OS: A Few More Days*Re-posted*

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noclapsplease

@noclapsplease

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Omg!! U really left a very good impression that Khushi was pregnant ..
When doc said "FRACTURE" I was like WHAT?? 😲 😆

I agree with the doc I wonder what Arnav will do when Khushi will get pregnant .. I really wanna see this track.. 😳

Totally mindblowing Os .. LOVED IT 😃

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: masam
RES!

*UNRES*

OMG, Zehra, whattay twistywisty OS!
The pregnancy impression was so easily given and just like that Bah! I swear my jaw dropped 😆
And when the clock stopped ticking, the world stopped rotating and the Raizada's stopped breathing, when Khushi got up to go to her room...I was actually like this 😆

Great OS!

-ditto-🤣

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fffan123

@fffan123

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

What a delightful read. 👏 👏 👏 Loved it absoultely Zehra. Really what would ASR do when she is pregnant.

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

OMG Zehraaa...This OS reallly deserve an Oscar award for the comedy thing...

The way u wrote it was clearly evident that Khushi is pregnant...The questions that khushi asked Anjali and Nani that she is not the first one to have this and the way Arnav scooped her in his arms always just made me beleive that Khushi is pregnant, but the comedy masala that u added at the very end the fracture of her little finger that tooo not even limb, just a finger was fantablous...Superb skill...aap aapkaa dimaaag mein kaunsa chemical use karthe haiii to write such beautifullly...Thoda humein bhi bataa dooo naaa...

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MKyara

@MKyara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

hahahahahaha...lol
GOSH all the while i was wondering tht Khushi actually was pregnant...hehe...where finally it ended up with her little finger being fractured...hahahah...DAYM MANN u ROCK!!!

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

LOL omg i thought she was pregnant - love how unpredictable u are
Ahahaha ASR part 2 :D

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

i loved loved loved loved this one Zehra...d whole part n esp end was super good😊 waiting to see something like this on d show...an over protective Arnav for his Khushi...that wil be a treat to watch!

n my fav part is where she continued kissing him... 5 secs... 1 min... lol...😆