FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158)

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

😭😭 At Arnav, Anjali and Nani's pain. Even though the story was mainly for the letters exchanged between Arnav and Khushi, the pain the Razaidas undergo is a crucial stepping stone in changing their lives.
You really have the ability to write such that the reader feels/sees as the character. As Arnav, I felt unbearable pain in my chest as well as shock over the events. 😲But the responsibly as the son of the house is huge as well. Therefore he had to lead his sister back and change to pay respect to their dead parents.
As Anjali I could feel the numbness and disbelief over what just happened on the wedding day. Parent gone...her mother who just helped her get ready now is not there.😒 But life goes on and so must these two siblings!
As for Khushi, it's good to see her take the first step. Now, I see how their letter exchanges begin, even with Arnav tearing the code. Good update!

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

A Sad & Touching update

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Oh my Oh my!! The letter in the excerpt makes a lot of sense now. The idea which Arnav admonished, is going to be his guiding light and eventually his life. The loss of Arnav and Anjali's parents and the way Arnav was beautifully portrayed.

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

beautiful concept...pls make ARHI meet...😃

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Brilliant...love the way the story is developing...this is a beautiful work...thanks for the PM

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

part 6
nice part...
poor Arnav...
cont soon dear...

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

so finally first of the 101 letter written by her...

great...are not u going to show that khushi too got orphaned when she was young???

well if not then its good...

thanks for pm :)

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: xMidnightStarx
Read all the parts so far!
Just love the concept of this SS!!
The pace of the story is awesome and how everything flows nicely together :)
Part 6 was very emotional!
Just can't wait to see Khushi give the happiness back into Arnav's life! :D

Thank you dear! 😊

Originally posted by: meradil
you true have a very gifted writing style where you are able to make readers feel the emotion as opposed to just reading them...

was a great update and provided insight from the 1st part... hopefully we'll see the different emotions arnav goes through after reading his pen-pal letter...

thanks dear.. I'm glad you could connect the dots :)

Originally posted by: pri3love
Very touching. I cried while reading. After reading this now I truly feel when Arnav says that noone can understand how it feels when you lose both your prents at the same time. Now I understand the strong bond between Arnav and Anjali and why he is ready to give everything for her smile.
The story in the show holds so much potential but they never harness it. I had thought when Arnav's past will be shown in the serial, it would be moving. But they made a mockery out of that scene. You have done total justice and this is the first story where Arnav's feelings for his parents' loss have been depicted In such a depth. Hats off to you. You truly are amazing.
I have read all of your other stories and they all are equally good.

aww thank you so much for your lovely words.. I hope you keep you hooked in the future as well! :)

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smitzy

@smitzy

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: masam
What a stirring update. The myriad of emotions is so enveloping. How calmly he tried to pry himself and his sister away from the darkness at the most gloomiest day of their life. So, so touching.

Khushi--start of something new.

Beautifully written.

thanks masam! Lovely comment! and more so because it is coming from such a fab writer like you!

Originally posted by: mrign
Hey really love your story! Making Penpals us to be mysterious and exciting when we were kids...
Love how you have portrayed Arnav and Khushi's character.
And your portrayal of their parents death scene is very touching, beautifully written!

hey there! thanks for loving it so dearly 😊

Originally posted by: Punkin22
What a powerful update. The emotions for Arnav and Anjali were heartbreaking. The anguish was in your writing. Masterful. I can't wait to see letters from Khushi to Arnav. Look forward to your next update. This is a great SS. So different.

hey punkin sweety! thank you so much for the lovely comment! stay tuned 😊