OS: A Few More Days*Re-posted*

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

RES!

*UNRES*

OMG, Zehra, whattay twistywisty OS!
The pregnancy impression was so easily given and just like that Bah! I swear my jaw dropped 😆
And when the clock stopped ticking, the world stopped rotating and the Raizada's stopped breathing, when Khushi got up to go to her room...I was actually like this 😆

Great OS!

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ipkkndholic

@ipkkndholic

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh My God !! That was soo cute..

the so in love couple..

this is just perfect for them...

I would love to see this play out in the show this way !!!

👏👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

res

YES

YYEESS

i was promised mushy and i got that and then some...

this was super duper awesome, since when i asked you for a mushy one, i had pictured this in mind: krazy stubborn, byper khushi and angry, loving, protective lard gorvernor.

zehra... i have to say it again... its your writing style: simple,clean and oh so eloquent... your jiji has MAJOR competiton...

and the ending...😆😆😆 whttay surprise... well not really considering koosie's hyperctive nature... bt i kept going back and firth reading' am i missing something here' but the ending was like 'oh ofcourse, its a plaster...' the real deal is yet to come...

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M thnk u sud continew this ya? whn asr gets da plaster n he runz around wid a-man?

TFS

RES

will add more if i can...in uni right now, this was the perfect distraction from ancient greek history😉😆

*off to reread*

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bwaahahahahah the fracture gets me awl da tym... like seriously..i felt like a dolt, but that judt means you are awesome...

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@ar_sajan4evr

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Posted: 12 years ago

Fracture..lolzz
n here i was thnkng dt shz pregnant ;))
N ASR part 2 😆
bdw realy nyc 😊

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SyedaFaiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

HAD HO GAI

WAQI HAD HO GAI

I MEAN SERIOUSLY SHE WAS N'T PREG

OMG I WAS READING IMAGNING HER AS A 9 MONTH PREG

BUT IT WAS KHODA PAHAR NIKLA CHOHA

ANY WAYS LOVE IT

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coronapsyche

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Posted: 12 years ago

RESWA -
Unreswa*

OHH! Never in my reading I thought it wd be a simple pluster😆
Zehra, tum toh mujhe sach me fool kar dia🤣

when i was readinh I was like - ok! Khushi is pregnant 😃
then in the middle - I was like😲 Thats not what its look like : there must b more to it😳
Then In the last Para- I was like'' What the!! All this drama was only for sme pluster??😛😛😛

ASR part 2🤣🤣
sandwich baan gaye hum😆😆

TOOO GOOOD,BUDDY⭐️⭐️

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nimra21

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hahaha! What a delightful read. Finger fractured? Hahaha, aww Arnav. <3 And, yes I was thinking that our Khushi jee is preggers but you threw a curve ball right at the end that is quickly becoming your trademark. Well done! :D