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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 19:

Yet another wonderful update. It was touching the way Khushi introduced him to her parents. Khushi is really crazy yet adorable. She is the only girl who would tell her parents that she couldn't talk to them as she was busy kissing the man she was introducing to them They have not acknowledged each other as their partners neither did they give their relationship a name but still they found solace in each others arms. They know what they mean to each other still they won't admit. But now the cracks are showing up in the walls that they have erected around their hearts in order to protect them. Indeed they are so similar yet so different.
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Chapter 20:


Well that was HOT no doubt. I so loved the nervous Arnav. It was fun watching him all nervous. Even these small things matter to them. If she was not important for him, why would he care whether she liked his cooking or not? The thought he has put into ensuring Khushi's comfort is commendable. Even after all the signals from Khushi's side to go ahead, he stopped himself with great difficulty so that they don't regret it later. He definitely earned her respect there. I absolutely loved Khushi torturing Arnav the way she did. Its not everyday we get to read about Arnav in this condition 😉 😆 Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 21:


Does he not realize why did he bring her home to meet his family? Why did he feel the need to bring her home if he was not interested in a life long committed relationship? He should give these questions a thought. Loved this chapter a lot. It was different from all the previous ones. Loved Anjali-Khushi banter and an embarrassed Arnav of course 😆 He admired the picture Khushi and Anjali created and wants to see that picture again and again. Think ASR why is that so.

And here is the classic one: Till now they have done a lot more than kissing but as soon as they step in to Shantivan voila here comes the interruption 🤣 But Anjali is smart enough to understand something is cooking between them. Mami's charging was insulting but Arnav took the charge. If only Arnav understood what his mami was planning I guess he would've agreed to marry Khushi then and there. Off to read Nani in action 😃
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Originally posted by: RizArshi

Chapter 16:

I could see a fangirl writing the first para 😉 That Neha was too much. But it made me happy when Arnav fell into his own trap. That Neha irritated the hell out of him 😆 So again Arnav proved his honesty by confessing what he did just to keep Khushi around him. Also they confessed that they are special for each other. With this, the question "Kyun Fark Padta Hain?" made a grand appearance. I love the fact that they clear everything up at the first chance they get. The only exception being their own feelings for each other.


I went back to read what exactly I had written. To be honest, the fangirl in me had written a lot more later .. 😆 .. Don't you think I got lost when I wrote about him in black shirt & denim? 😉

I will try not to use too many dialogues from IPK in D4D, which I have done in "Of Lemons & Limes". But Kyun Fadq Padta Hain is an epic one .. something that defines Arnav Singh Raizada's character. So it has to come into play. 😊

About having things cleared between them, I am trying to do a practical story here .. let's see!
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Originally posted by: RizArshi

Chapter 17:


What a fiery kiss it was. Loved the bold Khushi. And seriously Arnav was scoring her while they were in the middle of a kiss that passionate? Is he a man or what? 😆 That part was hilarious. Its funny how Khushi was avoiding him or at least tried doing so the whole evening and now she is the one to complain that Arnav has ruined their romantic moment. Arnav wants Khushi to trust him but he is not sure himself whether he will be able to keep her trust intact. He will of course try not to break her trust. But they are helpless against their desire. Lets see if he indeed succeeds to do that.


@bold & blue: I am ROFLing .. 🤣 .. I am sure Khushi can answer!
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Originally posted by: RizArshi

Chapter 18:

Beautiful chapter. I loved every bit of it. They have opened up themselves to the other unknowingly seeking the other's support. Their desire now is just not about being together physically. Its much more than that. They have taken a step forward in their relationship which they are still to realize. Truly beautiful



Thanks. 😊😳

I personally feel this chapter is one major turning point of the story. It is the first time they have connected with each other at some other level .. seeing beyond the desire that have kind of blinded them .. and also have kept them bound. The next chapters are heavily built on this connection.
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Originally posted by: RizArshi

Chapter 20:


Well that was HOT no doubt. I so loved the nervous Arnav. It was fun watching him all nervous. Even these small things matter to them. If she was not important for him, why would he care whether she liked his cooking or not? The thought he has put into ensuring Khushi's comfort is commendable. Even after all the signals from Khushi's side to go ahead, he stopped himself with great difficulty so that they don't regret it later. He definitely earned her respect there. I absolutely loved Khushi torturing Arnav the way she did. Its not everyday we get to read about Arnav in this condition 😉 😆 Loved it


Told ya! Madam is not going to let him rest! 😆😆

A nervous Arnav .. A chasing Arnav .. A "tortured" Arnav .. A desperate Arnav .. you will get more in this story. This story is about both of them growing up in a growing relationship .. it is more than just feeling the pull and giving in. I hope I can do justice to the plot I had had in my mind when I had started writing it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RizArshi

Chapter 21:


Does he not realize why did he bring her home to meet his family? Why did he feel the need to bring her home if he was not interested in a life long committed relationship? He should give these questions a thought. Loved this chapter a lot. It was different from all the previous ones. Loved Anjali-Khushi banter and an embarrassed Arnav of course 😆 He admired the picture Khushi and Anjali created and wants to see that picture again and again. Think ASR why is that so.

And here is the classic one: Till now they have done a lot more than kissing but as soon as they step in to Shantivan voila here comes the interruption 🤣 But Anjali is smart enough to understand something is cooking between them. Mami's charging was insulting but Arnav took the charge. If only Arnav understood what his mami was planning I guess he would've agreed to marry Khushi then and there. Off to read Nani in action 😃


RM is jinxed .. bas! No kissy missy in RM until you are married! 😉

In the show .. remember .. even their second SR went without a kiss?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti


RM is jinxed .. bas! No kissy missy in RM until you are married! 😉

In the show .. remember .. even their second SR went without a kiss?



There is a reason why Arnav installed the multimedia system in the firm house 😉 Remember he said "Main ghar pe yeh sab nehi kar sakta tha"
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RizArshi



There is a reason why Arnav installed the multimedia system in the firm house 😉 Remember he said "Main ghar pe yeh sab nehi kar sakta tha"


Arnav Singh Raizada and his shaatir dimaad .. 😆

Khali tahole amar mon e edik odik dour dei na .. 😆

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