FF: It's Not Right - Thread 5: Ch 50 - Ch 53

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

that was beautiful!! so so perfect!!
sigh...i feel exactly as u do about the show...i skipped yesterday's episode...but later downloaded and am still unable to bring myself to actually watch it...
it is a sad state to be in with the show that meant the world to be
before..

reading these FFs..specially the rare ones like this which started around the very beginning of the real show...and to see their perfection being maintained with each twist and turn... the same sense of illusive magic that made the show a rarity retained...
it feels heartbreaking to realize that the show has lost so much charm...while these beautiful perfect stories still have retained that perfection...

this has been one of my favorites from the initial days!
and what a beautiful culmination to their journey...

i would have loved to read about their married life too.. but i don't blame u...it is a beautiful place to stop...a perfect moment in their relationship captured...

wonderfully written just like every single other chapter of this...
thanks for sharing this beautiful story with us, through which we got the chance to think of the 'what could have beens' of the real show..

would look forward to read more whenever u again get inspired enough to get back to writing!!

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Ritika

@WiseGirl

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

That was an awesome ending! I love Dhruv. Even though he's an evil, scheming little kid. But he's just the best. Are you going to write an epilogue? After reading your little note at the end, I don't think you will, but I think you should. Mostly because I'm selfish and want to read more of your writing. I don't really want to wait so long for something from you!

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Beautiful ending to the story. what started with not being the right , in the last it all felt right. Arnav made everything right.
Loved it. Will miss you on the writing. I agree about the show and these FFs are the only hope of ours.
Thank you so much for this wonderful piece.

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

what a fabulous ending!

loved arnavs speech... the way he proposed... khushis reaction...everything!!!

she asked him to become arnav kumari gupta??!!! LOL

loved the story... thanks for writing it!!! your note was a bit saddening but i hope you come back to writing soon :)))

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Drama.Queen

@Drama.Queen

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

I so wished you continued this lovely amazing story of yours.

thanks, hope I get pm for furture FF's :D

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@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

aww it ended 😔

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

perfect ending...

may b love wins in the end

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

I read this on your blog but I'm commenting here :P

What a perfect ending! Of course I wished it would have been longer; but with any of your stories, I've never wanted them to end...but if you're not enjoying the show, fair enough! [Tbh, I am not enjoying IPKKND much at the moment, hope the story improves soon]

I really really hope you'll write some more real soon! I love all your FFs/ SSs and OSs, its always a pleasure to read them, hope we get the chance to read some more from you soon!

Great work, this is one of the best FFs on Arnav and Khushi! Hats off! 👏

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Awww such a sweet ending, the proposal, the kangans, his beautiful words all of it was just perfect. Perfect, and just right!

Beautiful story, all the way, I enjoyed every bit of laughter, mischief, sadness, hurt, pain, love, affection, everything in this story, and the journey to the end was just fantastic!

Sorry I caught up late with the story, and so the late comments.

Thanks for the PMs