OS: A Few More Days*Re-posted*

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

WHAAATT??!?! SHE WASNT PREGNANT??!!? :O :O

omg lazy!! Hahaahahahahah! I thought she was pregnant!! 🤣

and kt turned out to be a fracture in the little finger and for that he refused to let her walk, or dance? AWWW arnav's such a cutie! 😆

the fracture came as a real big shocker, Lazy!

aamazingly writeen! 😃

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Haha that was a super awesome One zehra - never thought it would be the finger

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rashmi

@morning_dews

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! Zehra, seriously dear why dont you become the story writer for IPKKND...😆

lord man, i was just thinking she is pregnent till end and later thought it would be sprain in her leg and at last you burst a cracker on me...ummm it was a fracture on a tiny finger..!!!🤣🤣🤣

you are such an amazing writer, not amazing, the most Flawless writer i had ever gone through and yep you surpass all others with your brilliant writing skills.😃🤗

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

It was too good... U gave full impression tht she was pregnant but actualy it was fracture. Wht the.. Lolzzz i wish i would have benn commented using laptop then i would b using lots of emos which m feeling right now. It was one of the best os i ever read loved it... Specially the part where she stood up from sofa and the reaction she got ROFL loved it

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@Iluvmyself

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Oh my gawd too good !!!

I seriously thought she was prg !!! 😆

Awww Arnav was so protective that to over a fracture in her finger ...

And ASR part 2 Lol !!!!

Ur writing is Awwwesome !!!

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

i know what he will do.. he will tie her down in a chair and sit right in front of her working on laptop.. i had a doubt that she is not pregnant.. when you didn't let her complete about her situation.. heheheheh.. you naughty girl..

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

I had to Laugh Out Aloud..😆..And my hubby was like 'what the'..

For simple finger fracture, Arnav was this fussy!!🤣

You made an impression of preggers..but i was not easily fooled..i vehemently believed it was something else..and i was damn right..and had this smug expression when the doctor said "the plaster will be off within two days'..But then i was totally bowled over with the revelation that it was a finger fracture that too in the little finger..😲. I seriously thought it might be leg fracture!!..I must bow to your writing talent...it was like a twist in one of O.Henry's short stories..👏👏

I would like to read your works..Please accept my buddy request..Thank you

Edited by Onlooker - 12 years ago