mind you but a light toastiness is called for. would probably be better if nandini is interested in Arnav rather than him in her. the Man has a multitude of sins to his name already, this might be the straw that breaks the camel's back, if he professes interest.

NK has his work cut out for him. Not gonna be easy competing with ASR. But then the two of them were duelling for Khushi. ASR is not really interested in Nandini so that might make NK's job easier.

The entry of the Raizadas scene was really good. Though I am a little bit disappointed that there was no "trial run" in the entire shopping expedition.

Your description of Nandini surprised me. Not too many writers will describe one of the heroines as "lazy". You did.