FF: It's Not Right - Thread 5: Ch 50 - Ch 53 - Page 55

Ohh, the most perfect and apt ending to an epic story, i can't believe this is over. I have read this from the very first chapter, and i loved it, instantly became attached. I have literally fallen in love with the Arnav and Khushi in this :)

beautiful ending...Nayika,it was my most favourite FF among all ur wonderful creations !!!! 😳😳...i m going 2 miss it a lot !!!! 😛...can I demand a sequel of it ...Is it 2 much??😕

Wow! A proposal to end this FF! Beautiful

That was such a beautiful ending.

It felt so nice to finally see Arnav realise.

Sweet and happy ending.

Its just right.😛😉

Arnav Kumari Gupta, rofl, that was epic!

Beautiful ending! Loved this story so much.

Nayika I read the entire story in one go.

The way you picked a point in IPK and took the story on your path was amazing.

The gradual change in Arnav and Khushi was so enjoyable and believable to read.

All the other characters were holding their own importance too. Though I will have to say I liked how you dealt with Shyam.

Introducing new characters and making readers like them is difficult. Yo achieved that with both Abhi and Dhruv, esply Dhruv.

But I agree with you, you just wrapped it up. I was left wanting for more for Abhi, Anjaili, Dhruv, Arnav's and Khushi's progression in terms of physical intimacy.

Still I can't believe how could I have missed reading a story as entertaining and amazingly written as this.

Thanks

Had lost track of this story. But caught up now...and loved it!! This was such a beautiful story...wish you would have continued some more.

Fantastic story line! Keep going..❤️ =)