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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">INTRO</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Kria used to be a kind hearted and introvert girl in her childhood. now she is 18 returning from NY, cousion of swayum. best friend of neha since childhood. the names who are on the top of her revenge list are pia, sharon and taani.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">misses her rockstar very much.
what will happen when she will enter st. louis?</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">and try to erase the LOC?</font>
<font size="5">PS-kria is adopted by swayum's parents she is swayum's dad's daughter her parents died in a plane crash.</font>

<font size="5">plzz like and review</font>




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index
chapter 1- pg 2
chapter 2 - pg 4
chapter 3+4 -pg 6
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

thodi der baad unres kroongi 😃

unress
yay me frst one to cmmnt
yipiiee

nw coming to the topic

awesome concept
jldi nxt part update krna

nd thnx for the pm😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story line do continue and haa pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow. . . .
Superb storyline. . . . .
Pia,sharon and taani r top in her revenge list. . .
Wowww. . . . .
Looks totally intersting. . . . . . . .
Update soon. . . .
Please pm me wen u update. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept..update soon n thnx for d pm
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amazing intro
continue soon n pm me plzz
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nice concept...
update soon...
thnz for pm...
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Kriya ki dushman sharon 😲
vo to hone wali bhabhi hai na 😆
waiting 4 rockstar? . . . . Rey? 😛
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Nyc update pia sharon and taani kriya's hit list but whr is rey nyc concept update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so here comes the first part do like and review

Part 1

A beautiful girl entered the gates of st Louis she was looking simple yet stylish.

All boys were drooling on her. She rolled her eyes and went in. in the atrium she dashed with a girl and the girl's books fell down. The girl said sorry helped her to pick up books and left without seeing whom she bumped into. She messaged someone that she is here and went to explore the college

On the other hand two boys sitting in boy's locker room talking

Boy 1 received a text and stood up with a jerk.

B1- what the hell

B2- what happened swayum

Sw -she is here

B2- u mean baat cutter

Sw- yes rey

Re- what but she was coming next week

Sw- what about the weakling dazzling drama

Re- problem ho jaayegi

Sw- we need to find her

Back to the girl (the girl 1 is kria)

kria was exploring the college when she heard girls talk

Girls- diva is in the auditorium insulting weaklings

That reverse English girl I pity her. What's her name?

Neha malhotra c'mon let's see the drama diva must be insulting all

Kria thinking neha means maybe neha how dare any one insult her I should follow these girls

The girls entered auditorium

There neha was standing with he head down and a girl insulting her

She recognized neha in seconds

She was boiling with anger

Kr- how dare you

She walked to the stage and pulled neha in a tight hug

Ne- kria but coming u after a week

Kr- if u don't like I can go back

And they continued talking

Sh- how dare you. You bloody weakling

Kria showed her hand gesturing to stop

Kr- no one ever dare to insult my best friend who the hell are you

Sharon started faking laughter

Sh- this weakling ur best friend but u seemed like a dazzler

Kr- you are a nobody to judge that

They started fighting . till now the whole college came to know about the fight and reyam also reached there.

They said in unison girls

Sw- kria

Kr- who the hell she turned sam

Sw came and stood between Sharon and kria

Kria pulled him in a tight hug

Kr- god u know what I hate you

Sw- what now only u hugged me and now u is saying u hate me

Kr- u have not contacted me from 48 hours 15 minutes

Sw- what!! Sowieee holding his ears

Sharon was just boiling seeing the closeness between them.

Sh- who the hell is she swayum

Kr- who the hell are u to ask sam who am I and

FYI I am kria'. kria shekhavat

Sharon mouth fell open in shock

Kr- close ur mouth if u don't want flies in ur lunch she chuckled and hi-fied neha

Will u tell me who the hell are you?

Sh- I am Sharon rai prakash swayum's gf

Now it was kria's turn to open mouth in shock

Sh- close ur mouth if u don't want flies in ur lunch she hi- fied simmi

Kria's expression says that she can kill him any moment. swayum gulped hard.

Sw-(thinking- sw kuch kar agar tujhe apni jaan pyari hai toh ummm idea) there's someone else u should meet

Kr- don't tell me its pia and she rolled her eyes

Sw stepped aside rey was behind him

Seeing rey kria's anger flew away

Kr- rock star u also study in the same college sw never told me nor neha neither u I hate u all and she kept blabbering all this while rey was trying to speak but baatcutter is baatcutter

He hugged kria tight. After a while he pulled back

Rey- I missed u a lot baatcutter

Simmi- baatcutter how sweet she whispered to Sharon but got a glare from her

Kr- I missed u too rey

Sh- agar tum logon ka reunion khatam ho gaya ho to classes ke liye chalein

Kr- I will see u later miss rai prakash

She walked from there giving attitude to Sharon

Sh- kria shekhavat Sharon ko attitude I am impressed

Simmi- she is surely a dazzler

Both left from there

IN CLASS

Kria was sitting with neha she introduced her to vishakha , bharat and amar . a seat was empty beside Sharon for rey

Rey came in with nilesh Vicky and swayum

Nil- check out the girl sitting with reverse English dude she is hot

Vicky- dude don't call her reverse English her name is neha meri deewani

Re- dude she is swayum's sis

vi- sorry yaar hume nahi nahi pata tha

Rey saw the sitting arrangement and was confused where to sit

There was a seat empty beside Sharon as always and a seat behind kria with vishakha

Rey- swayum zara idhar aa

Rey pulled sw out of the class

Rey- dude mujhe baatcutter ke saath bethna hai par neha aur Sharon

Sw- ahem ahem

Re- dude help karne ke liye bulaya hai tease nahi

Sw- ok I will handle that

Swayum carefully called neha out of class without Sharon noticing them

Rey rushed and sat with kria

Neha saw and understood the whole situation she smiled at swayum and sat with vishakha

Swayum sat with Sharon finally Sharon noticed him after talks with simmi

KRIYANSH

Re- hey rey said distracting her from the book

Kr-hi

The professor came and started teaching his boaring lessons.

Rey was not at all interested in the lessons an was lost in HIS baatcutter

He was deep in his thoughts of kria he knows that he like her he also knows that somewhere she also like him I just can't propose her it may affect our friendship. Coming out of his thoughts he wrote a chit for kria

Kria opened it and read

Baatcutter I m bored

-rey

She glared at him wrote something and gave it back

Rey smiled and read

GET OUT OF CLASS

- KRIA

Rey- what

Professor- reyaansh any problem

Re- no sir

He again started writing something on board

Rey again passed a chit to kria

Kria read that and blushed remembering the moment

Do you think our first meet was romantic?

-rey

Rey thinking seeing kria shekhavat blush wow *smirks*

Kria passed the chit to rey answering maybe

Rey in the next chit asked her for coffee

And the bell rang before going rey asked her for answer

Kr- sorry rey but neha is coming for a sleepover at my house so maybe next time

PRECAP- rey in kria room:o

Edited by sharuKR - 12 years ago

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