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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

this os is just awesome...one cud literally feel the rain n the monsoon in the first part..the feeling of nostalgia abt the days wen u had someone special is brought out very beautifully...will arnav n khushi ever meet again...or have they been separated by fate again?? really really fantastic...leaves a tug at ur heart...pls do continue this...

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

When are you updating?

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Happy New Year.

Waiting for an update😉

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Hey! please update. Its been quite long now.

And Happy New Year 😊

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arviarshi

@arviarshi

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

nice😊

please continue soon

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Its march already!! When are u gonna update???
Please update soon...
Will be waiting!! Do pm me when u update... 😃

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

such a beautiful beginning :)

love the first rains, playing in rain, my mother yelling at me that first rains are not good ( i have no idea why) and eating chaat in the rain, eating ice cream in the rain.. so many beautiful memories..

there is something beautiful about a picture of man taking care of his daughter. It is one of those things that makes me smile :)

so they were in school together and now they meet after so many years. To think of those high-school crushes we thought would be forever. In some cases it did turn out to be true though..

nice nice :)

-Whimsies

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

this was so beautiful :):)

you have managed to capture every school-going teenager's emotions perfectly. The staring during the assembly, silly fights among the boys to attract the attention of a girl, the teasing. So beautiful that was. I was smiling all the while :) :) :)

you write beautifully :)

apologizing through actions and not words means a lot more according to me. Him coming out to make sure she was okay meant so much more than a sorry :):) aww...

-whimsies :)

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Hola Friends,

So I am finally back, after a long long hiatus. I am sorry, sorry, sorry for a looong break.

And also I apologize for not being active on IF.

Most of you have gotten a PM or a blog notification with the links, but posting this here so the rest of you can get it.

But I would insist you guys, click the Follow button on the blog, so you get regular emails when I update. I will stop PMing once I know most of you have followed me on the blog.

Read the note first -

https://thefirstrainbypanks.wordpress.com/2013/05/12/and-inspiration-struck-suddenly-after-a-long-long-time/

Update - Chap 3 Reminiscence

https://thefirstrainbypanks.wordpress.com/2013/05/12/chapter-3-reminiscence/

Thanks, Pankti

Edited by inspiringstars - 12 years ago

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: suma.2911
this was so beautiful :):)

you have managed to capture every school-going teenager's emotions perfectly. The staring during the assembly, silly fights among the boys to attract the attention of a girl, the teasing. So beautiful that was. I was smiling all the while :) :) :)

you write beautifully :)

apologizing through actions and not words means a lot more according to me. Him coming out to make sure she was okay meant so much more than a sorry :):) aww...

-whimsies :)

Oooh I never knew you are Whims...hahaha!!!

Glad you are liking it, thank you for the beautiful words.